*NOTE: THERE IS NO STEAMPUNK IN THIS STORY*
(This story stars the 12th Doctor!) The Hooves family doesn't get to take many family trips, so when they go to see the Raggedy Doctor (their universe's equivalent of The Doctor), the whole family comes along. How will they react when they accidentally go to our universe instead? Will the Doctor be overjoyed at returning to his home universe? Will Ditzy, Dinky, and Sparkler assume human form? What if they meet other incarnations of the Doctor, or worse, River Song? Let's find out.
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Interesting, very interesting.
However I have a two question
1 what number doctor is he the 10th or 12th (I doubt that he is the 11th and if it is the 10th when dose this take place)
B no 2 Are we going to meet past companions in the near future.(I thought Susana has died during the time war but details who needs them)
Anyway can't wait for updates.
1457916 Her name was Susan, and I doubt she died in the Time War, because she didn't have a TARDIS, and therefore couldn't go to Gallifrey in order to fight. He's number 10, since no two Doctors dress alike. I was planning on having at least one Companion in the story, but almost certainly more. Also, I'm afraid that you will have to wait, since this is currently just a story that I'm using to make it easier to write my other one (which is my main focus) Anyway, I think I might change his clothes, and make him number 12, so I can have a character to mold from the base Doctor, adding little quirks and whatnot.
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Dang You Auto-correct (I set my laptop on Automatic correction and to lazy to turn it off).
Any way Susan being still alive actual might seem possible if you put it like that. (the reason most people think shes dead is that the doctor once said, "Before the war, I was both a father and a grandfather."-doctors daughter)
1458949 Actually, that was a field medic (Dr. Constantine) he met during world war II, and the actual quote was "Before the war, I was both a father and grandfather. Now I am neither, but I am still a doctor." to which the Doctor replied, "I know the feeling."
Anyway, number 10 once stated that he assumed Susan was dead, but he'd never actually checked.
Just a quick Dr. Who continuity note for non-fans: Susan was stranded by her grandfather (the very first incarnation of The Doctor that we ever met) on a post-apocalyptic Earth that had recently been liberated from the Daleks in about 2020. His reasons were good... weren't they always? She'd fallen in love with the leader of the Human Resistance (whose name was not John Connor) and The Doctor felt that she was needed to help him rebuild Earth. Besides, he was having one of his periodic "I am a monster" guilt trips and he felt she would be happier with the man she loved rather than wandering space and time with her silly old grandfather.
Just consider whether she'll be happy to meet her grandfather again, having been stranded on a shattered and nearly post-civilised Earth (which might still have some stragglers of the Dalek army running around) for who knows how long whilst her grandfather was obviously off meeting this blonde... bimbo and having kiddies? She'll ever have developed a Celestia-like wisdom from her years helping reunite and rebuild a shattered world or developed a Nightmare Moon-like lust for vengeance from years in hell.
1468487 interesting, I was under the impression that he had dropped her off in the sixties. In fact, she married a man named David Campbell and had a son (as well as adopting several children) She met up with him again in 1998. She also spent time aboard a space station, where I'm told she regenerated, and believed herself to have killed the Master (he was actually found and revived by some Time Lord guy, I forget his name)
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That's the fun thing with what laughingly passes for a 'continuity' in Doctor Who. There are so many conditional events, revised timelines and altered histories that even fairly major canon characters can have multiple different lives.
Rose Amy and River and why is everything underlined
1469807 Dramatic effect
1469976 Actually, I just messed up. I forgot to put a closing bracket on the "end underline" part of the formatting thingamajig, so it just didn't stop.
1469807 Amy has RED hair.
1470164 either way i like it. tis a fun change of pace
1470164 so there is rose and river how did rose get there she is in another universe
1470172 well, I kinda... fixed it. sorry.
1470175 To quote Dr. Song, "Spoilers"
1470178 ha, no problem. it's just nice to see something different every once in a while. ya know?
1470189 of course.
1470184 any way jenny so how will 4 descents of the doctor deal with being in the same room as well as two of his wives
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... do you really think I'll tell you? 
1470208 of course or you would make flultershy sad
1470237 Well, to be honest, I have no idea. I don't really plan ahead with these chapters. I just figured that working in all of those characters would be a great opportunity. Admittedly, it may have been a bad idea to do it in a single chapter, but... too late now!
1480544 sweet. That's just... sweet. not awesome, not cool, not stupendous. Just sweet.
Jenny, Rose, And River? Oh boy, things are getting awkward..I Love it!!
"Seriously, Doctor, what's the probability of all of this happening by chance all in one day?"
"Seriously, River? With every co-incidence that's occurred today in my personal time-line? I'd say about one in several dectillion googles, which is several multiples of the number of baryonic particles in the universe. Which suggests to me that it didn't happen by chance at all. The only questions we therefore need to wonder is who is writing this script, for what reason and whether anything in all the multi-verse will still exist when this plan, whatever it is, reaches fruition."
Oh god....I have a feeling we will be meeting up with Jack Harkness soon.
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Captain? as in "Captain Jack Harkness", my favorite Doctor who Companion?
oh, this story is going to be fantastic.
JACK: "What?!? I'm not even allowed to say hello to people anymore?!?" -- That is my all-time favourite Jack Harkness line, by the way. It just shows how little the Doctor trusts Jack to keep his mind on the job and off flirtation.
Yep, that's Jack for you. It's great to finally see him in a pony fic, even if he is a human in it. Very well done.
Altho this chpater was short, i liked it alot. i like jack :)
1534500>>1587406 Thanks, Jack won't be in the next chapter, though. This was really just a nod to Jack's fans. (besides, I have no idea how to incorporate him into UNIT. Uh, I mean... character development issues! Yeah. The Doctor's not going back to UNIT in the next chapter... nuh-uh!) Anyway, the next chapter is really short. I mean, this one looks pretty long in comparison; but fret not, fans of my Trip! The story of the Hooves-turned-Smith Family shall continue! Can you say "series?" Oh! and I'm changing the family's surname to "Turner"
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*NOTE: THERE IS NO STEAMPUNK IN THIS STORY, THAT WAS JUST THE ONLY IMAGE I COULD FIND SHOWING A HUMAN HOOVES FAMILY*
Ummmm,then would you kindly post the source of the pic then? pretty please? since well,you're right,this is pretty muh the only pic the shows Derpy,Dinky,Amethyst Star and Dr Hooves/Time Turner together as humans.
I have learned that Unit's Commander in 2006 was Emily Chaundhry, but... screw it. I'm still using Haines in the sequel.
Awesome story man it was the best doctor story I have ever read
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Really? Sweet.
1820691yeah they always have the doctor like defeat discord with the mane 6 but this is the doctor derpy and their kids it is amazing!
1636494 I did. I'd really like to get someone to make a more accurate picture, but that hasn't worked out so far.
Nice ending :)
2148630 What? Sparkler's cover name is Lucy. You're probably thinking of Dinky's cover name: Penny. Silly Princess.
Oooooohhhhhhhh
now i feel stupid 
. Oh and i prefer Sky not princess too formal i hate formal crap 
2148762 Then don't. The first chapter is on my FanFiction account. I assume you know how to find the link to that.
he explained time to a class of foals.......classic doctor moment right there!
2149304 nope
4317085 Here: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/8977813/1/Almost-Normal
4317105 dammit i decide to do it myself my going on fanfiction search your name and i start reading it then you post a link
4317110 That sucks.
4317121 well i just read the full chapter and all i can say is "I don't even"