Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.
Discord, when he was still evil, always brewed over what nasty ways he could come up with to a hurt a pony's friendship. But now, only after he's become a friend himself, does he see that sometimes being a friend is the thing hurts the most of all . . .
An experimental sad-fic. A one-shot.
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Since Rarijack and Fluttermac were not really important to the story and meaningless they felt forced. It is ok to not ship every character if its not the story about them. They just felt random since there was no chemistry behind it other than they got drunk and now they are together. I liked Discord though, since he would probably act childish like that. It was a good short story overall.
Aww a DisLight story. How romantic!
Simply amazing!
I don't think not wanting to take care of a baby you have because you got drunk is so bad that you should be turned to stone. And is marriage the answer? I mean, Twilight hates Discord.
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Perhaps not. But it's not that he doesn't want to take care of the baby that upsets everypony, it's that he's treating the whole thing like a non-issue.
Marriage is perhaps not the answer. It is, however, Discord's answer.
4806498 Will you make a sequel? I love to see if they get along in the future. And something to think about: whould the child of the spirit of chaos and a element of harmony have health problems? Chaos dose not mix well with anything...
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No, I won't be making a sequel. Sorry.
I intended for this to a bleak, one-shot, standalone story. You could make one, though.
I'd also counter that chaos, by nature, is fluid and malleable, so it can both not mix well with anything, but at the same time, by virtue of having no defined structure, it can mix well with anything.
4806547 well good luck with your writing! I can't write for my life. :3 ( dumb thing to ask but, how do I make the pony faces? I am new here.)
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Well, unless there's something with your Internet or something else, in the box where you type these very comments, there should be a 6-by-8 sort of "scoreboard" of the pony faces next to where you type the text. Just click on one to put it in.
4806587 Thank you ! ( I'm on my phone so I will see if it works on my computer.)
Now that's quite a story! I'm pretty sure it deserves more attention than it get's getting now and, of course... a sequel.
George demands a sequel! Please and thank you.
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I have no plans to do a sequel.
Sorry.
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I had an idea for one, given that you mentioned earlier that you weren't going to do one but someone else could. It wouldn't be a happy ending, though; that feels wrong, given the nature of this fic.
4809966 Darn!
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Oh, sure. You do your unhappy version, and then someone else can do their happier version and then so on and so on. It'll be a like a "Choose Your Own Adventure" game!
I imagined this ending when he got to the Libary he made a choice, before entering he turned to a female version of himself then walked into up to twilight snapped her fingers and took the burden of the baby with a sad smile said good bye and left.