The Doctor is confused. Not only because he's newly a pony, but because everypony seems to already know him. Especially a cute little filly that's the daughter of a pony with strange eyes. Derpy apparently already is his campanion, despite meeting her for the first time.
Yet while it's all new for the Doctor, for Dinky the situation is very different. To her he is no stranger, but a Stallion she is ever so glad to see again. The love of her mother's extremely long life. Also, Dinky has a plan. A plan to give her mommy and the Doctor something utterly priceless.
Chapters (19)
Am i surireusly the first one to comment
Incredible story, and as a Whoovian myself, I found that I actually understood every single thing that was said.
Just wanted to point out that TARDISes are grown, not built
4802626 I actually knew that. Later on the master is supposed to spout a line about how most of the other time machines the time lords and ladies built being pale imitations. But then I forgot and there isn't a good place to insert it now, and it's completely unimportant to this story. Dinky of course knows none of this at this point so she assumes built rather than grown. She's very smart, but still also very young so there are lots of things she doesn't know because of sheer limited time.
But those pickle jars are evil
hold on im confused last chapter ms. The Doctor said Gallopfrey but now its gallopfree so which is it?
4826580 Wait, I got it right. Gallopfreean is an awkward word but I actually didn't screw up. This is surprising.
I'm really confused
5374403 I'd like to help, but that is a bit too vague. Could you be more specific?
5375102 I'm a little confused about “the plan" and how dinky is trying to achieve it
5375368 well there are two plans. The first is simply let Derpy and the Doctor fall in love without telling him the truth so he in no way feels obligated. When that fails it becomes a hunt of a maguffin broken into a lot of parts. I don't show much of that, mostly it's just the end result. It does what it's supposed to, showing them a reality where Dinky's plan works like she intended and both finally know for sure.
5379252 when you say “both finally know for sure" your taking about her getting her dad back?
5379252 also in the chapter “bluebird" is that when they finish getting all the part ie is that after?
5379617 Well that too, but the whole point is proving to both her parents that even though they met Dinky before they fell in love, they would have anyway.
5379636 Yes, it's complete, and the Derpy and Doctor have already used it, and Dinky has instructions from her future self to do what she does and put it in the TARDIS.
5383004 thanks I understand it now and I must say besides the layout being a little confusing it quit clever
5374403 u and me both this is makeing my head spin like nuts
Oh dear, Derpy is another "River Song", well then! let's see how this goes!
*facepalms* You just had to do it, Doctor, you just had to commit an unforgivable mistake...
You Asked "What Could Go Wrong?"
...... um... I got most of that explanation, but.. could someone, explain it a bit clearer?
'nuff said
Only Pinkie Pie....