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Joined March 2013
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Stories (5)

  • Scootaloo's Painful Secret
    Scootaloo has a secret, one that is hurting her every day. The pain keeps building up inside her and she feels desperate to tell someone, but when even her own family has let her down, who does she dare to trust?

    4,960 words · 3,360 views · 192 likes · 8 dislikes
  • The Road To Recovery
    Sequel to Scootaloo's Painful Secret. Now that Scootaloo is away from her abusive parents and in the custody of Rainbow Dash, she can focus on recovering from the trauma she was put through and getting on with her life.
    6,440 words · 2,342 views · 189 likes · 15 dislikes
  • From Crown To Halo
    Sequel to The Monster In Apple Bloom - Apple Bloom is horrified when her colt friend Bright Heart tells her his heart breaking secret. Can her friends and family help her cope?
    5,196 words · 698 views · 38 likes · 2 dislikes
  • The Monster In AppleBloom
    There's something wrong with Apple Bloom, she's unhappy, shying away from her friends, and no one can figure out why. Where has the happy filly gone and why did she leave?
    6,842 words · 1,156 views · 61 likes · 5 dislikes
  • The Truth
    1,071 words · 1,238 views · 57 likes · 19 dislikes

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Sequel to Scootaloo's Painful Secret Now that Scootaloo is away from her abusive parents and in the custody of Rainbow Dash, she can focus on recovering from the trauma she was put through and getting on with her life. Delighted on getting to live with her hero, will she have the courage to work through her pain? Will Rainbow Dash be able to help her through this difficult time and get used to being a parental figure to Scootaloo?

First Published
10th May 2013
Last Modified
22nd May 2013

Comments ( 179 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 6d ago · · ·

YAY!! New story, and a fantastic one at that. Good work:moustache::moustache:

#2 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 6d ago · · ·

How can a parent do this you ask? Well, obviously it stems from some deep rooted inner pain, which I would remedy with an equal dose of outer pain, like broken legs, or even better, a snapped jaw, so they'd have to wire that abusive mouth closed for a while

#3 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Yay!  The story continues!!  :rainbowkiss:

*reads letter to Scootaloo*

THAT B:yay:H!!!  :twilightangry2:    *inaudible swearing*

In all seriousness, I agree with Rainbow Dash.  I don't care what kind of condition Cold Heart has, it's no excuse to treat Scootaloo that way!  

#4 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Dont let the past push you around scootaloo

#5 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Now I know the perpetrators of child abuse suffer from mental issues, emotional issues, etc. But that doesn't give the right at all to lay a hand on a child, and for Cold Heart to blame her being in jail, and being beaten by the other inmates, and breaking up the family on Scootaloo then she deserves what she gets. However, in a way I wish she will try to look at all she has done to Scootaloo and cry sadly because of her actions and feel that pain she caused.:fluttercry: Poor poor Scootaloo, but I am so glad she has friends like the CMC and a family in Rainbow Dash and the other Mane Six.

#6 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

more please!!!! such a great chapter

#7 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

keep up the good work thanks:rainbowdetermined2:

#8 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Woot, sequel, Scoots mom is still a whorse. I blame cold hearts mother for abusing her, I hope that didn't spoil anything.

#9 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

Excellent work so far!

Rainbow may seem really irresponsible, but she's a great parental figure in this story. :rainbowkiss:

I'm so excited for you to update some more. UPDATE NOW.

#10 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2556689

Fitting...innit? ....crap...Now I wanna go play Sonic Adventure 1 and 2...and Shadow The hedgehog....

#11 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

NO ONE HURTS SCOOTS! :flutterrage:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2557990vhell yeah and if scootaloo goes through more hurt

#13 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2558073 It's a little unnerving how close Tails is To Scoots....and Sonic is to RD.... craaaaaaap....I need to find a Tails in Equestria fic, ASAP....

#14 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2558088 you can read my little sonic: friendship is eternal

#15 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

I’ve removed you from my will,

Just a random fun fact: In some jurisdictions, law dictates that a child will inherit a sizeable portion of the parent's estate. A third, or a half,  or in some cases even two-thirds of the parent's fortune goes to the child. It's the law, and nothing in the will can override it.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·

This story seems to have great promise. I just finished reading "scootaloo's painful secret" and the only thing I didn't like about that was the singing :pinkiesick:. It always bothers me when I read any book, so it's not personal.

