While cleaning up after a particularly hectic Cutie Mark Crusader sleepover, Rarity and Apple Jack stumble across a couple of toy lightsabers. Havoc ensues.
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I sense the puns are strong in this one...
Will read later.
Edit:
Damn worth it. Fav and like.
This.
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I'm sorry when I saw the title I immediately thought of this:
Lost it at that.
Star Wars plus ponies plus No More Heroes. You, sir, are a goddamn genius.
~Skeeter The Lurker
My only criticism is your choice of victor.
THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!!
Applejack, your Demoman is showing...
yeah this was AWESOME
Highlander......lol!
Noice.
Well that was a good way to spend a Friday.
"may the force be with yall" vey fun story
but if i were to add just 1 thing it be pinkike going to actual light speed sine she like to break the 4th wall
You clam it's not your best work which puzzles me as to why. I thought this was really fantastic. loved the duel especially and can definitely see the NMH influence.
Pure gold.
EXPECTATIONS: Epic lightsaber fight!
REALITY: The lightsabers broke in half, nothing interesting happened.
3995643 I merely exist to lower expectations.
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The Light side is always stronger!
3997480 I believe he's talking about the toys themselves. They never quite managed to hold up.
May the force be with you...
Always...
I love how Rarity was a Sith and Applejack was a Jedi. I think it got a little to real for them in the middle.
If only Rarity had won... oh well. Great story aside from that though
Can I just call attention to how well-written Rarity's fall to the Dark Side was? I mean...
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Yes... Give in to your anger...
...Good, good! Use your aggressive feelings...
...Let the hate flow through you! POWER! UNLIMITED POWER! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
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It's PONY time! Cuz' ya know... Did I say pony time, I meant... it's Star wars time! yeah, that! Not ponies!
That's the point at which I knew I was going to enjoy this.
And boy, did I ever! Very well-written, engaging, funny, and STAR WARS PONIES. One of two errors here and there ("Rarity shook her head in disappoint at the sprawled-out famer", etc.) but overall nothing bad enough to break my concentration or stop me loving every second of it! Very well done, I look forward to more stuff like this!
Hahahaha!!! Oh, I needed this. Badly...
I'm not a star wars fan but... this was still gold!
Totally worth the read. And I agree with Applejack, THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE! And it shall be Spike! In the Prequels.
Spike waddled up to the two "The Force is strong with this one it is ."
Luck Starbucker I am your father!
Nooooooo. You can't be
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I never had any issues with the Lightsabers from the late 90's breaking not like the flimsy ones from the early 2000's but yeah I agree with you!
That chapter title alone had me laughing. Well played sir.
The puns and role playing are strong with this one...
What would have funnier is if Pinkie made a different reference, pulled off the make shift mask, and yelled "I CAN'T BREATHE IN THIS THING!" and wheezed a couple of times.
For those who know what I'm talking about, good, you remember that kinda-knock-off-ish movie
5230341 Where did you get the icon for your avatar?
This may seem weird, but I must analyze styles!
Rarity: started off with strong Makashi, but slowly degenerated into a messy Soresu/Shien mix, then finally ended with a bit of Shii-cho.
Applejack: Opened with a strong Ataru, but fell back on a well-balanced Niman.
Throughout the entire battle, the music from the fight between Obi-Wan and Anakin on Mustafar was playing in my head. Hilariously awesome.
Cue the music!
*coughRainbowDashcough*
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Spaceballs and I can totally see pinkie as Lord h
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You and me both!