A plush doll is always comforting. It's warm, fuzzy, cuddly, and calming. But what happens when it comes to life?
Jacob is about to find out when he wishes that his Luna plushie was real...
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Uhh... I got mixed feelings about this...
I like this story, especially the beginning.
But this story is a bit novice, everyone has to start somewhere, this comment is not meant to be negative.
Some dialoges were ... a bit theater-like.
Still i like the idea of this story and it will be added to my daydreams for this i thank you.
Beautiful... this... this touched me more than My Little Dashie. Manly tears have been shed. Thumbs up and favorited.
Too rushed
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I agree with this guy. This was beautiful, but still needs work. Still needs that one push. Ahh... If only things like this can happen in life :P
This story was quite the mix, and it was definitely interesting. Glad I caught it up in the stories that I've been reading. Absolutely beautiful.
MFW
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not sure if
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The beginning was great. Kinda creepy, but hey. I'd be lying if I didn't want to hug a Luna plushie every night
The end was... Well, it wasn't expected that's for damn sure. I don't know how I'd react if that happened to me...
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) i wanted a plushie, something to hold, something to cuddle, something to snuggle with while i'm sleeping.
Yeah, if every persons thoughts would be known by psychiatrists then the whole world would be in an asylum.
Ever since i've been a brony (almost a year
Dis seems familiar to me.... anyone know why?
1092621 *wink wink*
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Well, this was fun. Now to try it myself. Btw, on an unrelated note, I loooove sharp things. I am practicing the art of the throwing knife. Celestia's horn can curse by stabbing, so I am gonna have fun with a cursed weapon like that. Maybe... a demonic spear?
1092651 Found my controllers, BTW. I hope you have good dreams about this story. :)
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Had a wierd dream last night. It can be considered disturbing, but I am a soulless creature, so I can't be disturbed. I don't know what to tell you.
1092607 I know. Having a life size plushie/real Twilight Sparkle would probably put me in a mental institution. Not to mention my room mates would never let me hear the end of it
1092655 I really liked this story. It brought a smile to my face
Well, that was... strange.
Certainly not a bad story at all, but it was definitely... strange. Especially that ending, which came out of nowhere and didn't really much sense. I suppose it was well written overall, but it felt sort of rushed.
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Still... nice story.
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I've cried at so many sadfics, that I can hardly cry anymore at these kinds of stories. All I feel is tears slightly welling up in my eyes, but nothing else happens.
Anyways, this goes well with listening to Conterto for a Rainy Day.
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Screw people i am getting a plushie, but i think i'l take one pillow sized nothing too big just a well made plushie to hold while sleeping.
1092785 Atta boy. Hey, story has its ups and downs, but nothing beats cuddling with a warm plushie
1092785 Good man. I shall forever sleep in envy of you
1092791 as will I
(It is at this point after posting that I learn how squished my paragraphs look. Therefore, I am using ponies to help space them.)
The story wasn't necessarily bad -it was actually pretty good- but personally, I felt it left a lot to be desired. It was heartwarming and touching, and it made me think of how all forms of life (and non-life, like balloons!) seem to have an unerring attraction to the warm and fuzzy. It's mostly what led up to the resolution that was bothersome. Celestia acting the way she did seemed too out of character and contrived that it forced a wedge in my view of the story and totally wrecked my suspension of disbelief. It might have been acceptable had Jacob walked in just as Celestia appeared, so there would be no time for explanations. After all, Celestia has had countless years of experience and wisdom, but she's still only a pony. A divine god-pony, but a pony nonetheless. It's how the entire matter transpired that bothered me.
When Jacob asked if Luna had told Celestia about everything that had transpired between them, and she said yes, it seemed totally ridiculous to me that Celestia would totally disregard that and fly into a blind rage as soon as Jacob entered the room. Then, even after stabbing Luna, she didn't give a second glance, too intent on 'punishing Jacob for the crimes he had committed', and only paying attention to Luna's grievous, cursed wound after Jacob showed concern, first. Also, the fact that afterwards, Celestia just crumpled, completely flipping both state of mind and emotion with hardly any real transition in between made it seem so forced. At that point, I felt as if all you, as the writer, were trying to do, was demonize Celestia, victimize Luna, and glorify Jacob as much as you possibly could.
