When strange, shape-shifting metal beings called 'Decepticons' attack Equestria, can Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy save it from them... when they know absolutely nothing about their foes?
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Darkryt Orbinautz
Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.
Darkryt Orbinautz
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im commenting because you desrve one, i hope you can do great things
I'm liking this story. You have sure taken various characters in interesting directions.
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Thank you!
It's nice to finally have someone say something I can compare and weigh against other criticisms! All the other comments have just been questions and stories about misreading the title...
OH I CANNOT STRESS ENOUGH HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!
However, i must also stress how PAINFUL Each and EVERY ONE of those songs were
Songs should only be used in fics if a link to a youtube vid with the song is provided. There were also a few grammar problems here and there but i can take that im cool enough
honestly why you have so few comments is beyond me and seems almost insulting, but maybe editing the chapters to exclude the songs would be a good start.... but wait, that doesnt make any sense.... if people hated the story they would at leas flame you but no, your getting the silent treatment....
WELL NOT FROM ME!!!!!
I HEREBY SPEAK FOR THE DUMBASSES TO LOVED THE STORY BUT WERE TO DUMB TO FIGURE OUT THE COMMENT FEATURE! GOOD JOB MAN!!!
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There are no links to the songs. You know why? Because I wrote them myself, and no one's taking up performing them!
I had to go through this entire story as I uploaded here, and had to edit every grammar problem I saw, and you're telling me I still missed some? For the sake of my sanity, I'm going to pretend I didn't read that.
I have an expanded universe involving various silly - to - serious events (Including Doctor Who/Whooves and Christmas with the Autobots) on Fanfiction.Net, if you'd like to read, which I haven't uploaded here because of... the lack of positive response... I even went so far as to delete my spin-off, "Infiltration" simply because no was saying anything, and I was getting more thumbs-downs than ups, and it was taking a toll on my sanity to upload and edit a chapter for a story no one seemed to like.
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fair enough on the songs thing, i guess i was rather to harsh there, as for the grammar and spelling, well.
the first rule of mistakes is that you WILL ALWAYS MISS ONE! Its true for you, me, the queen, rhianna, the three stooges, twilight sparkle EVERYONE. nothing to go insane about.
i deleted a story of mine once after an INCREDIBLY LONG and INCREDIBLY NEGETIVE review zapped my confidance to nill. i cant tell you how much i regret that.
upload all your stories mate and leave them there because we readers are dicks! there will always be a complainer [like me this time] or a grammer policeman [wait... that was me too] and thats forgetting the two hundred dumbasses who didnt even comment.
hope my comment about the songs didnt sting to much, i get really tactless this time of night. [i have so many bruises from kicking myself its unreal
]
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Well... I still have copies of the story, so it's still, you know, exists. I could easily reupload it... assuming the mods didn't notice I was trying to upload a story I had already deleted. Is that allowed?
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Cant say for SURE but i cant imagine there`d be a problem unless the mods were the ones to delete it or the story was on the site twice.since you deleted it yourself you should be fine
When reading the exchange between Twilight and Big Mac, you had used a term wrong. In this phrase, "The farmer colt smiled shyly at the compliment as he subtracted from the apple bushel.", you used colt instead of stallion. A colt is a young horse, while a stallion is a horse about the age of Big Mac and older.
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Timely.
Do you think I can use this story on another site? Its fine if you say no....
ill give you credit and make a link to this story, of course
Good, but there is something I noticed, when Lord Megatron monologues about his name, he shouts it at the end, like, I AM MEGATRON, so, yeah.
Quick Question... where is Starscream?
quick question:
this still says incomplete will there be a bonus chapter or is this it?
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Well, there is a bonus chapter, and I was going to upload it in anticipation of uploading the sequel to this website. But upon reviewing the ... lackluster reception of the story, I decided not to bother. I must have changed it from "complete" to "incomplete" before uploading the chapter and forgot to change it back to "complete" when I changed my mind.
The bonus chapter and sequel (title is "Operation: Patriotism") are available on Fanfiction.net, if you're curious.
This really is one of the best chapters you've written. It shows the Rescue Bots at their best and gives them the validation from the main cast that they always kinda needed. Very touching. And we get Biomechanical Fluttershy and Crazy Twilight, the two best original ideas from this series.
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Thank you. I've always been proud of the Fluttershy one myself.
This story is kinda old now, but your comment seems timely given what I've got planned.
Aww Soundwave and Megatron are so sweet
Bold quotations WOW
that's awesome!!
Why is Optimus barking so much lately!?!
Why does Bumblebee have a Canadian accent?
This was my thougts after that
you diserve a comment
The second song in For All Mankind: The Hanging Sword is it your own or had someone else did? and I didn't like how Twilight ended up in this story but still a good story
Geat story