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  • T The Monster In AppleBloom

    There's something wrong with Apple Bloom, she's unhappy, shying away from her friends, and no one can figure out why. Where has the happy filly gone and why did she leave?
    6,842 words · 1,447 views  ·  65  ·  6
  • T From Crown To Halo

    Sequel to The Monster In Apple Bloom - Apple Bloom is horrified when her colt friend Bright Heart tells her his heart breaking secret. Can her friends and family help her cope?
    5,196 words · 894 views  ·  41  ·  3
  • T The Truth

    Celestia's party takes an interesting turn when Twilight accidently drops a truth potion.
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  • 78w, 2d
    How To Accuse Someone Of Breaking The Rules

    How To Accuse Someone Of Breaking The Rules

    1. First, make sure that they've actually broken the rules, instead of taking the word of someone else who may have said the wrong thing by mistake. You might try talking to the so called rule breaker yourself first instead of listening to rumors and not getting the whole story.

    2. Note that the stories the author revoked were republished by other mods several days later. Mods who did NOT bump them up on the site home page, so no rules were actually broken. See this rule:

    Revoking a submission makes a story invisible on the site again. It will need to be submitted again and go through moderation before it is visible on the site again.

    Note that it does NOT say you're not allowed to resubmit a story. Only that it would have to go through moderation again.

    3. Note also how the person who not only accused the author of breaking the rules, also mocked a teenager in their blog post, coming dangerously close to breaking this rule:  

    Do not make blog posts specifically attacking other people.

    Said post narrowly escaped breaking this rule simply by not naming names, even though many people knew exactly who they were talking about.

    4. The one rule the author did break was a rule she was not aware of. Now that she is aware of the rule, she will not be breaking it again.

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  • 79w, 2d
    New Group

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  • 79w, 3d
    There's nothing more to see here, you can all go home.

    Everything has been worked out between I and the other party, so my stories are going back up, and the riff has been taken down. Lets all just forget about this now and move on.

    Like Rarity would say: Let us never speak of this again.

    5 comments · 246 views
  • 81w, 6d
    About Scootaloo's Painful Secret

      Being an adult survivor of child abuse, I find it therapeutic to write about it. Much of what Scootaloo goes through is exactly what my own mother put me through. Though in my case, it was my grandmother who always made excuses for her since it was just me and those two who lived together.

      These days my mother is still verbally and emotionally abusive and I simply avoid her as much as possible. Nobody deserves abuse no matter how old they are.

      Perhaps after writing The Monster In Apple Bloom and Scootaloo's Painful Secret I'll be able to write stories from my imagination and not my painful past. We'll see.

      For those of you waiting for the next chapter in The Monster In Apple Bloom I'll work on it soon.

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  • 82w, 6d
    About The Monster In Apple Bloom

      So already this story has been liked and faved by some people, which makes me happy. The story will be more in depth as it goes along.

      Having Bipolar Disorder myself, some of what Apple Bloom goes through is based on my own experiences, and some of it is completely different. If anyone recognizes the symptoms listed in the story in themselves I would strongly recommend that they see a doctor. Part of the reason I'm writing this story is for public awareness.

      I know this story will probably be highly controversial, as mental illness can be a very uncomfortable topic for some, and even frightening, but it's a sad fact that it's out there. Not just Bipolar Disorder, but other kinds of mental illness as well.

      Bipolar Disorder affects approximately 5.7 million American adults, or about 2.6 percent of the U.S. population age 18 and older in a given year. (Source Wikipedia.)

      If you feel suicidal, please get help. There are people who care.


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  • ...

Sequel to Scootaloo's Painful Secret Now that Scootaloo is away from her abusive parents and in the custody of Rainbow Dash, she can focus on recovering from the trauma she was put through and getting on with her life. Delighted on getting to live with her hero, will she have the courage to work through her pain? Will Rainbow Dash be able to help her through this difficult time and get used to being a parental figure to Scootaloo?

First Published
10th May 2013
Last Modified
22nd May 2013

YAY!! New story, and a fantastic one at that. Good work:moustache::moustache:

How can a parent do this you ask? Well, obviously it stems from some deep rooted inner pain, which I would remedy with an equal dose of outer pain, like broken legs, or even better, a snapped jaw, so they'd have to wire that abusive mouth closed for a while

Yay!  The story continues!!  :rainbowkiss:

*reads letter to Scootaloo*

THAT B:yay:H!!!  :twilightangry2:    *inaudible swearing*

In all seriousness, I agree with Rainbow Dash.  I don't care what kind of condition Cold Heart has, it's no excuse to treat Scootaloo that way!  

Dont let the past push you around scootaloo

Now I know the perpetrators of child abuse suffer from mental issues, emotional issues, etc. But that doesn't give the right at all to lay a hand on a child, and for Cold Heart to blame her being in jail, and being beaten by the other inmates, and breaking up the family on Scootaloo then she deserves what she gets. However, in a way I wish she will try to look at all she has done to Scootaloo and cry sadly because of her actions and feel that pain she caused.:fluttercry: Poor poor Scootaloo, but I am so glad she has friends like the CMC and a family in Rainbow Dash and the other Mane Six.

more please!!!! such a great chapter

keep up the good work thanks:rainbowdetermined2:

Woot, sequel, Scoots mom is still a whorse. I blame cold hearts mother for abusing her, I hope that didn't spoil anything.

Excellent work so far!

