Twilight Sparkle is in Canterlot for a visit as she would visit her parents, siblings, and best of all the princesses. As she was stargazing at the top of Canterlot Castle, terror occurs as she missteps and falls off the top of the royal castle. She thought that her time was up, she thought she was gone...she was wrong. A mysterious figure rescues her from her tragedy, a unicorn by the name of Eagle Eye. He is an expert fighter and flyer, but how can he fly? He's a unicorn, or is he? And what is with his bandages all over his back? And why does he look so familiar to Twilight?
Cover art by steffy-beff on deviant art
*Note, Eagle Eye has the same powers as Ratonhnhaké:ton from the King Washington DLC, All powers and references related to Assassin's creed belongs to Ubisoft.*
Keep writing this is kinda good.
Pretty cool story. I like the powers Eagle Eye has.
2514754thank you
Are the ponies in this story Humanoid? If they are you might want to add the human tag to this
2515719Thats not how it works, the human tags is for Humans. For example, it's for stories if they've been REAL humans, skin, hair, everything.
Anthro is different. They are humanoid but still in pony blood, they have their hooves for feet and magical abilities. I've argued the difference myself and I don't blame you, but the human tag is for anything that's actually HUMAN related.
2516296 ok thank you for the clarification
2516869your welcome, and thank you for reminding me to put the anthro note in the description.
2518335 glad to be of service
this was an awesome chapter, keep up the good work!
2529834Thanks dude
I love it as much as i love a sammich
2534003what about a sandvich?
2534013 YES
Great backstory! And good luck.
But thine fear it more than ours. Luna thought in her mind as the two princesses continued to follow the enraged unicorn with apology.
Wow, its hard to correct things using a tablet.
I would correct the other few dozen mistakes, but i cant on tablet, because they have comment sizes, cant post much more.
will fav and say them when i get on a pc if i remember.
im liking a lot this story!, also good luck with the finals
"Yes, we will be stopping this silly war between our sister and I." Luna followed as Twilight's face didn't change. It was still the same heated up face as the two princesses quickly looked around for something else to offer.
"Then what does you need?" Asked Luna as Twilight turned around with a serious face. -- Luna only says her name, she still uses you for other people
"How did I live?" Twilight asked as both princesses turned confused" -- You don't put question marks after a statement.
"Yes, it is very rare to be born in Alicorn royal blood. Only members of the royal family can be born, like my sister and I. Though, I have not had a nephew born an Alicorn for thousands of years, this was the first time we have had this happened. After I had received this news of the new born Alicorn, we wanted to hide the news in case of any attack or kidnapping." -- Lots of missing Capital letters, and bad grammar.
"But princess, how come you sound surprised and shocked when Luna thought he was alive, was he dead?"
"Yes, when you were saved, we swore that we had seen his eagle that we had seen long ago. He was the only one who could actually master his animal powers." Luna answered.
There, hoped that helped.
2563879Thx grammar nazi...
Whatever, I don't care, I don't know all the Victorian stuff so sue me, plus I'm working on the epilogue for my Derpy story
I dont care about proper grammar. Just please more chapters comrade.
Knew it from ch.2 they are sitting back to back
Good story, though this chapter seems small compared to your others
ow well
2627211Well I had a crap ton of stuff to do, plus finals are next week o.O
2627834book?
another awesome chapter
Nopony cares about the Prench waiter wooooooo.
2673717Well at least you don't, I'm just wondering how everypony else will react
ohmigosh!!! this story is so sweet!!!
Wow this book has rwally improved. almost no mistakes. And its really interesting.
2730121 i agree with this random comment
I can't wait to read the second one!
2877928second what?
...good...very good....just...Twilight seems...not as powerful as she should be...well what-eves
good chapter, enjoyable read. well done sir.
looks like hes been found out
gah it didnt add the
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3086764Dude, don't spam, please.
3086786
it was just to show my feelings which is
3087037 You could alternatively do (
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This book has improved so much sense it came out. Great plot too!
Good work. :3
Yay.
3236483 OR,
3236854i agree with
>Doesn't care about grammar
>obvious alicorn OC
>Mysterious character from Twilight's past
>Anthro
>OC romance with Twilight
>Super rad at everything he does
I don't think this can get much lower on my scale of dislike.