During a titan attack of the district of Trost, six magical, talking ponies mysteriously appear behind the city walls. After learning the abilities of the ponies, the Military allows them to fight alongside them in a desperate bid to save humanity.
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3240927 Still sounds... well... Naive.
1) Why send the main six into an obviously military/political situation? They have guards and polititians in equestria, and since the six don´t even have the elements there is no reason to risk them. And yeah, why are they always the ones sent on diplomatic mission? An inexperienced princess, a farmer, a baker, a braggart, a designer and a tree are not exactly and elite diplomatic team. Capability? Doubt it, half of this required the elements, so it´s not their skill, its the ability to use the plot device. Why not sent guard with them in some? First time cause it needed them to become friends, and against Discord, well it would have not made a difference against a god.
2) As per level of threats they have faced, cant say it´s an impresive record. On paper? Yes. Analysing it not really. The villians all had a Power Rangers levels of incompetense. Nightmare Moon let them just walk right in instead of elimination the threat, they lives barely on the line. Like Crowley described Lucifer in SN "He is nothing but a bratty child with daddy issues", NM wanted to bring eternal darkness, killing everyone, so all the corpses will like her night....brilliant. Discord is mad and could have wiped them out with a though, he got defeated by himself cause he gave them all the tools to beat him. Sombra they didnt fight, Twi just went in and picked the combeniently hidden Crystal ex Machina and won with the power of love. Chrysalis? She didn´t do her research on Equestria, nor she eliminated possible threats. should have killed and replaced the elements, or at least Twilight and Cadance. At least get rid of Shing once you no longer need him and you´re exposed. The dragon got an scolding and ran away...what a threat. the Mantocore got a spike on his paw and once removed was super docile. The ursa minor was the bigged threat and still was solved very simply. So yeah... not an impresive super soldier record.
3) Friendship and trust? Remember that the anime is basically a deconstruction of that. Blind trust WILL get people killed, it happends all the time in the show. Like in the latest episode, it proved to be a weakness for Eren. No amount of "come one guys we can win! yay" will save them. And in this situation brind trust would be more harmful than good. They ARE an unknown at the start. Remember the titans came from nowhere, and now this ponies come from nowhere.
4) To me stories about ponies being super awesome without flaws thanks to magic are boring, it´s just a giant Deux Ex Machina. Like crossovers that don´t explain why of all the creatures in the universe only ponies have magic. I understand trust from Erwin, as he will use any help he can get, but the others? The recruits? Why? Desperation for some but not for all.
5) If no one point flaws in stories and just gush about how awesome a crossover is then the author won´t improve and that´s something that too me is affecting this fandom. People hate criticism.
6) Another problem is taking the slapstick situations of the show to explain the physiology of the ponies. They are meant to be humurous situations, but then they are taken into a serious situation and warped into "Twi can levitate mountains", "Bigmac can rip houses", "Applejack has enough leg strength to dent a 3 meter thick reinforced door", "SA's shield can withstand orbitant bombardment from a dreadnaught." It´s a common problem with crossovers, and not only fanfiction xovers, it doesn´t level the power levels.
There are coutner to this? Sure, but some require quite a stretch, after all is a crossover between a gory anime, and saturday morning children show.
And finally, there ARE problems, every story has them, but it´s still enjoyable.
3243757 Well, the reason I did this was so that I wouldn't end up forcing a scenario later on that would otherwise spoil a future episode.
Trust me, I would deviate from the show if I could, but I still want the elements of the manga/show (the villains motivations and their overall plan) to remain mostly intact. At this point, however, especially in the future chapters that I write, there will be some MAJOR differences between the manga/anime and my story, so if you do decide to quit, then I guess it will be your loss.
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter(s). I wonder how will some of the ponies react when they find out that *SPOLERS* is *SPOILERS*, wonder how their friendship will be affected. Also, how much of the story are you planning to change with the ponies intervention? As far as the producers are planing the show/manga to run? Or will you cut it a bit short?
3248244 I'm not cutting anything short. Once the anime ends, I'm going to continue my story based on the manga. And yes, things are going to become ENTIRELY different at this point in the story.
Manure, meet Fan.
3937997 Fan meet Manure
Is it just me, or does it seem like Armin went a bit coo-coo in the brain-O .
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