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Onyxfire408


Hi, I'm just someone who just writes for fun. Don't expect great stories from me, or a lot of productivity. I'm also a Samurai if you've seen me at Babscon.

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*note* There are two descriptions, one is under the other. This story does not connect with any other story I made, it's been stuck in my head after I watched Snowdrop. Also, Snowdrop is not my character but is used with permission.

Sharp Spell is a regular unicorn stallion in Ponyville. He lives on his own and is happily learning the ways of magic on his own cause as he learns under the rule of Princess Celestia. On a regular day in the Canterlot Library, he gets a visit from his teacher Princess Celestia. She speaks to him of a new tradition that would hold in Cloudsdale that she wanted him to try, upon his visit he meets the creator of the new tradition. He felt his heart turn to ice but melted and turned soft as he met this mare. Is this what he thinks it is?

Other description
Snowdrop, the famous filly who inspired many pegasi to create the new and beautiful ice place creations known as snowflakes. As the years past, many pegasi in Cloudsdale make the snowflakes, spreading art among the land ponies of Equestria for them to enjoy and have fun. Snowdrop has now become a grown up mare and has the one thing she could ever create, happiness for everypony throughout Equestria. Upon the creation of snowflakes, she receives a visitor who wishes to partake in this activity, little did she know, this was a special visitor that she would fall for like a snowflake.

EDIT: Changed the cover art

Cover Image by Angel-Pup on DV

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 33 )

You might want to edit the description. A "heart turning into ice" means that the person in question has cut him/herself from all sources of affection and also will refuse to give affection in return, like Ebenezer Scrooge, or even Nightmare Moon and Queen Chrysalis. So if you say that "Sharp Spell had his heart turn into ice the moment he saw Snowdrop", that means that Snowdrop did something or reminded him of something so terrible that caused him to block himself off from any affection from her, and by extension, any chance of a relationship.

one small problem
HOW CAN SNOWDROP SEE? she's a blind pegasus for ponies sake how can she know what sharp looks like no description anwhere about what she thought sharp looked like or something like that other than that nice job I wonder if sillyfilly studio's will make a sequel to Snowdrop too

2419039 Ok one, I will explain how SD can see (heh heh it rhymes :rainbowlaugh:)

And two, how could Snowdrop see in the video huh? HUH?:rainbowhuh: Explain it!:pinkiecrazy:

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she's been led around by her mother so much she can judge distance by how far she walks to get there, and calso knows where everything is as well, and can sense when other ponies are nearby so she could avoid them as she travels

Isn't Snowdrop blind?

2430426she's now colorblind thx to Luna, she can see now, but no colors. I explained it in chapter 2

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at least I now have the explanation even i didn't see that coming and I have the ability to think up any amount of possibilities to anything and everything nice work hope that you Nevar give up and The Raven Master is Watching You

did snowdrop mother got raped!?

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did snowdrop mother got raped!?

ME:facehoof:, I'm pretty sure she didn't get raped.

I promise myself that i wouldn't cry :fluttershysad:, this chapter is very charming indeed :moustache:

Awesome! He restored her ability to see color...why do i have a feeling this will have strong rammifications though.

World of Color was that a reference to disney's show world of colors perhaps?

2620991I didn't really think about that, I guess it can be. :twilightsmile:

LOL I wonder how the other workers and everypony else react to Snowdrop seeing color now and probably announcing that she has a coltfriend

2660515 Probably the same as Primrose:twilightsmile:

Hehe that was a cute chapter and I knew wed hear from Luna sometime.

Aww another cute one :).

While this story is pretty sweet, I can't help but feel that things are progressing way too fast.
Day 1 - meet.
Day 2 - date.
Day 3 - "I love you".

Don't take me wrong, I enjoy reading this story :twilightsmile:

Still, patiently looking forward to more chapter :pinkiesmile:

Their related somehow. Fluttershy through Snopdrops line and Twilihgt through SHarp Spells. I just wish you would have written more Id love to have seen more of hte relationship grow.

Distant Cousins? I like it!

It was Fluttershy who was responsible for all of her friends and herself to gain their cutie marks. And help Twilight became an alicorn princess.

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Watch the episode "The Cutie Mark Chronicles".

Snowdrop is blind buddy, SHE'S BLIND, so she kinda CAN'T SEE, sooo, the story doesn't make sense with that bit but its still good. :facehoof::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh:

P.S SHE CAN'T SEE IN THE VIDEO.:facehoof:

So basically twilight is related to celestia by adoption.

3122106 wait what? She is no where near related to celestia. It's just a coincidence that sharp is related to Twilight.

you wouldn't think that 10 years is enough to gain sight...

I want to like this story -- I really, really do. I LOVE the concept of it, unfortunately but gods it feels bloody stiff. How each character talks is too uniform and feels unnatural. They don't feel like people. There are also some unnecessary words here and there such as at the baby foal. You don't need both "baby" and "foal"

I probably sound really nitpicky right now but it's just the little stuff that irks me. =\

Not going to dislike it yet -- I plan to read the rest of the story and see if it improves, but I'm treading cautiously at the moment methinks.

4612646 Honestly I don't care what you do. Do what you want to do. The Fic is done, nothing else to it. Nothing added, nothing removed, nothing changed. The only thing that is added is criticism, and I give no fucks to it.:moustache:

So comment and rate however you wish :twilightsmile:

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