After all the hardships that everypony has gone through to save Equestria no pony has ever felt love. Now with Equestria safe can everypony finally express their love, even if somepony is hiding a dark and terrible secret.
Great stuff! Some run on sentences and several typos, but nothing too severe. That's in my opinions at least, and it didn't really keep me from enjoying this chapter
For a first fic this is pretty well written and you've got a one of my OTP's (AppleDash) as well so that's an added bonus for me. There are a few errors but that's expected, all in all it's a good story and I can't wait to read more. You do have like two projects to finish first bro. UUUUUGH ELI WHY DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHING? As your honorary bro it's my job to make your life miserable. ~Sylph and Eli
Question are they anthro or human ?
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They are still in their pony form.
2772330 oh I was confused cause you mentioned hands with Twilight and Pinkie
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Thank you for pointing that out. I will get that fixed right away.
Great stuff! Some run on sentences and several typos, but nothing too severe. That's in my opinions at least, and it didn't really keep me from enjoying this chapter
For a first fic this is pretty well written and you've got a one of my OTP's (AppleDash) as well so that's an added bonus for me. There are a few errors but that's expected, all in all it's a good story and I can't wait to read more.
You do have like two projects to finish first bro.
UUUUUGH ELI WHY DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHING?
As your honorary bro it's my job to make your life miserable.
~Sylph and Eli