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>that fetish list
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That warning
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Holy balls
2662885 More of a "content list", but I can get what you mean heh
2662986 (read above comment I made)
That's a nice long author's note but what's the plot?
Too much sex with no plot. It's not that interesting just reading about Psychoshy raping again and again, bland and boring.
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It was kind of an incentive, really.
I read a bit out of sheer curiosity towards how you managed to pull it off. I'm going to go for a bit more after I finish writing for tonight.
2663359 ... good point actually, I'll include that when I can tomorrow xD Talk about major
on my part. I get tunnel vision too easily heh.
2663509 That tends to be the main plot for most major popular clopfic writers... but yeah, this has a lot of pointless sex for sex's sake. I kinda went a bit overboard with it, trying to cram in all the shits and giggles that's "neglected" as a whole in the fandom, and sadly the story suffered from it. At a couple of parts, it tried to get a story going, but it kinda fizzles at times. I think as a whole, it got 3-8 solid plot points. But yes, this is in ways a "generic clopfic" in the story context. Though, it kinda does all by be generic in several events and content heh. But yeah, like most clop, it's bland and boring. With some more depth, character play and the like, it could probably have been a incredibly interesting story with very dark parts, but I was too doubtful that I could pull it off, so I instead just went for one of the simpler options sadly.
2663546. Oh, I see heh. I have to say though: Not all of the listed ones happen in the first chapter. It's of all that happens throughout the story.
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"Now ah came lookin' fo' some booty."
Fuck, with her rapist attitude I can't stop envisioning Psycoshy as the booty warrior.
IT'S FUCKING HILARIOUS AND RIDICULOUS AT THE SAME TIME. IT'S SO PERFECT AND I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING.
It's my own fault but I can't take this seriously anymore.
Gee, if I were to describe this story to someone it would sound like how my irish friend explained Project Horizons to me: lots of >rape.
Gonna finally finish this today, though and hopefully give a decent review as to why you've recieved the rating you have. I have a few reasons already, but i'll continue reading.
2704387 Actually not that familiar with that quote heh.
And it's not overly meant to be serious. Only semi-serious. Kinda flip-flops a bit back and forth
Some content is serious, other silly. It's meant to be "walking the line" per say. To what I recall.
And well, it is based of PH, and it was mainly meant to "even out" the lack of female rapists in both PH and FoE.
And that could be nice to hear. And to what I know, I got a couple people that just downvote my stuff by default, because they either dislike me, or don't approve of my content, possibly as it doesn't fit the norm they demand. But also fully aware I also got some people that just don't think I fit the bill in quality and character/story. Those I am however okay with downvoting. I know I got limitations to my quality after all. But they can't come and say I didn't warn them at least.
Anyhow, all that late night rambling aside, do know there's around 600 % more content like this, finished and waiting for proofreading before release hehe.
Hey, you managed to make Psychoshy an interesting character! But seriously, I actually wanted to like her despite how cruel she was.
I don't know if it was intentional or not but she also seemed to be getting a little more compassionate as the story went on. I'd like to think that her innate and repressed kindness was rebelling against the evils of the wasteland and was slowly giving her a conscience, though I'm probably way over thinking it. It'd be fun to see a story with that kind of thing in it though.
The first couple of chapters were rough but things really seemed to smooth out as the story progressed; after chapter three things started getting pretty awesome. And the sex scenes in those last two chapters were crazy hot even if I did want to strangle Brass to death.
3060188 I tried my best to make her decently well rounded, yet accurate-ish of her original intent... or how to call it heh.
And that is actually more or less what it does. As to what I know, she's never been taught compassion really, or anything like that as Sanguine was a narrow minded fuck. I tried to portray her with a lack of understanding for empathy. She got this minimal "barrier" of what she thinks is right and wrong. Which is basically what stops her from outright murdering and raping foals. But the closest she so far "knows" of a conscious is that she feels odd when she does certain things. She gets a strange feeling in her stomach. Same goes for certain other feelings, such as "love", as the only one she was really "allowed" to connect with on a deeper level was Sanguine, and that was in a very odd way. But yeah, she got a bit of that as said. I attempted it at least.
And hum... kinda so-so to hear it was slow/rough at the start. The start is the most important part to have appealing. Though, if the rest is crap compared to the start, people will feel tricked... so it's a kinda hard thing to balance tbh... and oh? Mind if I ask how come you wanted to strangle Brass? xP
2704387 Just giving a random note drop as I was passing by here: Do know the full content has been released now.