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Your Antagonist


Shut up. Just write.

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Sometimes a pony needs an outlet to vent their stress. Applejack's just happens to be masked combat sports.

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Oh hell yes! SLAM BABY, SLAM!

That german suplex thing looked wicked painful.

Great story, I might have mentioned it ..

I'm sorry but I can't resist putting this :

Yeah, that was pretty hot. You really have a way with bringing out a girl's best features don't ya? lol

That was a really good match up. Not gonna lie, for a mere moment I thought this was going to turn raunchy once Savage got her in that bear hug and AJ was getting that anxiety attack. Yeah, was starting to sound like a rape train was gonna go down and even though I knew the tags said everyone, I still got chills from that scene I won't spoil in these spoilers lol

AJ is really amazing in fics. Tossed this beauty into my favs. It's a keeper!

I'll just leave this here, even if it's completely unrelated to the story.

POSSIBLE SPOILER

So, P.C. is Princess Celestia, right????

2655126 It's actually referring to an as-of-now unseen character, Pepper Corn. He was a older donkey that traveled from town to town, seemingly looking for something (or someone). But when a chance encounter and a bar-room brawl brought him and Applejack together in Manehattan, they caught the eye of McMane, who immediately entered them into their first challenge match. Though Gala Justice and Pepper Corn (he made the name up on the spot, don't judge him) were fine wrestlers in their own right, they truly shone as a team, busting moves such as the "Spiced Apple Cider Press", the "Rowdy Rodeo Double Kick", and the unbeatable "Third Finishing Move with a Corny Name".

They ruled the circuit for close to two years, until the day that Pepper Corn decided to call it quits and move someplace far away from all of the excitement. Because in all his time in the ring, he never truly forgot who the true love of his life was - a donkey whom he had met, one fateful day in Canterlot...

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That.....was surprisingly logical and well thought out. Well played. Well played, indeed.

I always wanted to say this…
LLLUCHAAAAA LLLLIBREEEE!!

So why am I reminded of Tina Armstrong?

...Okay, I did not actually read the story and I don't usually make a habbit of saying something without doing such - but I'd just like to make a mention of the fact that the preview image looks like Applejack just swallowed Dash's head in her mouth whole. :applejackconfused: :rainbowderp: :twilightoops:

"OMNOMNOMNOM." :pinkiecrazy: :derpytongue2:

Applejack's Entrance Theme would probably be something like JBL's entrance.

Wresting mask with a note inside it... it couldn't be, could it?
“Then, trrrrust your force, and head to the garden of madness!”
Yep, No More Heroes. References from two different games, I love it. Good show.

2747503 MY CHILDHOOD!

My god how long ago was that?

I was wondering why I seemed to recognize this writing style. Then, Candy Ravage. Oh, yeah, that guy.

3291466 Don't compare best pony to that cretin.
...I don't even know if he's still as much of a cretin as he was when I last checked. Agreed on the song, though.

Yay! Grats on the EqD feature, Antagonist! Nice to see you putting out these awesomely quirky ideas.

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It turns out that Applejack swallows RD's head a lot - it's her favoured way of stopping a conversation she doesn't like the direction of.

But this cloud has a silver lining - Rainbow can hold her breath, like, for EVER. And that's useful for all kinds of things!

Blackmail by Smarty Pants. Epic. Also, really fun story.

So wrestling in Equestria is not rigged ? What a wacky world :derpytongue2:

Applejack as a wrestler is something I've been hoping to see for a while now.

I wasn't disappointed. :ajsmug:

AWESOME STORY!
Westrling applejack is awesome XD

also question
the image....from where is it?...looks cool!

IT'S ME APPLEJACK
IT'S ME, APPLEJACK

IT WAS ME ALL ALONG, APPLEJACK

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"Thank you for the kind words and criticisms, they're greatly appreciated, and I'll try to to work on them in the future. Oh, and just between you and me..." Your Antagonist glanced around suspiciously to insure what he was about to say was loose from prying eyes and ears.

"This story was supposed to be the build up for an exhibitionism clop scene with light bondage, but... stuff... happened along the way." Antagonist rubbed the back of his head uncomfortably. "You can probably see some of the adult segments I didn't fully remove if I remember correctly. Anyway, thanks again, and you have a good one, bro."

Loathe,
Your Antagonist

Best pony doing major league wrestling and whooping massive minotaur ass! And after the whole message in the mask reference from No More Heroes, I was laughing through the whole story. Well except for that German suplex and burning hammer move. I was sucking air through my teeth then!

Ah so it wasn't my imagination. I had suspected it was just my incredibly dirty mind. Excellent. Loved the story, now that I finally got around to reading it. (!) There were a couple of parts that really stood out in my mind, (I watched a lot of Hajime no Ippo) and the scenes were super easy to visualize, which made the whole experience that much better.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

For some reason, I get an image in my mind of Applejack taking on a Hulk Hogan-esque persona as a wrestler, though a fair bit more humble. Her theme would be 'Real Equestrian.' Not sure on the exact lyrics, but this is 'Real American'

Either that or Bulk Biceps would be Equestria's Hogan.

That was so awesome! you should make a sequel where the crusaders DO find out AJ is Gala Justice during a fight! :derpytongue2: also I really like the name Gala Justice.. it fits her:ajsmug:.

Sequel please!:pinkiehappy:

Is this on Equestria Daily?

Yeah , I Marked a bit.:rainbowkiss:

Like this story and the reference to the slam master on the SNES SLAP INTO A SLIM JIM OHHHH YEEEEEEAH

3300634 as Jim Ross would say "aw son of a bitch"

I know WWE Wreatling is staged in the real world, but DAMN this story makes me wish I was a professional wrestler:pinkiehappy:

This story didn't age well.....

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