A new shop opens up in Ponyville that sells a hot new product that will give you dreams. Ash a hot shot alchemist and his draconequus assistant Pepper give them the dreams they always wanted, for a price of course.
Ash a recent graduate of the School for Gifted Unicorns follows his dreams of opening his own shop. Baring the talent of magic itself, it was only right that he be judge by high standards that came with it. How will things fare when he finally meets the unicorn he had been compared to his entire life, while constantly falling short being judged as ‘Second Best’.
Pepper loves her father, Ash whom hatched her. Now that she is finally free of the rigorous duties of being his assistant. She wanted nothing more than to go to school for herself. Her goal? To learn, have fun and above all else: make some friends.
Being a creature of chaos though has its draw backs, especially when she meets a certain red stallion that catches her eye.
Well, this looks promising.
Wow, i loved the detail. You had me rolling at the end there man, where can i get some of the dream dust lol.
Pepper sounds adorable, I cant wait to see where you go with this. +1
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Interestfstnig peremisise.
OK this is beginning to irritate me.
Promising...although you might want to correct your grammar.
Tracked all the same.
dont do drugs kids. nuff said.
Okay, that's it.
Shoot for the stars not your wrists crack and wack and all that shit
2024431 What's irritating you?
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Seriously, are you all retarded? Just from the description alone you can see what happens. Its nothing more than a simple OC x Twilight Fic that just strokes the ego of this half-wit author. I don't need to read the story to downvote this crap.
2025673
...there's something called improving something,darling. Ever heard of it?
Additionally, isn't the meaning of this show to promote the kindness to help someone improve, the generosity to use your time to help, the honesty to give a proper critique to help, and the loyalty towards humanity to never be biased about something and dislike for no reason?
...and what was that term? "Retarded"? Do you know what the word even means?
It refer to the poor souls who had their processes of birth malfunctioning, those who have a high chance of getting bullied, those who may never be happy. Because this world is full of filth, filth that certain individuals are trying to clean.
If you think that just because we promote peace gives you the right to insult a person who writes something because they love to do so then you are sadly mistaken.
You are very lucky that we are mostly forgiving, for a transgression such as that may not make your time here pleasant.
Now please leave, dear Sir or Madame, and have a happy day.
2024970 you too, huh?
2025398 I keep getting notifications involving KoS when I stopped following him a while back.
2025959 Ah... Well, try following him again, then unfollow later, maybe that'll work? And if it doesn't, talk to the mods or an admin or something, see if they can figure it out.
2025769 No what i am saying is that this story has no good premise and its getting popular, just like the crappy fucking Mary Sue Story. I am just pissed off that this hack author write gets the fucking feature list ever time he writes something that has zero quality to it. Seriously its not fucking fair to the authors that actually try to write a decent story.
How the fuck does this only have 2 Downvotes
2026090
It is but the one dark side the the coin due to the massive amount if people on this site, but at least they are trying to get all the stories published.
I repeat: the authors are not at fault, blame the moderators. Even better, don't blame them and continue on with your life and do something more productive than comment hatefully on innocent users' fiction and risk getting flamed. Please do heed this piece of advice, it's the best course of action.
It's decent, and that is why it is popular, and the writers on this site is not at fault for the admittedly bad system, that is the mods fault, but even so I do not blame them.
...additionally, there's another thing called "taste". Not everyone likes one thing, so please have the common sense to respect others' tastes of fiction.
2025673 Oh, I'm sorry for enjoying something that you don't. I mean, clearly, you are an important authority on fan created literature. From now on, I'll defer to your judgement on all fanfiction ever.
2024341 Thank you ^_^
2024431 You can never leave, ever.
2024681 ^_^ Drug are bad mmkay.
2024970 Once a squirrel follower, always a squirrel follower.
2025769 Just ignore the trolls, they seem to always pop out when i write stories.
2027585 mmkay mister kingofsquirrelz
Silver: you are not seriously gonna start this.
Me: if you dont like it retreat to the depths of my subconscious and hide there.
Silver: no i dont like it there. its creepy
Me: then deal with it
Does anybody know why this refuses to go away from my "unread favorites" list even though I read the only chapter?
2028991 Its such a great chapter you need to read it again.
2027585
It was merely a rare case where I felt like I should remind them of which site they are on.
Are you too busy to continue this story? Because if you're not I would love to see how this plays out