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Dat picture
That pro paint bro
2825146 Microsoft Word actually.
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My body is ready
U wot m8?
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2825173 Warning to all others, this video is loud as hell.
Go to potato, moviemaster!
2825173 I am left questioning what I am doing with my life
First impression: AW SHIT SON, CR1TIKAL!
After reading: Meh, could've been better.
You got Cr1tikal's mannerisms, and every other character seems to react to him appropriately, but the story feels like it could have had a little bit more to it. Unless of course your goal was to write just a short little one shotty, in which case, well done. You get an 'A'.
2825268 Yeah, this was also a bit of an experiment to try and write a YouTube personality into a story, and I just watched a fuckton of videos to try and get a nice little quickie out.
You, sir, deserve an Internet for beautifully replicating the man that is Cr1tiKal in an MLP setting.
2825275 It was entertaining, to say the least. Wasn't the worst one shot I've ever read, nor the best, but I liked it.
Thumb and fave for ya.
We need a new internet rule. If it exists, it has been included in a MLP fanfic.
ALTERNATE ENDING DEMANDED!!!! one where Cr1tiKal gets laid
This guy is a youtuber? Just want to make sure.
2825764 I'll provide a link in the description.
Ahh, my favorite youtuber in the the land of Equestria. Perfect :)
I really did like how you captured the way he usually talks while playing games. Very funny!
2825149 This is the best fanfiction of all time.
Fuckle your seat belts, it's going to be a bumpy ride.
I am literally speechless. And breathless. And probably pantless (though I can't be certain).
+1
Oh god you did Cr1tiKal perfectly for this.
2827203 You should change the video. That one doesn't even start with, "Let's do this shit." Do one of his online chat ones; I drew the most inspiration from those.
2827472 2825764
better?
damn. you nailed cr1tikal down exactly!
bravo!
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Wow... just... wow... that was... just wow
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Thanks, just want to make sure so I can add to a group.
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Thank you Applejack! ^c ^
Just the fact that its a critikal reference is amazing
2921193 I just can't believe I'm the only one who's written a Cr1TiKaL crossover.
2959014 I literally might be the second, if its ok with you that is idk. Maybe depends on how lazy I am
Continue, and do a chapter 2, and show their reactions when he respawn's in front of them like a friggin phoenix boss! Just an idea!
Hehehe, you got me. I was snickering through the whole thing. This sounds just like what he would say
Well squeeze the milk from my titties, this was fucking brilliant.
the video
Nice games you play...
But your charisma in this was in the minus degree...
XD
But perfect Cr1t.!
So you get 200 % damage amplifier so I would give 5 of 10
;-)