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Victoria_the_dragoness


My passion is writing. I love to create vivacious worlds, characters, creatures and tales and fashion imaginative and engaging history thereof.

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One morning, while Spike is drooling over a scrumptious looking gem, he is told a very confusing thing. Twilight might like Pinkie.

Her inability to form coherent sentences when the pink mare is around sure seems to lead to that assumption, but assuming isn't enough.

Twilight needs answers, and science is just the way to get them.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 10 )

Interesting. It's not often I see someone attempt a Mane 6 Romance without homosexuality being a social norm... The pairing is also intriguing. There's a lot you can do with Pinkie as a main character. The writing style is clean, description versus plot is balanced nicely. The characters are...well, in character, which is critical in a Romantic Adventure novel. I'm impressed. Proud to award you with your first like of the story. Looking forward to future chapters. If this quality continues, then consider yourself followed :raritywink:

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On a side note,

Twilight whispered, suddenly speeding up the stairs and using her magic to teleport herself into her room. The door closed shut shortly after.

How did the door shut if she teleported in? Unless you were referring to the library entrance door closing..? Was a bit ambiguous. Other than that, I noticed no grammatical or logical errors. Keep on keepin' on!

3963317 everything that you just said confused me to no end. Also if you notice in the show Twilight has a habit of leaving her bedroom door open so that she doesn't run into it when she's too caught Up in a book to notice the things around her.

I expect to see more chapters soon... and if I don't then I'll just have to stalk you until you do! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: You're on My watch list now fool!

A really nice little story you've come up with. I wish there were more twilight/pinkie stories out there just because its a pairing that works. Anyhow I'll be looking forward to reading more of this cool story.

keep it up :pinkiesmile:

-frost

I do not know exactly what a probability machine is, but it sure makes a lot of noise.

You should put a space between paragraphs and indent. It will make thing easier on the eyes of readers. This looks like it could be interesting but as is it's kind of hard to read.

Will there be TwiPie lemons in this story?!?! :pinkiesmile:

4126187 I think all the noise was caused by her tinkering with it. Probability machines are usually very big and have a shit ton of moving parts, some of which you can't access unless the machine is on. When everything is all closed Up they tend to be fairly quiet unless the person who created it didn't really know what they were doing, built it in the 60s-80s, or built it as cheaply as humanly possible. :twilightsmile:

Not bad .jpg

Another delgihtful looking fic from you, friend. Not many Pinkie/Twilight fics around so it'll be good to follow.

One extremely cool thing I liked about this were the two different shower sequences. They were excellent ways to contrast the two characters.

Hiya! I was wondering when, or if there was going to be a next chapter.

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