RainbowFlameThrower
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Errm; 6 views, but 7 thumbs?
That was not romance, so you might want to remove that tag.
Also, did you create multiple accounts to upvote your own fan fiction? That rating is very suspicious.
That was not romance, that was rape.
Lol xD
I found this hilarious. Good job.
2500634
It's normal for people to vote for something on the description alone, additionally the ebook/text links don't count as views.
I likes the story but it needs more sex.
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Good story, too short though
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Of course it is.
Sequel and/or another chapter ?
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Yes...
Maybe...
Probably not...
No.
Good Things: You use the word "Vagina" without making it sound awkward in the sentance. The idea is SPOT on. Yoiu got the personalities of both ponies pretty well down pat.
Things you could improve on: Its... REALLY short.... Applejacks dialogue seems clunky with the "Ah"s....
Not a bad tale overall.
2513743 yeah i agree. i was kinda hoping for a BDSM kinda thing....
2591982 Well if we can't get a sequel, then can we get two different members of the mare 6 or maybe all of them having a good time? Maybe with a BDSM theme?