This story is a sequel to A Transdimensional Family Trip
He's a legend. A myth. The last of the Time Chargers. The Oncoming Storm. He is the stallion from Gallopfrey. The Predator of the Darlocks. He is the Raggedy Doctor. Join him as he travels with Colgate Minuette in his big, blue barn. Sort of a Rags-centric prequel to A Transdimensional Family Trip. Fair warning: this is my first time writing first-person pony fiction. Formerly edited by Rain-M24, and currently looking for a new editor.
Chapters (4)
I loved your last one so I'm going to love this on unless it is terrible then I won't but I will tell you if it is good or not
Ok I have to say it captain Jack yes 100%yes and it was good and no I don't know why Colgate doesn't know why she is wearing a watch
I do not get the dislike on this fic it's really cute and looks like fun.
Hey, Sanchez
Just finished reading it over and I just wanted to tell you that
there weren't any mistakes I found in your writing.
(Also, happy yesterday day of birth)
Until next time~
So..there ya have it.
2221573 Okay, thank you very much, Rainy.
I just have one question about this story. Will the fez be making an appearance or not?
that was great i expect more form this soon... or else
2231248 No. This is the twelfth doctor, he wears a top hat.
2231613 Uh, there is no 12th Doctor. Not yet anyway
2231649 That's the point. It allows me to create my own version of the Doctor. Not only does it spare me the difficulty of writing Eleven properly, but it helps to sync up with Turner from my other story.
2231613 Ah! You see the reason I thought it was supposed to be 11 in this is because A) Raggedy being in the title which is a term associated with 11 and B) That pic you used is supposed to be pony-fied 11, something I found out when I posted a thread in the Doctor Whooves group asking what kind of pony would 11 be and was directed(And shocked) to find out that there's already a canon version of him which is the pick you used.
2231943 Well, since the character's name is Raggedy Doctor (and I've already headcanon-ified it as being his cover name to differentiate himself from the Whoniverse Doctor) I kind of had to put "Raggedy" in the title. Besides, I put a whole lot of thought into who I made the pony version of the 12th Doctor. Creating one just wouldn't do, you know? Besides, going only on character names is fairly troublesome when determining canon. Basically, it's fanon that he's the 11th Doctor, but even that is debatable. Since he's a background pony, I can make up any backstory for him that I want, without the risk of it being contradicted by the canon. Aren't I clever? By the by, do you think I should give the story the "Doctor Whooves" tag? I mean, he's technically Doctor Whooves, but he's a parallel to the character associated with the name. You know what? I'm gonna add it anyway. Might get more favorites that way.
2232014 I'm not saying at ALL this is a bad idea. I actually like it, it's original, fresh, something that doesn't happen much if at all in Doctor Who crossovers. Sure there's fresh and original ideas on where to go with the story, but a large and vast majority sticks with the 10th Doctor for stories and while I loved David Tennant's run he's not my FAVORITE Doctor. Before Matt Smith I was a casual fan of the show, but this little scene right here made me a fan for life
So it's refreshing to see this kind of ingenuity
2232067 I agree completely. I'm kinda stuck at the moment, though, so further ingenuity's probably a good bit away. Personally, I love all of the Doctors*. Even the non-canon ones, like the Shalka Doctor. well, Six is kinda iffy, but still. They're all great. Anyway, yeah. The next chapter's a good bit off. I'll try to make it good, though. You know, as a means of preventing people from getting too upset? Really, though, i might have written myself into a corner. I'm afraid that I can be a bit of a reckless writer. Real shame, that.
*The Valeyard, while canon, does not count as the Doctor, since he no longer calls himself "Doctor."
2232141 I like all of them, because really they're the same guy technically, but it was Matt Smith's performance as the 11th that brought me from a casual fan to a never miss an episode if I can help it fan.
2232141 Also, sorry to hear that. Actually if you need any help I've been trying to get my 11th Doctor story up and running for a while now, so maybe we could bounce some ideas around? Get the creative thoughts flowing so to speak?
2232171 That is the single greatest idea I've heard in quite a few hours. Since I've watched a good bit of Doctor Who today, that's a really good thing.
2232181 Glad you agree!
AWESOME!!!!!!!! You have just earned this!
Appropriate listening music!
Now I just need to sort out MY next chapter
Oh, Roma - I mean Cole[\i].
Can't wait to see what happens with two time lords + a platoon of Lunar Guards...
2748569 So am I. I wonder what I'll come up with...
Yay, update!