During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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Woohooooooo! As Hanji would say. So new elements are born, friendships strenghted, loves revealed, complications arising, an end to the nightmares of humanity, and soon a relationship between two species. What more could we ask?...Oh yeah, THE SEQUEL!!!
But now I want you to make more stories regarding this little universe that you have created. Will Eren accept the love of Mikasa? Or will he develop true feelings for the Pegasus? And what will Jean and Fluttershy's relationship develop to?
OK, I have to go shipping mode here. After reading the story so far, I see shipping between. Conny x Pinkie, Armin x Twilight, Armin x Annie, Jean x Fluttershy, Hanji x Pinkie (don't ask why.) Eren x Rainbow, Eren x Mikasa. Boy, am I a shipper or what?
Alright not a strong final fight scene in my opinion, but a final fight scene none the less. I had a feeling the elements and Celestia would make an appearance, but I don't really mind it too much. The one thing that sort of makes me scratch my head was just how easily Hunter went down like a sack of potatoes after Eren and company got their elements. I know the elements are like the ultimate trump card, but he could have at least put up a better fight. Also him being trapped in that crystal while still alive 'forever' won't possibly lead to any horrible repercussions in the future... I think I could have filled a football stadium with the amount of sarcasm I just spewed out. Unless the guy is six feet under he is going to pose a problem one way or another unless for some reason he is released and forgives Luna for some strange reason, but I don't see that happening in my opinion.
Alright with my nit picking done let me get on to what I think as of now. All I can say is where is this story going to take us now? With the titan menace gone what will happen to this awesome little universe that you have created? Will this story go into 'slice of life' mode? Will there be any pony x human romance possibilities? Will a new villain arise to keep the action we all love that is portrayed in this story up? Or will you just wrap this long story up and periodically write short stories about this universe that you have created. Although I have no clue as to how you'll proceed which makes me excited to see whats to come. So until then good luck and happy holidays.
Did this story endd? ;3; oh noooo
The titans were finally defeatedd
This story was Amazing. How you put alot of action. Please mae a sequel
3659346 Do note the "Incomplete" status of the story.
Oh man, the Element's of Harmony for Earth... I smiled the entire chapter. I loved how you decided they should look on earth, how they should be different. You could have done a cop out and made them jewelry and basically be the same as the Equestrian Elements... but you didn't and I loved it! The descriptions of how they looked was perfect too, and how they worked was great! And eradicating the titans in one fell swoop with Armen's wonderful idea, he really does make a great Element of Magic, just as everyone one else really seems to fit their roles.
I could continue to list just about everything that was great about this chapter but it might take me either far too long... or this might be an essay instead of a comment so I'll just wrap everything up. (Besides, I still have to read the final chapter... and catch up on the sequel!)
I love this chapter and this fanfic so much. Favourited (I don't favourite much so that's saying a lot I promise!)
WTF MIKASA HES YOUR BROTHER FOR FUCK SAKE......UNLESS HES YOUR COUSIN BECAUSE I HEARD YOU CAN DATE AND MARRY YOUR COUSIN SO OTHER THEN THAT "WTF MIKASA!!"
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That did NOT end the way I thought it would. I think I'm the happier a reader for it.
I still stand by my earlier statements earlier on in the fic near the start, but I do I have to say that this is certainly worth the you have to put into the whole reading.
And to think, if this hadn't been on the front page four days ago in the 'fics people are reading now' section, I'd have never found out about it!
It's been done before, but I don't care.
Holy shit they won, I'm so happy about the way you ended this fic
Man I really want to check out that sequel!
I couldn't help but notice that you put a lot of thought into this fic, especially in the last handful of chapters. As for this one, giving Armin the Element of Magic was a brilliant move! Why do I feel that way? Well, as you obviously know, the Element of Magic only shows itself when someone has a realization that causes them to allow friendship into their hearts. Armin's realization occurred when he discovered how much Eren and Mikasa trusted and respected him, despite viewing himself as a burden. Since this moment of clarity happened in Armin's head, it is understandable why Celestia wouldn't bring it up as she bestowed the Elements upon he and his friends, but it still counts! Also, did this influence your decision in any way?
3938531 Mikasa's adopted, remember?
<sigh> i knew it... Armin is the meme of the group
https://youtu.be/pa0Qvmh8w9o
Kindness
https://youtu.be/F82_GdoHXEc?t=34
Generosity
https://youtu.be/woO8uJkBDk0?t=13
Laughter
https://youtu.be/GLonOzqYpxw?t=15
Honesty
Celestia You Are Amazing