Keep up the good work

#17 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

That bitch. I'm sorry for the language but I felt that cold heart has crossed a line. Even if she is a pastel coloured pony in a story. THAT BITCH:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

#18 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

Ow, feels :fluttercry:

This is some deep shit man, Manly tears will be shed

#19 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

In a low tone "Fu-BUCKING Bitch!":flutterrage:

#20 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

TO THE MOON!!!

#21 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

Very good so far, but chapters a bit... lacking. Hope to see more, longer chapters.

#22 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

ponies like Scootaloo’s mother should be sent to the moon

I agree

TO THE MOOOOOONNNA!!! BEYETCH!!

#23 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

I say to another galaxy where she shall never return. I like Dr. Sunny, now that is a good therapist for you. :pinkiehappy:

#24 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

Bitch, please

TO THE MOON:yay:

TO THE MOON:yay:

TO THE MOON:yay:

TO THE MOON:yay:

Why wait?:trixieshiftright:

#25 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

Only issue with this was the dialogue wasn't fully clear on who was speaking. But, as usual, your chapters get straight to the point and handle it well!

#26 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
#27 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

Or maybe Cold Heart should be forced to watch Scootaloo grow up to be a well-adjusted and successful adult who succeeded because her mother is no longer there to "punish" her, just to rub her face in how wrong she was.

#28 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2563329

yeah, i like that idea. like, after we get through scootaloo getting better, the epilogue should be set a few years later when she's accepted into the wonderbolts with dash. scoots and all her friends and new team mates could be having a partyand her mom would show up after getting out of prison and start trying to abuse her and stuff again, but scootaloo wouldn't take it this time and she's tell her off and have all her friends back her up, then rainbow would hit her and kick her out of wherever they're having the party and scootaloo could finally have the closure she deserves. we could even have the dad at the party and have him refuse to back up his ex wife! oh it'd be so satisfying!  

#29 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>2562793 >>2562843 >>2563072 Why ruin the beautiful Moon with such garbage? Throw them in an active Volcano to get rid of them completely.

#30 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

To the moon?

cocks shotgun

Not good enough.

:pinkiecrazy:

#31 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·

I will send Scootaloo's mom a basket of bananas, which I hope she won't like :pinkiecrazy:.

#32 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2565183

*Takes shotgun*

Not good enough

*Gives Vinyl's Bass Cannon*

#33 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>2564940 or the Sun :trollestia:

#34 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

I'd say send them to he'll but satan would be all like. "Your polluting my fucking home bitches" and spit them back out

#35 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 3d ago · 4 · ·

I'm reading this on Mother's Day. WHY :rainbowwild:

#36 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·

yes to the moon, or in a pit with a pack of rabid dimond dog, or have all sootaloo's memorys replicated and have her be forced to relive them for 5 years strate,:pinkiecrazy:or all three at once:trixieshiftright:....i like that idea

#37 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2564940 or Deep space, maybe they'll find some necromorphs floating around and get eaten.

#38 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: of course you used that picture

#39 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

(Since it didn't load up properly, next time try opening the picture into a new tab so that it's just the picture and nothing else)

#40 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

woohoo!!:pinkiehappy:

#41 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2586513 Did you do that picture? Do you want me to take it down?

#42 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

Touching chapter. Good to have you back.

Link to image plz? It doesn't show.

#43 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2586518 if I did that picture I wouldn't post it and give you advice on how to get the URL right :ajbemused:

#44 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2586525 I'm sorry I didn't mean to offend you. I can see the picture just fine so I don't know why others can't...

#45 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2586534  why would I be offended? It was a  misunderstanding

#46 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2586523 Thank you and the link is up now.

#47 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

I'm liking this so far, but you could work a bit on some scenes. It's very dialogue heavy sometimes and a bit rushed.

Still not so bad.

#48 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh man, I love the whole Scootakite thing. I've legitimately never seen that before and it's adorable.

Poor Scootaloo's gotta get her fear of disappointing Rainbow Dash taken care of, it'll lead her into trouble if she's not careful :( She's gotta remember that she's with a much more understanding parent now. :scootangel:

#49 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

Rainbow just teaching Scootaloo that cheating is wrong, and giving her the punishment of being grounded was real good and she handled Scootaloo's feelings and emotions very well. Also, the end is adorable. :fluttercry::pinkiehappy:

#50 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·

I'm so happy that you got your inspiration back. And might I say that you did a wonderful chapter. It's sad that Scoots may never be able to fly, but seeing Scootakite made me squee so hard! It was adorable, and Rainbow Dash did a good job on a 'good' kind of punishment for Scoots cheating.

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