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ALoyalAutobot


Optimus Prime and Princess Celestia would've gotten along SO well. They're both wise, humble, and noble leaders.

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Twilight's normal days in Ponyville are fleeting. She will meet new, strong friends; and encounter new, evil foes. Generosity, Honesty, Laugher, Kindness, Loyalty and Magic; elements of friendship with unbinding qualities and those who wish to abuse them. The test of their friendship's limits is completed. Now, each element will be tested on their own limits. Will they pass with flying colors(no pun intended)? Or will they succumb to their element's dark counter-parts?

The War for Equestria is only the beginning...


12/3/2014UPDATE NOTICE: This story is being reworked and reedited, so there's a moderate to high possibility the chapters are going along differently than before. Please bear with me so that this story can receive another chance.

My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Transformers Prime belongs to Hasbro

This takes place after The Matrix of Leadership was restored, thus Orion Pax becoming Optimus Prime once more. Also, this places along the time after the Equestria Girls event.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 69 )
Comment posted by Agent Maine deleted Mar 10th, 2014

3987189 Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it.:twilightsmile:

I have to ask, how did I do on the Prologue and the first chapter? :rainbowhuh:

Looks like you've done pretty good so far, but quick question. How does Celestia know what twilight is doing:trixieshiftright:? She's not an all seeing god, and it doesn't seem like she's there watching her, so how does she know:trixieshiftleft:?

Comment posted by ALoyalAutobot deleted Feb 23rd, 2014

3987564 Actually, because Celestia controls the sun, it's sometimes reffered to as Celestia's sun. I personified the sun as if it's Celestia, so it's like Celestia is waking up Twilight, but in reality, it's just a personification.

Or is it ponyfication? I can't tell. :derpytongue2:

I'm not that much into Transformers but I still find your story really good and entertaining :pinkiehappy:
Keep up your good work!

Whoa, then I get 6 dislikes? What's that all about? :applejackunsure:

Haters gonna hate, I guess... :facehoof:

3987564
She not a god at all

I don't know where people get that assumption

3996184 What Ultra Maggnus was saying is she doesn't watch ponies, or eye them like God. Just asking about the way I wrote the morning for Twilight Sparkle. I personified the sun, because Celestia is the sun's controller. So, I personified the sun rising in the morning as if Celestia was giving a wake up call...

You know what, that's just what she may be doing... :trollestia:

Might I suggest to dislikers that they hold off on their dislikes until the story has more of a plot? It's too soon to see where this story goes, so you might wind up liking it after all.

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Here in lies the usual problem.
It seems a lot of people here at fimfiction.net will automatically dislike and downvote stories involving Transformers.
I've heard the rumor a hundred times, that there is some kind of "fandom war" going on between Bronies and TF Fans.
I had the same problem with my story, and so did a number of well known crossover writers such as JDPrime22, Goldymarg, thelastprime, and Gammrick.
Their stories are pretty good and well written. However, because of their fic are crossovers with Transformers, they get hated on.
It's stupid, but, what can you do.
All I can say is, ignore the haters, keep doing your thing, and never give up.

3996278 Thanks for the encouragement. Means a lot... They have no idea how related Optimus Prime and Twilight Sparkle are in achieving their new status of a leader. thelastprime's story tells us exactly how close they both have in common, regardless of the plots.

Still... I need to ask... Why hate? I'm more into Transformers, is it a crime for me to like ponies too? "Love and tolerate", isn't that what bronies are suppose to do? Twilight tolerated Trixie's ego, even to go as far as to forgive Trixie for using the Alicorn Amulet. I'm disappointed in the hypocritism protrayed by them. Regardless of whom.

I'm going to put this on Hiatus for now, to get my mind sorted out. I keep feeling like I'm rushing through the Mane Six and so on. Once I'm a bit more organized, I'll continue to write. :twilightsmile:

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Rumor has it that the "Fandom War" started with the whole "Rainbow Dash vs. Starscream" Deathbattle on screwattack.com.

While most people took it as a grain of salt because the video was done for fun, a lot of Elitist Bronies began to rub it in the TF Fans' faces. That pissed off a lot of people.

Another incident involved Peter Cullen himself, at San Diego Comic Con 2012. A random Brony asked a somewhat dumb question during the "Transformers: Fall of Cybertron" Panel promoting the game at their Q&A. He asked for Peter Cullen as Optimus to write a letter to Princess Celestia.
Peter Cullen, being oblivious to the brony fanbase, had no idea what the guy was talking about.
Unfortunately, a lot of people mistook that as him being a hater.

