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625779625780This was very interesting. I liked how RD and Storm have a nice kind of relation ship together instead of a "just fuck me" type attitude.
Uhhhhhhhkay
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Maybe find someone to fix up some of the errors, but other than that, real good story.
I'd recommend going back and putting a space between all the dialogue, and not just between paragraphs. Either that or take those spaces out completely and just indent. It's kind of jarring to read when you both indent and use spaces, as I keep thinking the story has changed to another scene every time a space comes up. Typically you use only one or the other to avoid that.
ME: oh a clop fic.
facehoof
(only one chapter
That,
Was.
AWESOME AND SEXY AT THE SAME TIME!
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Glad you liked it.
This was awesome.... added to the emergency clop list as well as one of those stories that are awesome but need to be longer