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Duelist96
Retired writer of almost anything. Lover of RariDash and background ponies.
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Question are they anthro or human ?
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They are still in their pony form.
2772330 oh I was confused cause you mentioned hands with Twilight and Pinkie
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Thank you for pointing that out. I will get that fixed right away.
Great stuff! Some run on sentences and several typos, but nothing too severe. That's in my opinions at least, and it didn't really keep me from enjoying this chapter
Chapter's a little short for someone to be murdered so quickly, but still liked it
Can't wait for your next update
This is some good stuff! You know this is the second time I'm reading this fic? Can't wait for more of your stories to come out
x10
So can the next chapter just come out now?
You working on any other stories?
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Not currently working on them but have already have them planned out and the next chapter is probably going to be the last just because the way I have everything worked out. You should check my blog on the other two stories that I will be making next.
This is me reading your story
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I think I've made it clear
i am sorely tempted to make an animation of this chapter
. . . but i do not know how to animate
. . .
. . . and i guess that means i must learn how to animate!
Edit: i have skimmed over a guide on how to animate, and have committed myself(mostly) to creating this animation. expect it within a few months, hopefully.
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I will be interested in seeing this.
3967535 Will you put some Flashlight in this story?
4256891 I'm sorry but I can't. This story is completed and this was more of an understanding on how the site works for the future stories I write. I am sorry for any inconvenience this causes.
4257845 Woops didn't see the complete tag, mt bad. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?
4257887 Sure.
For a first fic this is pretty well written and you've got a one of my OTP's (AppleDash) as well so that's an added bonus for me. There are a few errors but that's expected, all in all it's a good story and I can't wait to read more.
You do have like two projects to finish first bro.
UUUUUGH ELI WHY DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHING?
As your honorary bro it's my job to make your life miserable.
~Sylph and Eli
4296055 Yeah it's about to become three projects but I have each one focused at different times.
I say it was the baker! He must have procured a knife from his stash of baking goods and used it to kill Cheerilee. It makes all team more sense because Pony Joe is so close to the casle that he must know all of the goings on of the castle.
You're reading too much into this. An insignificant character died and there's a note, don't jump to conclusions.
I'll do whatever I please.
WOAH THERE FRIEND, it's like somebody just walked up in here with a revolver and started blasting faces off.
That did escalate quickly, but in a good way. I think. What I mean to say is that I enjoyed the gore and I give you a thumbs up on it.
Wait, he's still alive? I didn't expect that. I was honestly like 90% sure that he was dead, just like Chrysalis.
They're all dead.
Just like those one guys from Don't Hug Me, I'm Scared.
No, staph.
HAH, take that Sombra. I never did like him.
Out of all of the villains he's the only one you hate.
Because he had no reason to do what he did! Chrissy at least had a reason. She was only trying to feed her family. And Discord is just Discord, he essentially lives on chaos and would die without the energy of chaos (headcanon inserted)
Everything has ended okay and I am pleased and surprised, I half expected more to die throughout this.
This isn't one of your stories Sylph, not everyone has to die.
Whatever man.
4334802 multiple personality disorder?hmmmmm.
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Um, no? Who ever said I have MPD? I'm just a 15 year old reviewing (if you can call it that) fan-fiction with a friend. I would appreciate it if you wouldn't jump to conclusions so as to suggest I require hospitalization.