Fun with Dolls

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Stasiarose

Stasiarose #1 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

Am I proud of myself? Yes, and no.

Fusion Fool the 3rd

Fusion Fool the 3rd #2 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/000/313/232/b94.png , dood.

shadowblitz13

shadowblitz13 #3 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

I both want more,and want to stab something that doesn't exist.....

Tarox

Tarox #4 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

Hysterical. I approve of this.

Prince Solstice

Prince Solstice #5 · Apr 30th, 2013 · · ·

2500561 I felt the same way after writing my stupid stories. Sorry about the shameless self promotion.

Man, I kind of liked this, there may have been a lack of details and description and it may have been only dialogue. This leaves a huge amount of imagination up to the reader. Normally I would rage at you for doing something like this. Of course I enjoy funny things like this cause I'm a creepy pony fag.

Anyways, back to what I was saying, perhaps a little more dialogue was needed in the part where Rarity is forced to lick Flutters. Perhaps some resistance, make it more believable. Heh, I like it, you get my seal of approval. Anyways, if you need any help or just another review, send me a message. I like helping the comical writers on this site... well any writer on this site. Anyways, cause I haven't done this in a while...

Final Verdict: I'd fuck my pony toys, of course I fuck anything inanimate.

Red-Zan