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Ah well, if you find it appealing to read about females receiving sexual stimulation from a tight body suit, then go right ahead.
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Seems... interesting?

...But wouldn't that be a huge mood killer when it says "Hostiles detected....Just kidding..."?

Edit:

Oh god I just noticed the picture and the fucking chapter title.

My sides

Not gonna read, but it's certainly an interesting idea. Free thumb-up from me!

I saw several references to male anatomy, so I'm kind of confused here.

1882001 I can imagine that would be quite a mood kill xP

And mind if I ask how come said title and picture made you laugh? :pinkiehappy:

1882155 Heh, thanks.

1882555 Technically not. They are all applicable to female anatomy and does happen to women, it's just not generally "known" or referred too. I generally use them as as said: They are fully correct and legitimate to use, and since pretty much the only female term is "wet", and that would be waaay too boring to only use.

1886757 I figured you had to have some idea what you were saying, but I have never heard or seen anyone use those words to refer to female anatomy, even in slang.

1886757 Well, the fact that you applied a phrase commonly used in children's toy commercials made me laugh.

Also, if you look at the picture you can see the outline of the suit pressing closely against her vag along with that general area being rather wet. It looks like there's a vibrator in there too.

And you reminded me of the suit in big MT's constant little quotes.

I just realized that what the suit was saying about panicking amounted to "If you scream, I'm going to crush every bone in your body"

1887543 As said, it's rarely ever used. Mostly due to female anatomy seemingly rather rarely be even expressed in detail. Often just tend to be very vague in general. Especially in porn. At least to what I've noticed on average. But yeah, do know each and every term I use is applicable anatomy wise. For example: Women can get erections as we have erectile tissue. It's shaped a bit like a wish bone. One part is the clitoris, then one on each side of the vulva.

(lower comment) Technically not what it meant, but yes, it could have meant that, thus why Xanthe was so scared at the time.

1887550 Well, I have a partially bad habit of including comedy in all I do xP

As for the picture, the fic was partially based on the pic, and vice-versa :derpytongue2: it started as a joke in the PH forums as said. And yeah, her vulva is partially visible through the suit.

And "big MT's"?

1888341 Big MT, (AKA Big Empty) from the 'old world blues' fallout new vegas expansion. It's a massive crater housing scientific research facilities and experiments. The stealth suit MK 2 is what this suit is based off of, and it's from a certain mission you have to complete.

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Comes complete with dialogue as well when you equip it.

1888725 Ah, okies. I didn't have any of the "add-ons/DLC's" for NV. Not really finished the game... I trailed off too often heh.
I think the suit in the fic is based of that suit.

1888836 Well yeah it's identical aesthetically as well as apparently having the same personality as the one in New Vegas

1888856 Well, FoE+PH is based of Fo3 and NV so... xP

1889046 Well yeah I knew that.

It just kind of disappointed me when I read about Canterlot in Fallout: Equestria. It was cool that they were using the Sierra Madre idea, but it was a bit disappointing that they followed it so closely.

1890002 I honestly don't know about the Sierra Madre, at least not what I can recall :twilightsheepish:
But yeah, I was a bit dissapointed on a few parts in FoE, and quite a lot in PH heh.

1891235 Well the concept of sierra madre is different than Canterlot, that's for sure. But Canterlot took: Pink cloud, canterlot ghouls (which are 'ghosts' in sierra madre and in my opinion are quite a bit creepier/cooler), and the emitters from sierra madre without changing much besides the name of the cloud (Red cloud=pink cloud). But eh, just my opinion that it followed too closely.

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(Beautiful) sierra madre (you can't really see the cloud but whatever)platformnation.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/Dead-Money-Sierra-Madre.jpg

1891354 Oh, those things. I've heard of them, but didn't know they came from that place. You had to de-limb them for them to die yes?

1891997 Yup, pretty much the same thing as FO: E except Kkat dulled it down a bit. I mean c'mon, motherfucking beartrap gloves and gas masks.

1892005 Yeah, it was a bit "dulled down" xP Was the "gas" in the town as deadly in the game btw though?

My main "meh" about FoE though was the lack of female rapists to a degree. And some other things I forgot right now... xP

1892239 Yeah the gas killed you after a certain time of exposure, and the emitters blew off your head through your slave collar.

