Looking good, though I've already seen the pastebin of this chapter. Look forward to the new material; this is well set for lots of sexy corruption shenanigans.
It wasn't exactly subtle; they've clearly interacted before, and Lilith only appears to have one type of interaction with ponies. Nothing wrong with that, but no one will be surprised if Luna was once under her sway.
Another chapter, I do so spoil you
Feedback is encouraged; anything you don't like, let me know before I get too set in my ways.
Looking good, though I've already seen the pastebin of this chapter. Look forward to the new material; this is well set for lots of sexy corruption shenanigans.
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Oh, yes, I'm not planning on a *ScrewScrewScrewOkayIWin* thing here.
Also, is it just me, or do Luna and Lilith seem to have some...history?
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It wasn't exactly subtle; they've clearly interacted before, and Lilith only appears to have one type of interaction with ponies. Nothing wrong with that, but no one will be surprised if Luna was once under her sway.
still loving it
Mind your apostrophes. It should be "Lilith's", not "Liliths".