During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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cool chapter.
Oh god, now the ponies have to listen to hanji's experiments!
Don't know what's so bad about Hanji's experiments. She seems like an awesome kind of girl.
Now again, I have a couple nitpics. (Don't take them the wrong way. I enjoy this story very much so.)
1: Spike just going all commando; I don't know. That seemed kind of...Off to me. Not a big thing since we didn't see much of it, but still. He is only a young, small dragon. Short arms and legs and stuff. Eh, not a biggee.
2: Celestia's decision to just send the Elements; Okay, yeah, I didn't bring these last two parts up earlier. Sorry, but when I think of it Both Celestia and Luna saw how dangerous Titans were. Were they like...
"Oh noes. That poor sentient race is being torn to shreds. What should we do?
"Let's send the Elements."
"But they've never faced something like this. They've never even had to kill anything. Don't you think that might hurt them psychologically?"
"Nope."
"Are we going to send any trained members of our royal guard to assist them?"
"Nope."
"So...we're sending a bunch of young mares and a baby dragons to take on huge, genocidal monsters without any aid from our own military."
"I'm sure that the sentient race on the other side is kind and understanding."
"And if they're not?"
"....Shut up. We're going with my idea."
Yeah, kind of flawed.
3: FIM influence on the storyline; It's kind of lacking. Maybe it's just because the first few chapters had quite a bit of major interaction with the ponies, while some of the later chapters feel like the ponies are just...there. Again, this is a good story and I like where you're going with it. I'm just saying that maybe a little more tweaking could help you out.
Oh God, Pinkie Pie and Hanji together? I think humanity would have to face something even more dangerous than Titans.
And I hope I'm mistaken, and I really mean it, but I hope Rarity's partner is not Levi.
3242537 sweet chocolate rain! that's just messed up enough for discord to do but it needs something....something evil....something from the deepest pits of tartarus.....it needs COWBELL!!!!
No comment of disgust from Rarity?
Wouldn't Rainbow Dash have left? Twilight's 'egghead stuff' tend to bore her, so why would she stick around now? Also, the word 'Moved' should be lowercase. :)
HA, THEY JUST FUCKING BAILED HAHAHAHA
Smart choice, my friends. Smart choice.
One eternity later .