Comments ( 69 )

Heh. TwiLuna. Always fun when one of these come around.

~Skeeter The Lurker

dat story name

Beautiful. :heart:

Hmmm... I guess I'll read it. If not, this'll be the first Futanari story I turn down. I most likely will read it though.

2860103
No problemo, Dancer. :derpytongue2:

2860105 I shall wait with bated breath for the other one you promised :3

2860110
Wait, was that Regi's, or the tentacle one? I'm writing so many now I'm losing count. :rainbowlaugh:

2860148 The one with me and our favorite mod :3

Oh my Celestia this name :3

I love it!

2860199
Oh yeah...
*Watches Spanish soap operas for inspiration*

Awesome story Bobby. I feel like this is one of your better stories!

>TwiLuna

inb4 feature box

> That last line.

Well played Bob, well played...

yay featured :3 gj bob <3

Y'know, I almost didn't read this... but then I saw BDSM :)

At first I was like, "God damnit..."

i.imgur.com/R6qrD.gif

and

i.imgur.com/y2Zwk.gif

But then I saw it was by you, and read it.

i.imgur.com/DNO3a.gif

"Not bad... I secretly liked it... But:"

i.imgur.com/6N2Fa.gif

And that last line...

i.imgur.com/tvwQC.gif

Overall:

i.imgur.com/NHuJ8.gif

and

i.imgur.com/Wx9MQ.gif

Finally:

i.imgur.com/8lsg2.gif

Also, this random GIF seems like something Luna would say:

i.imgur.com/cHSqp.gif

“Because it’s going placid,”

I don't know why but that line made me think of the movie, "Lake Placid." I had to stop reading in order to laugh my ass off :rainbowlaugh:

It should be flaccid though right?

2861349
Damn you errant Gdocs bad corrections! :flutterrage:
Thanks for the help though! :twilightsmile:

2861368 Ahh no worries, tis what I do when not reading futa luna x twilight clopfics. :pinkiecrazy:

2861368

Hi Bob, wow featured again! I loved you Hades and Joker stories, those were great.

Now let's see what we got here...

WHAT IN THE NAME OF CELESTIA'S BEARD!?

:raritycry:

mrwgifs.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/05/My-Little-Pony-Rarity-Fainting-Reaction-Gif.gif

Huzzah! The Dicks Have Been Doubled!

2860113 All of his writing is fuhkin' amazing.

Oh my...Bob has written another one of my fetishes...:twilightblush:

d22zlbw5ff7yk5.cloudfront.net/images/cm-34633-050bc50ce3a7b4.gif

Commence read.

After reading:

cdn.bleacherreport.net/images_root/article/media_slots/photos/000/760/085/applause-gif-tumblr-47_original.gif?1363040789

media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9h5fvFZLV1qe0pab.gif

i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/202/566/boner.png

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Excellent work, my friend. :raritystarry:

Though fertilization through the futa process was impossible, since it was only magically made, not from the actual host’s body.

Shhhhh...there's a spell that can change that. :rainbowwild: If you wrote futa for the purpose of impregnation, I would love you forever. :twilightblush:

but but, I want moar I wasn't even done yet, four is not enough.

definately will keep an eye or camera on his stories very fappable.

You must be smoking some strong shit to write a fine piece of beauty like this. I wonder what would happen if you smoked an even stronger thing.

Tast #34 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · 2 ·

I am not gonna lie. My. Fetish. All of it... Literally all of it.

Deviancy aside, I feel like I owe the writing aspect some attention. Luna was cheesy, of course. That's easily excused via blahblah exile blahblah. There was a few instances where purple prose kicked in and you used a few sentences to say "luna's dick". I know a smaller word count doesn't seem as impressive as a larger one, but a story that flows well is easier to read.

Ya done good. Also. That last paragraph. I will be WATCHING. Restraining order levels of watching. (Stalking is such a nasty word)

the vaginal pounder of doom

This. :rainbowlaugh:

"What felt like an entire wall of semen push through her shaft followed as Luna came, squirting from her other sexual organ as well as the one currently in use shoved itself as far as it could in Twilight’s clit."

So, apparently you use your erection to stick it in a girl's clitoris.
Don't know if that works.

This isn't even about the silly grammatical mistakes, this is just disturbing.

I am SO gonna read this story on my YouTube channel. I want to start hilarious story fanfic readings and this is just fucking perfect!

Of course I have to get my crappy computer to work properly so I edit the clips a bit...

God I hate and love technology...

2864859
Heh, sorry about that. This was my first time doing futa, and it was really late when I wrote this. But thank you for the helpful suggestion, and I'll be sure to not make the same mistake again. :pinkiehappy:

2866101
Oh man, that would be sweet! Hit me up with a link if you do get it done. I'd just love to hear it! :twilightsmile:

Well it won't be right away since I have to maintain a YouTube account, a Deviantart account, and try to get the second chapter of my FIMFiction story done. Yep. Shit on ma plate, as is said in da ghetto. (Lol. I'm not black so saying that was probably insulting and offensive to the homies out there.)

But you shall hear your story on Youtube by me! You haveth my word! (-th)

Keep up your work. You earned a follower today!

"With a final loud grunt, Luna felt a weird sensation of her penis tickling and heating up like never before. Almost as if lava was shooting out, though much lessened in heat."
Well, thank goodness the temperature wasn't actually lava-like! :twilightsmile:

But in all seriousness, great story! The clop scenes are excellent, and the ending was hilarious! Favorited and thumbed-up!

good story, a little out of character for me... but a really good story.

This was an okay story. :rainbowwild:

RainbowBob.

UniqueSKD here...obviously.

I might be able to do that fanfic reading this week. I'll be doing it with a mate of mine hopefully, and it will be doubling as a reaction video. The fun has been doubled!

Oh god after this story that just sounds wrong, now!

I'll let you know when the vids up, though you might see or hear it before I tell you.

Be unique and stay unique!

2879410
Why thank you, my good friend! Can't wait to see what you'll produce! :raritywink:

Luna couldn’t hold back her laughter, the touch and feel of her new sexual organ driving her near ecstatic with tickles. “T-Twilight!” she started, taking in a breath to control the shakiness of her voice. “D-don’t stop... keep going.”

U-unf... there's just something about this that was incredibly adorable and heinously perverse that I absolutely loved.
All my unfs are belong to you.

2859936 aint that a fact! the only one that can top a good Twi/Luna is a Spitfire/Twi

Login or register to comment