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Static Shock is a freedom loving Pegasus with truly no bonds. But as events cause a new meting with a mare he forms a tie to try and teach her to fly. But will she teach him something greater? (for better visualization of static use my avatar.)
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There have always been (and will be) stories with romantic twist between an OC and sompony from the Mane 6. And since there is such a large number of these, you're going to have a tough job proving that your take on such relationship is unique. Take it slow, keep in mind they've just met, don't rush things. Also, how is Sugarcube Corner a good place for learning to fly high? You see, it's a perfect place for dates, but we've all seen it before. Find something that hasn't been done before to make your story unique.
Technical thingy: from the fifth paragraph onwards text has no longer indentations on the left. And capitalize those names! It's Static Shock, no static shock. And I'm not sure Fluttershy's eyes are green at all. More like cyan, I think.
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Thank you. I understand that it's something done by EVERYONE but I think I might be able to take a new spin to it. At first i considered making them meet at the town hall (maybe even on top of it) but i fell like having them just meet outside of the sugarcube corner might just work out a little bit better. I was going to let the relationship be very slow, they were both going to teach each other a new perspective before anything gets to the truly romantic level (maybe 6-10 chapters in?) and as for the names and indention I am sorry. I know that it's no excuse but my computer refuses to capitalize anything even when I tell it to (the joys of Chromebook) and fails to carry over my story right (I copied and pasted from a document). I like to write my story before my title. but thank you for you comments and hopefully I will have another chapter next week and I will try my best to actually get the indention and names right. and her eyes are classified as "Mountain meadow" a very light hue of green but I'll probably change it to cyan. Thank you again
>>>EDIT: I will begin the next chapter immediately so long as writers block doesn't strike i should even be able to pump out the next chapter today.
Them Feels!!!!
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Thank you :) i really wanted this scene to be good. I'm glad you liked it
"foalish"
love it, just love it