And yes, there needed to be some female rapists in the story...

...although that wouldn't REALLY be "rape"...

1892371 Ah, okay. I see. If I could get around to it, trying those DLC's out sounds quite neat.

Yeah, for a pre-matriarch wasteland with ruthless murderers, canibals and whatnot, it's an awful lack of females willing to rape others...

And how so? Dunno if you know, but I've baddled in the topic in a few stories before.

1894503 Well >rape implies that the victim is unwilling, and I really don't think a stallion would mind being forcibly held down by a mare for RECREATIONAL sex (maybe that's just me).

Unless she had a strapon...(if that's not your fetish)

Or looked like this24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m555jwnKlH1rvdzobo1_500.png

1895704 Not to sound rude, but you really don't know that much about rape on males then. Firstly, who'd say she'd want him (or if even a him) to give penetrative sex? They could want oral. Secondly, who'd say she'd be gentle (like portrayed in one of my fics), quite a few males I've asked were the most worried that if they got raped, she'd hurt them. (that, and sue them for rape or that she'd get pregnant, but neither of those would really be a concern in the wasteland) Thirdly, who says she'd stop once the male came? Nor, who says she'd be alone? What if there was three of them, and each one wanted an hour of banging? If he'd give in after half an hour, and it started to hurt, they wouldn't give a fuck, why would they? It's his problem, not theirs. Overall, unless they'd rape him for the sake of being inseminated, his orgasm is not even important. Nor his pleasure. And in case you'd say "he'd go limp". No, if constant stimuli is applied, males generally have hard to go flaccid, along with: there are ways to go around that.

Hope I didn't sound too... "rough" I guess, but yeah... all men would not be willing at any time to have sex with a woman. (just counting straight men for this, since majority of gay ones "does not count" in terms of referring to "willing". I think part of it is that (again, no offence) the males on the "willing" side kinda overlook this factors, along with not seeing their "rapist" as unappealing. It might be possible it is a "repulsive" female doing the deed. But yeah... just keep it in mind. It's actually quite a bit of a concern irl, not as much as female rape ofc, but it's still there. And most victims of it simply feel too ashamed to say anything.

1898161 I know what my comment came off as, I often jokingly mention female rape on males to not be much of a big deal (although it is) only because men love sex.

Though I think in certain countries it's not really something you can actually report to the police if you're a guy and a female forces herself onto you. I think the cops just laugh, don't do anything or call bullshit because men are generally thought of to be stronger than women. It's probably only in countries like Uzbekistan or something though.

1898210 Well, I got autism, combined with generally being bad at knowing if someone is "serious" or not. If it seems I reacted (too) strongly, that was not the case. I generally tend to be know to "overdo" it, so it seems like I am more "upset" than I actually am. Which might be none at all at times.

Anyhow. Yeah, I know it is a problem in that sense too. That the police will just laugh at it as it's seen as "silly" due to the gender norms. And why so many in our time are ashamed to even mention it. As it is shown as so "weak" to be beat by a "feeble little girl". But blah, there's a ton wrong in the world. And not too much is being done about it sadly...

Ah, well that sucks to ACTUALLY have autism. The only thing wrong with me is a low tolerance for bullshit, and a fucked up sense of humor. If you ever see me mention that someone's autistic, it's not referring to their mental disposition, but generally to shit like this
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"Brony autism"
which is literally fucking painful for me to deal with.

Also: I'm looking for a few pre-readers when I start writing soon and my friend's a dick as usual so if you're interested I may have use of you. It's not really editing, I just need people with varying >opinions to tell me what they thought about X part in my story and how to improve things/ what they liked. I can't really get feels/ immersed in my own writing at all for some reason so I need feedback from a few people.

I'll stop clogging up your comments now.

1899391 Been told a few times I should stop "pretending to have it as a shield", no idea what they mean by it, especially not when I generally mention it in places where it is relevant. Mainly shows of ignorance I guess, or that they simply want to hurl insults. I've seen people actually use bad "shields" though. Trailing off here, but this one person I was having a argument with was using terrible reasoning and bible logic loops, and then just from out of nowhere went "I'm pregnant! How can you say that to me?" and a pile of morons jumped to their aid naming me the bad guy, DESPITE it being clear if you read the prior comments that they were the douche and the ones making the insults. Ah well, trailing off again.
Anyhow, can't say I've seen that type of stuff around before. Possibly since I was busy elsewhere in the fandom, but that was quite a bit "wat"?

