After doing a flying lesson with Scootaloo, Rainbow Dash finds out a shocking discovery of the life of her biggest fan.
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You need to get into more detail, and you need some fluency work. Instead of saying, said, said, said, you should say, squealed, stated, decided. Otherwise great story! Hope I helped!
Other than a few minor things here and there, this story is near flawless.
I wouldn't mind tracking this till the end. Not at all...
Very rushed, but I like it.
extremely rushed but ok
It did feel a little rushed, but a very touching and sweet fanfic so far.
Way to rushed
cute!
Could use some work but not bad at all. It's really not that rushed.
this is good cant w8 for more
Please do more
BS BFF
Too. Much. D'awww.
Wow....just.....wow.
THE FEEL TRAIN HAS NO STOPS.
That last picture made me pinkie-pie smile
My big sister...
Best freind for ever....
We do random pranks and fly high up together...
She thought me how to fly so high...
Best freind for ever....
She never looked at me and sigh.
We'd do anything together..
We shared our hopes, we shared our dreams...
I miss her more then i relize...
It seems....
I love it
THE D'AWWS!!
YOU GAVE ME YHE D'AWW FLU YOU SICK BASTARD!
No. But.....
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok... I need to get to the hospital NOW.
-NekoThaCat Out-
da feelz man got tiery eyed reading this
it was so beutiful well written
It's... So..... fluffy
........cute........
This was very well written.
I liked how the author stayed true to the attitudes and such of every character, depicting them with accuracy on par with the show. The way it was written presents it to be blah blah blah fic blah blah blah Rainbow Dash blah blah Luna is best princess blah blah blah
I just hate it that sometimes, people over-analyze a story and not just enjoy it for what it is.
Here. Have a
.
Aw.. man.
You made my heart beat hard, and the feels is overflowing. 
Scootaloo, you finally got a big sister in your idol, and now your guardian Rainbow Dash. 
Wonderful story.
Two people don't have hearts.
How could anyone dislike this?
You don't leave me with room for any other feels.
With the feels, all I can say is Yay.
Other than that just flesh it out. Yadda Yadda. Oh and you said will instead of well once. The pictures in the story are a great idea too.
3061919 Because they can, you know. Because they can.
Sweet!
Testify!!!!
Those feels... You win.
It was nice, short and sweet. I will say you moved WAY too fast for any real development. It was still nice though.
3422069 Yeah, I will admit, it did seem a little rushed. But I'd also look at A Sister's Promise by GunsNRoses365, I admit it's a lot better then mine. :-)
Fast-paced to the point of feeling a bit rushed, but still fun, and still sweet, and still brought a smile to my face.
I fail to understand how I ALWAYS know SOMETHING is gonna happen between those two and STILL manage to choke on feels when it happens. Applejack says that was sure somethin'
Awwwww, so cute.
It was pretty good but Dashie and Scoots ask each other questions in your story and you still say said instead of asked
Who is Jinkie Pie? You making up family members for the Pies?
good start to the story
Aww. I love it. I really wish they did more with Rainbow and Scoot. Especially in the final season, she should have taken her in during the last crusade, and Rainbow didn't mention her when Rarity and Applejack were worried about their sisters.