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  • 32w, 4d
    I'm coming back!

    Good news, everybody!

    After three months of sickness, I'm finally getting better again. I'm starting to feel alive again! And that means I will start to get back to work on my fics again with full concentration; meaning that I will aim to return to full writing capacities soon! This should mean a rise in update frequencies... something I really want to return to.

    On another note: Apart from the clop fic and the graphic novel I've been wanting to write for some time, there's another project I'll be wanting to start once I finish one or two of my running stories. For me, this is the great white, the one thing I want to accomplish: Madness in words.

    I want to write something so insane and yet so captivating that it will send the reader onto a ride at the constant edge of insanity, laughter and suspense. This will be a greater project of mine, and it will take some time because I want to do something entirely new... probably will think about doing it as a collab with someone else... though I still have to decide on that.

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    So, shout out to all of you for your support!

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    The current state of affairs


    as most of you might have noticed, I've recently haven't been up to my usual self concerning update frequency. And I am sad to say it won't get much better over the near future. I am currently facing some serious health problems and... let's just say I already lost fifteen pounds due to it. As it stands, I will take a bit of my time to recover, but will continue writing the best I can, just not as much as in the past. Once I'm healthy again, I'll get straight back to work and the frequency of udpates will rise to old levels.

    Now, enough of the sadness and some cheerful things! Go make yourself some coffee, you've earned it!

    Thank you for your ongoing support,


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  • ...

Through trials and tribulations, we grow. The sadness though, remains.

This story was written for the May challenge of the Competion Arena, the prompt was 'the first time'.

First Published
9th May 2013
Last Modified
9th May 2013
#1 · 81w, 3h ago · · ·

-A wild Gnoll story appears:moustache:

-Inew uses: Shit brix

#2 · 81w, 2h ago · · ·

Poor Celestia...:fluttercry:

#3 · 81w, 1h ago · 2 · ·

Sadness flows through my mind. I must now go and obliterate an entire country in ETW to remedy this... :fluttercry:

#4 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·

Whoa, this story is amazing. Fave'd.

#5 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·

Well written. Simple enough.

Short and sweet, but still very powerful. I tip my hat to you good sir.

#6 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·

I found this in The Writers Group and just wanted to say I liked it quite a bit.

A suggestion: for the sake of convention, replace your ellipses with commas or em-dashes.

were to painful.

That should be a "too". :twilightblush:

#8 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·

Beautiful one shot. Simple, long enough and well written. Descriptions of characters emotions and feels was things that I loved a lot.

Keep good work.

Ofcourse thumbs up and fav :pinkiehappy:.

#9 · 80w, 6d ago · 3 · ·

Wonderful. Great story.

Am I the only one who thought of the movie "Tears of the Sun" when they saw the title?

#10 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2558246 yeah, that may have been a bit misleading. I apologize :twilightblush:

#11 · 80w, 5d ago · · ·

A very well-done story.  You can feel Celestia's loneliness, and how much it will grow over the centuries.

#12 · 78w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

This was a really interesting story for me, because I am working on a fic set at around the same time and this is very very different as an interpretation. It was really cool to see the choices you made about this scene since it's one I've been thinking about a lot. Celestia in this is so kind and sad and you really capture her emotions well.

#14 · 71w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

I was really worried when I saw how short this was. Glad I did anyway. What feels this contains :pinkiesad2:. Approved for Twilight's Library :twilightsmile:

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