Combined with the fact that Jacob was in such a blind rage, afterwards that he threw Twilight across the room as she tried to tackle him, it just seems to play into the idea that "Jacob and Luna were meant to be" because apparently, he loved her so much that he didn't care if he hurt anyone. Jacob even pointed out, "I didn’t care about love and tolerance at that moment. Luna was fucking dying." This would make sense, taking into consideration that love and anger make people do... things, if it weren't for the fact that it shouldn't have happened in the first place. Twilight's an accomplished spellcaster and a brilliant mind. We've already seen in the past that Twilight's first reaction to a threat is usually to diffuse it with magic, she trusts her magic over her physical capabilities. The fact that she attempted to confront Jacob physically when he punched Celestia only to be thrown across the room, subsequently vanishing from existence, severely hurt the story in my eyes. The ONLY point of her appearance was to show how irrevocably enraged he was.
Essentially, what's bothering me is how the story seemed so intent on gaining reader sympathy for Jacob, and how Celestia and Twilight weren't even characters so much as they were devices to garner even more of it. The story was told from a first person perspective, and/so, in all seriousness, Jacob talking about seemingly random subjects really did contribute to the story. All his talk about his family and friends, his lost loved ones served to develop him further. It's just that towards the resolution, it turned from trying to convince us, the readers, of a point, it became a matter of wrecking any other interpretation so that yours was the only available possibility. It changed from, "I love Luna and she loves me," with a side of, "Jacob's had it rough," to, "I love Luna so much that her idiot demon of a sister couldn't separate me from her, and she loves me so much that she would die for me. Also, Twilight's pretty useless," all with the overbearing message of, "Jacob suffered like Luna, that's why they're meant to be," looming over like a dead mother goose. Obviously, that's exaggerated, but in all honesty, that's how I feel the focus of the story shifted.
Also, I can't help but agree with Alien Entity on the ending.
Now, I know that this may all seem a bit harsh, but it's only because I felt this had to be fully addressed. This story had a lot of potential, and it was taken in a good direction. I sincerely enjoyed it, but that's why I felt I needed to type this all out. If I didn't feel it could be done a different way, then I wouldn't have taken the time really explain each issue. In the end, I hope you'll take it into consideration, not by changing this story, but by thinking of it and learning from it for any future writings.
Dear sweet CelestiaxJesus shipping, that was a lot. Anyways, like I said, this was a good story, and while there were some trouble spots, I had fun reading it. Keep up the good work!
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STOP WRITING SUCH GOOD LOOKING STORIES!! You know I don't have time to read any of them. :((((
Should I give you a yes?
YES!
Decent. It was cliche, and completley out of character.
But not a bad read.
You could do well with a romanceless sequel. 
3.7 out of 10. Here is a Big Mac.
Almost drew a tear from me but it was too fast to close.
Still faved.
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Still great story, I really enjoyed it. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
I'm gonna get a Luna plushie. It's a good idea that can't possibly end badly. She won't end up on the Shelf Of Stuffed Animals (yes, it has a name), squished between Bruce The Shark and Mr. Marlborosaur, that's for sure! one week.
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Its not sooo much trouble to get a plushie, Ebay is an option.
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True.
Hehe i didnt expect that i would ever return to plushie's i never was really into them. But Mlp really did change me in a few ways, i'm calmer, more positive and when i'm bored i always have ponies to daydream of.
1093941 I read your review. I wasn't necessarily trying to demonize Celestia, but at this point she is still wary of humans. Remember, she believes them to be savage, and thus she feels as though she as to finish Jacob off before he does anything to harm her sister. When Luna gets stabbed, it throws her out of whack, as it would anypony who just stabbed their own sister.
Nevertheless, your review was good and I thank you for the criticism.
Not the best stories I've read, but still an enjoyable little fanfic. I give it 7/10.
me going to buy luna,twilight,rainbow,and fluttershy plushie now.
this story is so wonderful
oh my god that was brilliant... I'm in tears right now. <3
This crushes My Little Dashie.
1174247 you know... I would actually have to disagree. I think they're both equally wonderful
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Agreed.
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My Little Dashie was good, but I have a personal connection to this story.
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just speaking from my own opinion. if you have a personal connection to this one, that's wonderful. I was meaning that primarily as a compliment to Brexie.
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Nononono, my connection to this story is... well..... Take a guess as to what my real name is. Go on, guess.
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I'm guessing Jacob. Or if you're actually a female, considering I can't really tell just by looking at your profile... Luna?
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Nono, I'm a guy. And yes, Jacob is right.
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Aha! My little cousin's name is Jacob, too. So that's pretty cool.
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Not deep enough. Look, I'm the Jacob in the story. It's based off of me.
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somehow I don't believe you. here, let me go ask Brexie to see if that's true.
It makes me think of the time I wished my custom made plush of Axios would come to life
hey Brexie. go to my Top Favorites list and check out where this one's placed. um, that is, if you want to...
1499076 DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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