There was once a time when harmony existed in Equestria.
When laughter was not brought on by madness.
When honesty was a virtue, not a risk.
When loyalty was considered honorable, not foolish.
When kindness was from the heart, not for making a debt.
When friendship was magic.
Nine years after Discord brought Equestria to ruin, Spike must return with Rarity, the CMC, Trixie, and Ditzie in a vendetta to destroy the Lord of Chaos and restore their lost home. But Spike will soon come to realize this goal may bring more pain than peace.
Follows pre-season four canon.
Youtube playlist with entire ST, here.
Chapters (4)
It has potential. But you might want to make this have a bit more detials. I don't really know what is going on.
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Well, I really wanted to develop on what lead to Spike getting where he was today throughout the story. He'd have flashbacks and stuff as he visited certain places and stuff like that.
But yes, I will see if I can find some more places to cram in more details.
3435539 Ok then. Well good luck on the story.
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Well, what exactly are you confused about? It will help me out in my editing.
Hey, so far, so good.
I like it! You should keep up the good work!
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
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Not yet, but I'll keep it in mind if this gets popular enough.
Dude, You better update soon that was amazing!
3439395 ARE LUNA, FLUTTER, AND RD ALIVE
and celestee
And pinkie(deadpool/big al)
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That is all I will say.
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wat about now
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
wat
ahhh damn it I was actually thinking of doing something like this.
well played, good sir.
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question though, was it inspired at all by
Because if not I still may do this
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To answer your question, no, it's not. I know because I'm his brother, and know what the story is about.
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That's where I got the name, and their may be some similarities, but it is not entirely based off that clip.
Isn't also based off an anime scene?
Ha, I thought you were using "Tartarus" as a euphemism to avoid cussing. Guess all that went out the window with Gilda, lol.
Just the description makes me want to CRY!
"When friendship was magic" that's where I wanted to tear up!:(
I enjoyed it quite a bit, though the way all the paragraphs are mashed together..... It does make it more of an effort to get through. Now on to the next chapter
OK, you have me. Bring it on brain! bring it on!
Will we at least get to know if we find out what they mean later on?
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In time, my good reader, in time.