Rainbow may seem really irresponsible, but she's a great parental figure in this story. :rainbowkiss:

I'm so excited for you to update some more. UPDATE NOW.


Fitting...innit? ....crap...Now I wanna go play Sonic Adventure 1 and 2...and Shadow The hedgehog....

NO ONE HURTS SCOOTS! :flutterrage:

>>2558073 It's a little unnerving how close Tails is To Scoots....and Sonic is to RD.... craaaaaaap....I need to find a Tails in Equestria fic, ASAP....

>>2558088 you can read my little sonic: friendship is eternal

I’ve removed you from my will,

Just a random fun fact: In some jurisdictions, law dictates that a child will inherit a sizeable portion of the parent's estate. A third, or a half,  or in some cases even two-thirds of the parent's fortune goes to the child. It's the law, and nothing in the will can override it.

This story seems to have great promise. I just finished reading "scootaloo's painful secret" and the only thing I didn't like about that was the singing :pinkiesick:. It always bothers me when I read any book, so it's not personal.

Keep up the good work

#17 · 80w, 4d ago · 1 · · 1. The Letter ·

That bitch. I'm sorry for the language but I felt that cold heart has crossed a line. Even if she is a pastel coloured pony in a story. THAT BITCH:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

Ow, feels :fluttercry:

This is some deep shit man, Manly tears will be shed

In a low tone "Fu-BUCKING Bitch!":flutterrage:

#20 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·


#21 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

Very good so far, but chapters a bit... lacking. Hope to see more, longer chapters.

#22 · 80w, 3d ago · 2 · · 2. Therapy ·

ponies like Scootaloo’s mother should be sent to the moon

I agree


#23 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

I say to another galaxy where she shall never return. I like Dr. Sunny, now that is a good therapist for you. :pinkiehappy:

#24 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

Bitch, please





Why wait?:trixieshiftright:

#25 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

Only issue with this was the dialogue wasn't fully clear on who was speaking. But, as usual, your chapters get straight to the point and handle it well!

#27 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

Or maybe Cold Heart should be forced to watch Scootaloo grow up to be a well-adjusted and successful adult who succeeded because her mother is no longer there to "punish" her, just to rub her face in how wrong she was.

#28 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·


yeah, i like that idea. like, after we get through scootaloo getting better, the epilogue should be set a few years later when she's accepted into the wonderbolts with dash. scoots and all her friends and new team mates could be having a partyand her mom would show up after getting out of prison and start trying to abuse her and stuff again, but scootaloo wouldn't take it this time and she's tell her off and have all her friends back her up, then rainbow would hit her and kick her out of wherever they're having the party and scootaloo could finally have the closure she deserves. we could even have the dad at the party and have him refuse to back up his ex wife! oh it'd be so satisfying!  

#29 · 80w, 3d ago · 1 · · 2. Therapy ·

>>2562793 >>2562843 >>2563072 Why ruin the beautiful Moon with such garbage? Throw them in an active Volcano to get rid of them completely.

#30 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

To the moon?

cocks shotgun

Not good enough.


#31 · 80w, 3d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

I will send Scootaloo's mom a basket of bananas, which I hope she won't like :pinkiecrazy:.

#32 · 80w, 2d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·


*Takes shotgun*

Not good enough

*Gives Vinyl's Bass Cannon*

#34 · 80w, 2d ago · 1 · · 2. Therapy ·

I'd say send them to he'll but satan would be all like. "Your polluting my fucking home bitches" and spit them back out

#35 · 80w, 2d ago · 4 · · 2. Therapy ·

I'm reading this on Mother's Day. WHY :rainbowwild:

#36 · 80w, 2d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

yes to the moon, or in a pit with a pack of rabid dimond dog, or have all sootaloo's memorys replicated and have her be forced to relive them for 5 years strate,:pinkiecrazy:or all three at once:trixieshiftright:....i like that idea

#37 · 80w, 1d ago · · · 2. Therapy ·

>>2564940 or Deep space, maybe they'll find some necromorphs floating around and get eaten.

:rainbowlaugh: of course you used that picture

(Since it didn't load up properly, next time try opening the picture into a new tab so that it's just the picture and nothing else)

>>2586513 Did you do that picture? Do you want me to take it down?

Touching chapter. Good to have you back.

Link to image plz? It doesn't show.

>>2586518 if I did that picture I wouldn't post it and give you advice on how to get the URL right :ajbemused:

>>2586525 I'm sorry I didn't mean to offend you. I can see the picture just fine so I don't know why others can't...

>>2586534  why would I be offended? It was a  misunderstanding

>>2586523 Thank you and the link is up now.

I'm liking this so far, but you could work a bit on some scenes. It's very dialogue heavy sometimes and a bit rushed.

Still not so bad.

Oh man, I love the whole Scootakite thing. I've legitimately never seen that before and it's adorable.

Poor Scootaloo's gotta get her fear of disappointing Rainbow Dash taken care of, it'll lead her into trouble if she's not careful :( She's gotta remember that she's with a much more understanding parent now. :scootangel:

Rainbow just teaching Scootaloo that cheating is wrong, and giving her the punishment of being grounded was real good and she handled Scootaloo's feelings and emotions very well. Also, the end is adorable. :fluttercry::pinkiehappy:

I'm so happy that you got your inspiration back. And might I say that you did a wonderful chapter. It's sad that Scoots may never be able to fly, but seeing Scootakite made me squee so hard! It was adorable, and Rainbow Dash did a good job on a 'good' kind of punishment for Scoots cheating.

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