Don't worry, I dislike Futa as much as you do I might use it (don't want all the clop scenes to be precisely the same, after all, and I am having that problem already as I write) but it will never be a focus.
2483759 im glad 2 hear that lol! well if i may be so bold, if u gotta use futa just pls dont do it for applejack or celestia, they and twilight and sweetie belle r hottest for me
but thats just a request, its ur story do as u gotta do
i like this very much so far! just pls tell me it wont devolve into a bunch of futa...
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Don't worry, I dislike Futa as much as you do I might use it (don't want all the clop scenes to be precisely the same, after all, and I am having that problem already as I write) but it will never be a focus.
is it weird that i find this stuff interesting?
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im glad 2 hear that lol! well if i may be so bold, if u gotta use futa just pls dont do it for applejack or celestia, they and twilight and sweetie belle r hottest for me
but thats just a request, its ur story do as u gotta do
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I don't know, is it weird I'm writing this stuff?
2486656 Not in my opinion, i really like Mind Control its hypnotic for me
I remember this. Its pretty damn good; hope to see the third chapter soon.
2484888 No, it's not weird at all.
I already like this character
This is pretty good as long as no pony gets hurt physically I'm all for this.
hope to see more soon.
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Oh, goodness no.
Lilith loves her servants, hurting them is a quick way to make her angry
2498843 Then that is good. I wonder Will Lilith ever let Twilight get her mind back, along with her Identity? or is that a permanent loss?
Moar.
Excellent start, nice use of True Name folklore.
You use the word "she" and "her" too often and it makes it hard to follow what is going on (which 'she' are you referring to?).
Other than that, I didn't really have any fap-impeding problems with it.
Keep up the good work