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I am not quite sure what I have read.... But I kind of like it....
We need this but with other ponys, NAOW!
2722141 you're icon is too true....
OK..........what in the name of all that is mighty, good and logical is this?.......I.........I dont even.......I mean, wut?.........im sorry it was just so......strange.....and weird.......and I kinda liked it........it sure was interesting, good job!
The most peculiar clop I have read, somewhat disturbing in a way but hey...it was interesting
So this will be my first ever comment on a clop fic. It takes a fic a LOT of work to make me sign in just to comment so you can see why this is a big deal. Anyway, back to the story. This was definitely a very interesting twist to a clopfic. I originally thought it was just going to be about unreal fantasies but I was very intrigued when the human gives away the fact that this isn't all in his head and these plushies actually turn into the real thing. I absolutely love the idea. And something that I found out during my clopfic escapades, ALWAYS BLAME REDIGAR. That is all. Happy writing! ^-^
Something blunt and nice to say to express the tasty pleasures of a good clopfic: Nice.
ok. I'm not sure if I enjoyed this. someone please help
I don't think I understand what my brain just read me...
The writing was good, but how the hell did you think of this?
I'm not insulting you; I'm genuinely interested in how you thought this up.
Well it was strange but well written.
I must agree with the latest comment.
No, I sure am not a prude and I may enjoy some good clop when I see it, but this...
Okay, I'll try to be professional here.
First of all, I've mentioned a lot of details. Details and details. Sure, they make the whole story feel more complete and volumetric, but sometimes they simply overload it. It is well-written, of course, I can't blaim, but... Well, for a one-shot this could be less details.
Second. The characters. Good thing is that you've stepped off canon of "human in Equestria" and made a piece of "ponies and humans", but the way you did it - is pretty awkward. Compared with famous 'My Little Dashie', which is, to my mind, a bit too sappy, you've done quite the contrary. And this sounds nice.
Third, of characters again. You've shifted the personalities a bit, from how they are shown according to some 'canon' I don't really know as I am new to the fandom and fanfiction of it, But well, the personality of Tyler is pretty blank, opposing to the ponies, which is okay for one-shot, but it could've been a bit more... eidetic.
Now for the cons. Of course, the whole set of the story - the 'closet brony' and his plushies - is pretty... unusual, at that angle you've shown. Bestiality, mixed thick with the magic, makes me feel like this Tyler here has got some mental disorder, making him see things. I beg pardon for all those who may find my words offensive, no offense meant.
Starring next piece of criticism: homosexual motives. This is something I will not accept. Especially depicted that boldly.
All in all, this is truly a 'legit' one-shot, but nevertheless - dear author, what made you write this one?
I am sorry, but I downvote this one. Maybe I am too conservative or maybe I don't see the forest behind the trees - you be the judge. And remember, that truth is subjective.
Captain Hawkri, out.
So weird, but so hot! I love it!