Still slowly trying to disentangle from MLP. It is ... slow going.
This story is a sequel to Her Void Pink
Twilight's and Pinkie's relationship is quiet. However, Spike's curious to know what's been driving Twilight so nuts lately. Pinkie doesn't know what to do in a relationship, Spike has no idea what they're doing, Pinkie has no idea what she's doing, Twilight has an idea of what she WANTS to do, but...
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Yup bitchs be crazy
kinda sad feels like pinkies acting for twilight and isn't serious about it at all. i wonder will she ever be.
or is she waiting for her time to drop it
o.o Woah, Twilight! DONT DO IT!
O_O Woah Twilight is getting crazy...
really good. cant wait for the next chapter!
Spank him!!!
I like it more please
cool
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Beautiful summary.
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Eeyep. Sounds just about right.
Twilight, you and Spike have been through so much yet you can't tell him of your relationship? That's just plain low man.
This story is so sad funny.... It's like a roller coaster ride through comedy, romance, and sadness
Poor boy is gonna need help after all this
Hold onto your butts people the ride is now departing the terminal
I find that pinkie being the sane one right now is....proper
Why do I see someone ended up in the happy house at the end of this
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Cause Twilight's insane, Pinkie is insane in a different way, and having an insane person be the 'sanity lid' on another insane person is a recipe for disaster, and this kind of abuse could easily drive Spike insane.
Hope you continue this at some point. Interesting to see the ups and downs Pinkie and Twilight's relationship is going through and how it will eventually turn out. Twilight's paranoia is a really deflection for her dealing with any of her problems, and its no wonder Pinkie is frustrated and confused by her.
YES! FINALLY AN UPDATE!
Thank you for another great chapter!
I feel really bad for Twilight here, but at the same time I'm glad that Pinkie finally let it out. I understand why she'd get frustrated with Twilight. And now Spike's getting caught up in this mess. Hmm... how's he gonna manage to get them back together?
Also:
I think you meant: "Do they have anything with gems?"
Are you sure that snarled is the right word to use here? It just seemed a bit out of place.
Anyways, thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to future chapters!
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Thanks for the pointing out the error about "do they have anything with gems", but yes, "snarled" was the word I meant to use. Because Fluttershy doesn't like sports, see, so she's . . . violently relieved, I guess it would be the way to describe it, about not having to play anymore.
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would react like that. 
Oh ok, that makes a bit more sense now. I can understand why
Twilight completely
bravo good chap
Best chapter. I believe I saw a parody from my favorite show there. Laughed to the point of blacking out from lack oxygen.
Sweetie Belle is best pony and Spike is best, period. Happy Ending to a Happy New Year.
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I'm sorry to disappoint you, but no intentional or aware parodying of any show was done . . . in this chapter.
What show would that be, by the way?
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This One
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yes
I liked that story 
I remember when Her Void Pink came out
and then I read the other one, you one you hate so much
and I liked the writing style
so if you ever do get a book out just remember to tell me about it
all I will have to do is turn the characters into ponies
Wooow Spike deserved a spanking in this chapter. Eating the cake isn't exactly the worst of it. He hit Twilight on multiple occasions, sent shards of glass into her face, and melted a door. Nope, he gets no sympathy from me, my mom would have killed me, and rightfully so for behavior like that. At the very least I doubt Twilight is gonna trust Spike with anything that is Pinkie related again.
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You know, I never really thought of it that way . . .
Oh shit, here we go...
He hit her.
With a mirror.
...And she forgave him.
WAT.
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Well, I kinda imagine it's two things.
1) Spike is panicked and not thinking of the consequences of his actions. (Not that he does it anyway) If he happens to hit her in the face with a mirror, he'll feel bad about it later when he's thinking straight.
2) Twilight is in kinda of a Pinkie-love fueled Incredible-Hulk like state where everyday common objects, like, oh, a mirror, cannot cause her physical pain. If you were immune to pain, and someone accidentally, like, dropped a sword on you, you'd be more inclined to forgive them than if you weren't immune to pain, wouldn't you?
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Hope you're all still keeping an eye on this, because after . . . lesse, . . . oh, wow, good Celestia, more than a year's worth of time this story is finally going to get its final chapter soon.
Like, "within the next week or so" soon.
We can finally close the book.
I love Twilight and Pinkie pairings
its always cute 
bravo good sir bravo
It took me way too long to get around to reading this last chapter.
Another great story from you, and a very worthy sequel. Awesome work.
Rarity's kind of a prissy jerk this whole chapter. She basically assumed Spike hit Sweetie on purpose and treated him like garbage for it. He apologized profusely and even went to try and make up for it with a sundae, which was a heart-felt attempt to offer a token of peace he worked on himself. Rarity only ended up forgiving him after 'he' got her an insanely expensive trinket, which is extremely shallow of her.
Commenting on the story, not the quality of writing. I just had to rage a bit at how Rarity was acting. Granted, I'd be upset too, but if he was genuinely sorry and trying to make up for it, I'd forgive him.
Rarity is just... shallow.
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Well, she is shallow, although perhaps I may have taken it to an extreme.
All for the story, of course.
And the story is (mostly) about Spike being miserable, and Rarity not forgiving him for a mistake makes him miserable, so I put two and two together and made ... fish! 
Is it me or is nearly everypony in this story acting like complete and total douche bags.
More than half the elements are really OOC...
Twilight and Pinkie have an excuse...kind of anyway..
But Rarity and Rainbow?
Rarity may not be in love with Spike, but she isn't even treating him like a friend.
She is treating him like a stray dog that crapped on her carpet.
Rainbow bringing a bunch of strange stallions to a private party for a little kid?
Just seems a little off is all...
I really don't understand the problem with Twilight telling Spike what's going on
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There isn't one, really, but you know how Twilight gets. She doesn't want her relationship with Pinkie to go public just yet, and she thinks Spike's not mature enough to handle both secret-keeping and the fact that she's part of a same-sex couple.
Owlisicious, why did you allow him his "peek" through the door? He's too young for this!
RariMac? Really? Oh well...
I dont understand this last line but I feel like it's bad...
Oooooooooohhhhhhhh ssssnnnnaaaaaappp
seriously though, spank em Twi!
Rarity is making me fuckin mad.
DidIreallyjustsaythatohmygoshRarityimsosorryaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh