I almost want to demand they go and all 6 have fun with 1 or both of the princesses.

Holy shit. Nice ending. Loved it.

TREE SAP!!!!!!

Harem Ending is always Best Ending.

This wins five out of five spikes

For a first clopfic, this was nice. The thing about them being able to summon and dispel their dicks was odd and contrived but whatever.

Good work all around.

I had to put off reading this chapter because Cruel Angel's Thesis was playing in my mind.

2532464 i don't think twilight has enough erotic spots on her body for that. Maybe once she's a twilicorn.

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Actually, the penis spell cannot produce sperm (gametes are still too complicated to produce magically/artificially). So males are still needed to have kids. Also, among the non-Harmony-Element-bearing ponies of the world, the spell is only available for those with the magical skill to cast it, or those with the money or connections to have someone who knows it cast it for them.

The Elements of Harmony can give mares dicks... Awkward villain defeats, anyone?

“Huh? O-Oh, I’m not thinking that at all!”

Just saw this and it fit with what I imagined Twilight's face to look like I just had to share it!

That was...interesting.

2532746 I meant more all 6 go on 1 princess not the 5 friends + princess do twilight.

Well, in a world where magic and alternate physics exists, I could guess that quite... imaginative sex such as that orgy would be possible. Certainly is a wonderful, imagination...

loved it! loved it loved it loved it loved loved loved loved loved loved LOVED IT!

Futas at will!? Someone! Anyone! This needs a sequel!

Yeah, it turns out that for some reason, we can summon or dispel our dicks at will now

Okay, I know this next question will seem somewhat off considering this is a story about magic pony mare cock spells, but...

wat? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png

Also, where is Celestia looking down at the library thinking, "Just as planned."
After all, why else WOULD the researchers have chosen a 19 year old virgin? Because Pimplestia! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png

No worries, Spike. You may have a big mess to clean up, but only one of them produced actual tree sap.

That was just amazing, and Rarity's passage was especially well written. Twilight's life is no doubt changed forever. She probably felt like a giant, breathing clitoris at the end there.

Let's just hope they invite the last part of the gang to be in on this in four or five years. I don't even want to think about how unwanted he would feel if all six of his friends were having sex without him, even going so far as to grow dicks for each other while ignoring his.

I was wondering when there would be wing play, especially after so much horn play.

Someone needs to do an Octavia/Vinyl story in this setting, stat!

2532464 You forgot to add Cadence and Trixie.

Sure that's tree sap, Spike?

Able to summon dicks at will... thats gonna make their lives alot more erotic.

Okay, I know that this is pretty much a porno, and it follows porn-logic so we really shouldn't take the storyline seriously, but. BUT. The moment they said that they could suddenly summon and dispel their dicks at-will, I immediately said to myself 'Aaand this story has officially jumped the shark!'

Not that that's a BAD thing in this case, mind you, it's one of those nonsensical things that, in a more serious story, you'd just want to slap the author across the face with a big purple baseball bat-sized dildo for. But in this case, it works, because it's a porno. And who doesn't love porn?

Don't answer that last question.

Also....does anyone see the Cutie Mark Crusaders finding out about this spell, and Sweetie Belle winds up getting her cutie mark for successfully casting it on her friends? No? Just me? It's exactly the kind of thing you could see them getting into once they find lots of adults hiding things from them, and being more cuddly. Especially Rarity. Oh jeebus, especially Rarity, because Sweetie Belle can be so very nosy alongside her friends.

Damn I wish that you would add Cadence, Celestia, Chrysalis and Luna.

2650865 Two points for the euphemism, high-five for the alliteration. ...There needs to be an emoticon for a good-natured eye roll.

You have left it off with them able to summon and dispel their dicks at will. Two things need to be done. 1st. Twilight needs to inform the committe that requested her to test it that repeated use causes the one the spell is casted on to be able to summon and dispel the cock at will without unicorn assisstance. 2nd. You have to make a sequel. Simply because that little fact opened up so many possibilites for future clop chapters. Just as the end of season three opened many episode ideas.

We need Twilight to screw Celestia, Luna and Cadence. And possibly Chrysalis too. And once she's done with that... Invite the other girls into the fun.

Damn. I wish I could write that story myself.

2895667 Ooooh yeah, that would be awesome.

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Pretty nifty story. A tad repetitive later on, but you more than made up for it with this last chapter. And even though the storyteller in me thinks the "summon penis at will" thing is kind of arbitrary and convenient, the rest of me thinks that's a pretty awesome development. And I would certainly be okay with a sequel or continuation of some kind. Well done, and happy writing!

Any request?

Well done! Great story you have here with all that smexiness. Great work and thanks for sharing.

I've reread this fic multiple times - admittedly in good part for the clop - but this time after finishing it, I was thinking: if the EoH could give them the power to summon/dispel their dicks at will, who says it can't make them work fully too? In which case, six-way pregnancy, anyone?

Pffftahahahahah. The elements reacted with the spell, that's really silly :D

Ah well this was fun anyway.

Dude best mlp futa story ever, u gunna do one with the cmc?

Now all that's needed is to get Spike and the CMC in on this universe. Raribloom and Sweetiejack, anyone?

So here we have an example of the oddly popular futa clopfic. Before I get into reviewing the story, I feel compelled to display a bit of my learning on the topic. "Futa" comes from the Japanese word, Futanari, which literally translates to hermaphrodite in English. A person with both sets of genitalia. In practice, in Japanese hentai and erotic manga, this term often involves some female character sporting a dick, and the focus of the story/scene/picture is her reaction to this fact. Occasionally you have stories where the girl has had it for awhile, and the scene is that she has been discovered or something. In many cases the dick is magical/new and the girl uses it to have fun with a regular girl, often with questionable/non-consent (rape). In actually entertaining to read/view tales, there is some elements of exploration and psychological questioning about things like gender identity, sexual orientation, and so on.

Growing from those origins, we have (in my perception anyway) two sorts of futa these days. You have the more intellectual side that explore such topics as shame of being different/unexpected/abnormal, exploring the other gender, and coming to grips with things of a sexual nature. Then you have the fetishy side of futa where some people just find it really hot for an otherwise female character to have a dick and use it/have it used.

This story is clearly one of the latter. If you just want a mindless clopfic where the M6 get dicks and fuck each other, which no real plot or exploration of mindset of the ponies involved in the dick-shenanigans gets in the way of your wankfest, then this review is probably already tl'dr anyway. Have fun. If you're like me and prefer more intellectual and creative things, then you're probably going to be sorely disappointed. I'm not sure who that leaves as an audience for this review. Oh well, pressing on.

In terms of things I can say good about this story, it presents a rather snuggly, happy sort of mood and has a few endearing moments. There is a lot of emphasis on cute+sexy or adorable+sexy whenever the perceptions of the ponies are described in narration. If nothing else, the story tries with some success to convey a sense of friends bringing each other comfort, as suggested early in the fic by Rarity. Not that this is particularly realistic, but for a sexual fantasy not terribly concerned about realism, this one is at least fairly pleasant to read. Pleasant in that it avoids most of the icky fetishes that are often piled into this sort of thing where the author tries to include a little of everything to please everyone, while assuring he will likely weird out or turn away many with something. I guess by contrast if you're expecting an arbitrary list of various fetishes in the hope that yours made the list and you'll get to enjoy it... sorry.

On a technical level, this story doesn't contain a lot of distracting errors, but could probably use some more polish. Some of the phrasing is a bit unnatural, and the occasional weird punctuation misused (like elipses). I didn't really pay close attention to the grammar, less than I usually do, as I found myself often skimming a lot of parts so I could easily have missed way more errors than I usually do.

As I said, I found myself skimming quite a bit. Even setting aside the futa stuff this story was really very boring and repetitive. Predictably the progression of events takes us from Twilight learning her dick spell and having the first friend (Rarity) conveniently arrive to test it out with, to doing each of her other four friends, then to finish off with a six-way (orgy). There is a really rigid pattern to each of the one-on-one sessions with her friends wherein Twilight and the friend play mare-to-mare to orgasm, then Twilight bestows the dick on her friend, fellates them, they they move on to the main event. A few details are slightly shifted around, such as the exact pose and such used before and after the fellatio, but Fluttershy's toys are the only really noteworthy difference between the five encounters. Rarity's encounter is somewhat of an exception because it is intermingled with the overall introduction of the story, the two don't play around before the dick spell is cast, and there is some attention paid to getting Twilight from shy virgin to experienced lover. Not a lot, but a token level of attention. The only other odd variation to this formulae is that apparently for some reason Rainbow Dash and Pinkie want to go last in the lineup so they can lose their virginity to each other instead of to Twilight. Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity all lose theirs with Twilight without so much as a passing thought. In fact the only reason we know they're virgins is because Rarity says so at the start of all this.

The specifics of the dick spell ensure that the dick-wielder can't cum until whomever she is fucking does. This leads to a lot of magically enforced simultaneous orgasms. The spell also gives a whole lot of repeat usage to the dick-wielder, so they more or less have no recovery time of note. This means that each penis-sex portion of each scene lasts three male orgasms outside of the orgy at the end. One from fellatio, then two from some form of penetrative sex with Twilight. At this point the pair get worn out and fall asleep together. As I said, very repetitive. While they produce ejaculate, Twilight explains early on that no risk of pregnancy is to be worried about. The spells are not supposed to be permanent, but some vaguely Element of Harmony related magical interaction causes the six mares to permanently be able to summon their personal meat and dismiss it at whim after their orgy.

One of the minor attempts at variety that is included in the scenes is that occasionally someone pays attention to Twilight's horn. In the canon of this story, unicorn horn's are not particularly sensitive unless the owner channels mana in it, at which point it becomes sensitive and "horngasm" becomes possible. Rarity and Applejack make use of this fully in their sessions, and again in the orgy. Rainbow and Pinkie each touch or caress her horn, but while it is inert. Since it comes up in five of the six sex scenes though, it just becomes part of the repetitive side of things.

It really does feel like the author created a basic script for each scene, then "extensively adlibbed" just enough of the details, dialogue, and some of the events in order to technically be different with each scene. Applejack's, Rarity's, and the end orgy take place at Twilight's home while Fluttershy's, Rainbow's, and Pinkie's scenes each take place at the other mare's home. The dialogue for each scene more or less fits the character involved. So the introduction phase of each scene is fairly different. However they all pretty much want to skip any real sort of foreplay and jump right into fucking. They all find Twilight cute/adorable when she is in pleasure/orgasming; Twilight even mentions "so I've been told" when Dash compliments her as this makes the fourth time it has been brought up by this point. The pattern is followed, and we end with them falling asleep. The transition from one scene to the next often includes some elements of waking up.

So despite the fact we have 6 sex scenes, you could probably just read the first chapter to get the jist of what is going on, one of the middle chapters to see your favorite pony fuck Twilight, then maybe stick around for the last chapter to see the orgy. Reading more than one of the five middle chapters won't really give you any meaningful difference (you'll have read essentially the same scene twice at this point), and if you're looking for more fap fuel still you're probably better off seeking it elsewhere as most guys I know aren't too keen on a whole lot of repetition in their porn.

If you're looking for anything remotely resembling depth or quality, you won't find it here. If little things like that don't interest you and you just want 'omg mares with cocks!' then why are you still reading this review?

This needs more. For example, the side story of the first two nights between Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash

For now, you dear sir earned this:
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When I saw group being the last chapter I was really hoping you wouldn't chicken out and have it only go as far as four on two. I'm glad you went for broke and worked out a five on one. As impractical as it is in real life, I don't think we read clop for realism. Go big or go home

6704834 preach it, dude

"pouring over" is a common mistake - when you mean studying rather than covering with a liquid, the correct word is "poring over".

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Better respond to comments nearly four years old :p

You know there's an issue when the story breaks it's own established canon off the bat within the first chapter. Do I even wanna risk the rest of this mediocre run of the mill generic as hell clopfic? Sure why not, got nothing better to do anyway.

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To be perfectly honest I haven't been keeping up. I watched season 6 premiere and ending but almost nothing in between. I more enjoy the fandom and what it produces rather than the actual show. Nothing wrong with the show but the stories and things people come up with is more entertaining to me.

Did she mention the semi-permanent dicks in the report she sent? Because that seems like a pretty major side affect.

Not bad, but major.