I'm sorry. I didn't mean for any of this to happen. All the panic, all the chaos, all the ponies hurt. I-I'm truly sorry. The mask was too much for me to handle. I don't know if you'll ever forgive me. If you want, you can read my journals. Maybe they can offer more of an explanation. Maybe then my story will be told and the enigma that is me will be solved.
(Story set in Skull Kid's perspective starting in Hyrule. It follows the events that eventually lead up to the apocalypse he causes in Equestria. Legend of Zelda x My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic crossover.)
Chapters (14)
Not bad. Not bad at all. I just have one little note, and I may be wrong about it.
I believe you mean physiological, not psychological. But otherwise, the story is really good. I'll read the 3rd chapter soon. One suggestion though, is that you find a proofreader, if you have not already. They can help with those tiny mistakes. And if you can't find one you like, just PM me. I'm a proofreader, and I'm in the proofreading group. This story is right up my alley, so if you want some assistance, and you want it from me, just let me know, and we'll go from there.
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Sorry if I didn't make it clear, but I meant it in a mental strength kinda way. Like the mask only helped by giving him confidence, but the other skull kids didn't interact with him enough to see it. But thanks for the critique, though I'm a bit too busy at the moment to find a proofreader. I'll be sure to contact you once I find the time.
I find it frustrating that this isn't an original concept anymore, as I to am working on something like this.
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Yeah, I just found out that someone already did a story called Discord's Mask.
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Yeah, and the problem with that is my story is very similar to Discord's Mask and I'm afraid I might be accused of stealing his idea despite the fact that I came up with the concept months before he did.
this story is very unique, i wonder what will happen in the next chapter
Hot damn! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
Thanks for the support. I'm writing as fast as possible.
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Just because we all have similar ideas doesn't mean we should let it get in way of our desire to express ourselves. After all, this is FAN FICTION. All of our stories are based off of something we didn't come up with. I have read other MLP/Majora's Masks stories, but I wanted to do something different by writing a story about Spike and the psychology theme of the five stages of grief from the game. With each person's new story we get a new point of view and another story to enjoy.
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Yeah, I noticed nobody seemed to do a perspective on skull kid, so it was interesting enough to try it out. Since nothing is technically original, especially in our fandom, it's always worth putting for your own creation, even if the idea is very similar to others. It's a new story that will always be unique and that's enough for more ideas and more discussion.
To be honest, I was about to make mine about a discord mask as well, and even with that it would still be different enough for a different take on the story.
Shouldn't there be a "tragedy" tag?
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Sorry, I didn't notice the tag.
This is great, love the writing style, neeeed moar lol ;)
NOW...To read this over. With the appropriate background music.
I have not read this but why is this on here guess i'll find out
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why is this here i mean it
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What? You'll have to clarify. On where?
2597286 i 'll keep an i for you when i get my story up and running
Is this canon? Like is this how the skull came to be? That would be awesome
...Well, damn.
Wait, isn't the beak fake? I've seen him remove it before.
Okay this is a bit....i don't know. Why go through giving him a cow shaped portal to other worlds just to send him to another portal to another world and change him into a COMPLETELY different character? Not only does it make the entire previous chapter redundant but it kinda ruins the interesting atmosphere you had built up. It would make sense if the pony version at least resembled his skull kid form but this is just....well it's dumb. You might as well have made him a pony to begin with.
Not that this is a bad story. You have a magnificent writing style and sense of narration. You just made an incredibly dumb plot choice
the conversion beuro?