3996428 I can see where bronies would get that idea. I like watching deathbattle, but I might hate it now that it's the reason why this "fandom war" is happening. I could understand why I'd get dislikes and hate in the beginning chapters of my story, but disliking a story just because it includes characters from another TV show? Come on that's just stupid! In my opinion, who cares which show may be better, the reason I write a crossover is because I want to and think it's fun, not because I'm putting TFP over MLP FIM, or vice versa.

The idea of people disliking and downvoting a story just over some dumb fan war that nobody should care about just ticks me off!

I wouldn't hate on something like Deathbattles. Screwattack only did it for fun but using sensible means by making a fair battle.

Nothing should be hated unless with reasons for putting down other people's preferences or beliefs.

To be perfectly honest, and this will come a shock to you all but I really don't like Family Guy, Cleveland Show, etc. I wouldn't go as far as to hate the people for liking it, I just don't like the shows in general. Another example, I really don't support the homosexual movement, but I don't go around disliking other stories just because it involves homosexualism. I have tried hate, but I realized hating gets no one, nowhere... fast.

3997464 I was actually joking about that, however I wouldn't mind finding everyone in said war and bang their heads together.:twilightangry2:

3996184

Because the series premiere establishes her as controlling a celestial object, casting out an evil which controlled another celestial object and becoming the sole controller of both celestial objects, and being at least a thousand years old? Maybe?

Show never says she's a god. It does all of the above stuff, however, which is easily enough evidence to support the assumption and absolutely nothing has stated that she's NOT a god in absolutely clear terms, so . . .

3996428

Damn. That would be have been great if he could have done it.

3996315

You are rushing through it, a little bit. The fact that you recognize this on your own is a very good sign. :pinkiehappy:

That said, in every TF/Pony fic I've read so far, the Autobots are able to prove their peaceable intentions to Ponies way too quickly and easily . . .

Zecorra did not rhyme? That is not fine.:raritywink:

4001040 I see what you did there. :rainbowkiss::raritywink:

I guess I can try and rewrite Zecora. I'll see what I can do to fix it. :twilightsmile:

3999815 Well, if all I ever did was skip ahead and go for the next chapter. How will the readers enjoy a rushed, unplanned, and unenjoyable fic? An impatient writer is as bad as an impatient reader. I'd rather get this story done and be off with it, but it's not that simple.

It's tiring, but at the same time, exciting.

Alright, people and/bronies. I'm feeling a bit more organized and ready to start working on it. I'm now working on Part 2 as we speak, but like I said before, anything that may seem off for ponies, Autobots, and/or Decepticons, please let me know right away. :yay:

4001040 Zecorra did not rhyme? That is not a crime!:pinkiehappy:

3995991 Eh don't worry about it, man. There's always haters.

4003039 Glad you're enjoying it. I'm doing what I can to stay in character, and trying to keep the Mane Six in mind. It's not easy.

this is a great story right now!

you actually kinda remind me that i have to continue righting my own story since its on hiatus right now.

4011149 Thanks, it's kinda hard. But it looks like I have a new favorite hobby now. :yay:

4011191 Well that's great i wish i could be more focused on finishing my story.



question are you only going to have characters from prime?

edit: the show i mean.

4011319 Yes, unfortunately. I can't handle multiple characters at once. I'd get a massive migraine if I tried the G1 series, omg. :applejackconfused:

4011419 ah ok

yeah in my story i originally had a bigger cast then i could deal with (its still a big cast but its now only has characters important to the plot)

4012351 You all could easily tell that Pinkie Pie didn't come into play before the Hydras, right? That's the reason the Mane Six as a group can be tiresome for me. :ajsleepy:

4012373 Hmm yeah i like the episodes that focus on one of them alone instead of all of them.

4012383 I'll be more than happy wjen the Autobots stay in Ponyville. I'll be able to split scenes and different situations.

4012631 As great as the story is, it seems to missing a certain Decepticon warlord that was mentioned in the description!:raritywink:

*Sigh Well hopefully Optimus didn't survive the ground bridge accident:pinkiehappy:!

Comment posted by ALoyalAutobot deleted Mar 17th, 2014

Actually I like this story hope to see more

4016330 Then expect more chapters in the later days. Right now, I'm working on the next chapter... the Decepticons. :pinkiegasp:

4016642 It's about time!:raritywink:
I look forward to crushing the autobots and the ponies under my feet!
Uh 1 question though, how do I get there? I know how the 'bots did, but how do us cons?

Comment posted by ALoyalAutobot deleted Mar 17th, 2014

Feeling pretty good with the chapter I'm working on... but it's the Decepticons... it's starting to scare me.:rainbowderp::twilightoops:

Energon Infuser? Didn't know I had one, wish I knew what it does.:applejackunsure:

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