During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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AW YES I'M SO FRIKKING HAPPEH
My new favorite anime a fimfic now... Awesome
God dang....I read through this non-stop for 3 hours! I already like this, already faved this, I already LOVE THIS STORY!!!
I mean, some readers may not like it much for their own reason but I hope you can continue on writing this story. I'm glad you are keeping a steady pace with the story.
So far, you're just copying the anime with a few pony scenes thrown in. I'm disappointed. This is one of my favorite animes and mangas and deserves a far better crossover than this.
However, you have writing talents. You need only develop them to tell a good story.
2810008 I figured as much that people would dislike for this. I really wanted to make something a bit more original and add a few more twists and turns to the story to make it fresher, but if I did, I ran the risk of spoiling the anime for those who watch it (and we all know how people are treated who spoil the anime through the manga).
What I wanted to do was to make a story that takes place after the humans win the war against the titans and then they get sent to Equestria, but the problem there is that the anime (and manga, for that matter) are still going and we don't know who's going to make it out alive at the end, so I figured I should cross those bridges when I come to them.
Of course, I plan on rewriting certain stuff for my story (much like how Ian, Mitabi, and their squads survived the Trost invasion because of the ponies' (and Spike's) assistance), but I figure the closer I stay with the anime, the more most of my readers and fans of the original anime will enjoy.
Hey, why not make a second version? One where you do what you want!
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1. I've got far too many stories to work on to do something like that.
2. Like I said, the anime (and the manga) is still far from over, and I still don't know which characters are going to live or die. If there's one thing I don't want to do, it's to fuck too heavily with the canon.
Plus, this fic as it is has been fun.
2810489 Okay, I've gotta say this now. I read fanfics BECAUSE they deviate from the source material (in fact, most people tend to be like that as far as I know, since that's what fanfics ARE). I love the whole "what if" scenarios that tend to crop up. If you stick TOO close to the manga/anime, then it becomes unrealistic, and I might as well just watch the anime. You should keep that in mind for future stories. I'll give this story a chance still, but if it turns out that we're getting deep into the events that happen after Trost and STILL nothing truly original has happened, I don't think I'll be sticking around afterward. That's a sign of unoriginality that would ruin the amazing quality of this story. I do hope to be pleasantly surprised though.
I thought I'd let you know about this mistake. Aside from that, I'm really thankful that you took the time to cross these two awesome things together!
Looks like rainbow wants some eren love and frienship. And maybe some eren dick.
2810489 well done i loved the shinobi spike moment and the rest of the chapter for that matter as well unfortunately being late to this fic i have to read this one before i start the sequel oh well it's a labor of love AND TOLERANCE!!!
I'm sorry, just, seeing Levi say the word "ponies" with a straight face is too much.
Hmm... *raises hand towards chin* It seems a very good fanfic so far, however, I have a few concerns. The grammar of the fic can get a bit disorienting in some cases, and I've noticed a few glaring errors.
If you like, I can comb each chapter one at a time to pick out any grammar mistakes, and send any correction suggestions via PM. I'm interested in reading the rest of the fic and seeing how it diverges, and I'd be happy to help you if you need it.
While I am fine with sticking to cannon (mainly because I haven't watched the AoT). I have to agree that a fanfic with ponies sticking too close to cannon will destroy the story...making it very fake and the majority of people want something different....especially when you add a new element to the story...
As Spock would say. It is illogical that changing one rather big aspect of the story doesn't change the story as a whole...
WOW! Coincidence! I am not kidding, the last episode I saw is the exact episode the first AOT-based chapter was on. Of course, I watched the Japan version, where the "3D Maneuver Gear" is called the Omnidirectional Gear. I just found it odd as a guy who's only seen the Japanime.