All you need to know about me. I don't start another story until I finish one.
This story is a sequel to Saving a Hopeless Soul
Alex, an orphan boy that lived in an orphanage in Seattle, Washington, gets an unexpected turn of events after the orphanage closes after he was the only orphan left, making him being taken to a foster care system. That was until the car he was in gets into an accident and he blacked out. And when he came to, let's just say "he" didn't feel like "him"self.
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Great chapter!
Did Discord have something to do with the gender change?
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
I hope Alex turns out a tomboy, both as a matter of preserving her previous life in some form, and to throw a spanner in the gears of Eclipse's suppositions of what he thought would happen.
Great chapter!
Awesome chapter
Zecora?
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Yep.
Great chapter!
For solar to have made a "mistake" he sure knows alot about what's gonna happen to Alex...almost like it wasent a mistake at all.
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He didn't do it on purpose. It was due to the magical surge. He didn't mean to do it.
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
Another great chapter!
Great chapter!
I don't know if you already know this, but snakes aren't slimy. Like, at all. It's kinda freaky how dry and smooth they are.
Great story!
Loved the story keep up the good work
Do you plan on doing another story after this about a different person?
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We'll see.
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Ok
O.k Alex, you have a very important task. who do you like more, the mare you just met an hour ago who left you alone for 30 minutes, or one you met 10 minutes ago?
While I would disagree about what "girly thoughts" are, I do believe an 8 year old would act this way about it.
Well that came out of nowhere
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Actually, it's not slime. It's mucus.
I agree with Gargon94 on this idea, you could make the next one be a unicorn like Twilght or Rarity, and have him/her trying to use magic but ending up in comedic ways. You've got both the pegasus and the earth pony races, now you just need the unicorn race. Just a suggestion, though.
If you keep creating stories about humans getting transported to Equestria and become ponies in the process, then don’t stop having them stay with ponies that are the same type of ponies as they became upon their arrival.
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Noted.
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I’m not trying to be rude, I just like the layout of the stories in this series and don’t want it to change
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Don't worry about it. You weren't being rude.
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I actually thought that it would happen a couple chapters ago.
Is this a Nacho Libre reference?
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I was wondering when someone would notice that.
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Nice Princess and the Frog reference.
Rock-a-bye Alex on the tree top ,when you wake up , your boy thoughts will stop .
What am I SAYING?! 
I hate spiders too ! They are creepy !
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I was really hoping I wasn't the only person to catch that reference.
I think you meant hooves.
If I was the author of this story I would make Alex loose his mind mentally
Wait, wait, wait. The Cakes twins are young enough (3 years ish,) to need to be watched, but were left alone indefinitely? It isn't like Alex knew she needed to come home right away, so they could have been alone for a while. Foals that are powerful/surge-powerful enough to lift things heavier than themselves, are left alone in a house that has a full bakery filled with dangerous cooking tools. It isn't about them being in a no/zero crime area, there is a legitimate concern about them being able to seriously injure themselves.
There is a lot of handwaving in these stories, but come-on!
Let me get this straight . . . The plan to push Alex away from "girly" things is to take him to a Female wrestling match, surounded by Female friends, in a stadium filled with mostly Female fans.
Umm, isn't that pretty girly by definition right there?
Also, said friends really seem to be making things worse for him. It isn't like they actually bothered to ask the smart ponies who actually know how the chance is working whether fighting the change might actually cause mental harm.
That said, nice IDW Comic reference 😄
Helping out with what?