And I could possibly do that. Depending on content and length. But I can relate to that. Have really hard to check my own stuff, mostly since I'm a bit "blind" to errors as I need the pointed out to me.

And that might be an idea, we kinda filled this comment section up xD

1882001

> ...But wouldn't that be a huge mood killer when it says "Hostiles detected....Just kidding..."?

I believe the phrase you're looking for is 'ladyboner killer'. :D Happy to help!

Tu nidor piscis = Smells like fish Ha Ha:rainbowlaugh:

2479457 Seems like that joke was actually something someone looked up :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Opaciity deleted Apr 28th, 2013

2485389 Yeap, it was a great little comedy :raritywink: was a great short fic, even know there was clop. mostly looked at it beacuse it was horisons related. im glad i did too i loved it :pinkiehappy:

2494000 Heh, glad to hear that :3 It started as a joke in the PH forums, then derailed into a full on fic xP Thanks for the compliments.

Also, noticed you deleted a comment above, and even though I don't know what it was, I can mention: You do know there's a "edit" button right? :derpytongue2:

2495913 And knowing is half the muffin!

This is awesome and deserves views. Lots.

2576369 Why thank you. Makes me glad to hear that :twilightsmile:

Funny. This is actually better written than any part of Project Horizons XD

3713829 You think? To what I recall, it does have some very well written moments... was ages ago I read though.

3724291
I do think so, but frankly I have a very low opinion of Project Horizons and its author (the specifics of which I shall not invoke so as to avoid a flame war). I found the concept and the execution here to be amusing, as well as brief enough to do what it came to do (hehe, 'came') without any superfluousness. I've always believed that porn is inherently funny, so pornographic material that also tickles my funny bone always goes over well with me.

3728254 Yeah, I can actually say the same, along with a long line of argument for why, but as said; No point in bringing em up. And heh, okies :3 Thanks. I've been told quiet many times I got a very "unique" style per se.

Dunno if you have read them, but I got two other PH based fics. Both of which more or less "fills in the gaps" of what I thought was one of the majorly missed areas of the fic.

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To be fair, I probably won't read them. This one was linked to me and the only reason I read it was because the subject matter amused me. Like I said, porn + funny = fun for me XD

3738708 Ah, alright :P Mind if I ask "why" it was linked to you? :P
And I actually have a few more porn + funny works. Can't recall the exact ones, but I have a couple x3

3740466 In all honesty, I don't remember. I think I stumbled upon it while GMing a PnP group set in Hoofington.

3745948 Okies. Was just curious as said. Know I've only had my stuff advertised once before. And then it was my "masterpiece" fic.

this suit does look cool, at least on first site.
just remane to see it in the story, as I get to reading.

3834719 Depends what you are into. My fics tend to have a very unique take to them compared to other tones.

3836213 I guess 'Unique' is one of the things I do enjoy. Even if the looks, as from the image does add some spice to it?

not to promote, but I try to get my stories to really stick out too.

I doubt I have a suit, quite like in the image, or what I imagine it should be like.
I may enjoy slipping various kinds of suits into the stories.

3745948 'Hooflington'?
where is this, and what kind of community would it be?
is it in Equestria or outside of MLP?

3836415 I can say I personally enjoy the more "unique" or overall rare/varied content, generic, monotone slog is just not for me heh.

And imo, it's good to try and stick out, and/or to put effort into your work. Know far to many that just blindly follow the norm.

And heh, okies xP

And Hoofington is a place in the Fallout: Equestria setting. As stated, this is a FoE based fic :P It's actually done in a way it could be "technically canon" as it takes place in a scene in a chapter ;3

3837694 Adventure vs 'Slice of Life' kind of experiences?
You like it with just a little bit of spice to it? to boldly go, where none had gone before feel to it?

Maybe I should recomend you check a story I think you hven't seen th likes of, if I dare say so, considering I wrote it myself; "The Lovely Little Changeling"

maybe I've just missed out, but in my experience, they haven't explored this path of reasoning behind the play.

using magic as such may still feel bland, but this isn't the aim of this story.

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