A soul is a powerful and fragile part of you, a part that goes unnoticed and unappreciated by most. It’s a crucial part of every living being, but a lot can happen when you got two.
2415166 thank you for pointing out the grammar and spelling mistakes^^ ill get on it. as for why a human instead of a pony or something different, that becomes more obvious later on. dont want to spoil anything in the comments. but if you really want to know i can pm you. as for the dragon with hair and stuff, i thought it was a little obvius but he is not a pure dragon, more of a half dragon.
“Ooh, I'd suck a fart out of her ass.” That sentence caught me completely off guard. He took a couple of more steps before he noticed that I weren’t following him anymore. I was simply standing there giving him the best `WTF` look I could manage. “…” “…” “…” The awkward silence lasted for a minute before I could actually muster up a reply. “I don’t think I would”
my mind hit auto and i said "well im with Zoro on this one, personally i think shes very fanantically pleasing" (if anyone didnt catch it, its from None piece (aka. One Piece Abridged)) well done good sir.
let me guess when he Wakes up next morning all of his wounds will be gone and his wings grown back, just so that everypony (including celestia) freaks out. that would be a lovely turn of events
2415351You cheeky bastard.You've been spying haven't you? Because so far the half-dragon in this story sounds exactly like the half-dragon in my story, only this one has silver scales and mine has red.
Also, I noticed you made a few mistakes in your chapters. Would you be okay with an editor? *hint hint* <--
So if he's been out of it for +200 years (plus who knows how long when he was caged up in the lab), doesn't that mean that "Charlie" is LOOOONG since dead? Humans generally don't last centuries, after all...
LoL
hhmmm wonder what will happen next with the human turned dragon that cant fly but can eat any form of metal and possibly minerals.
that ending
great work
2412221
thanks^^ great to hear it
He looks so grumpy, you know what I think? He needs a hug.
Question. We're you spying on me that one time I got drunk? Because this is exactly like it. Minus the ninja spiders, of course.
2414351
no, no of course not
abandon mission, we have been discovered
fuck yes
NEED MOAR SO GOOD KEEP WRITING........or I will kill you
How fucking ironic!
Damn this was fucking giggles, shits, and laughs!
2415166
thank you for pointing out the grammar and spelling mistakes^^
ill get on it.
as for why a human instead of a pony or something different, that becomes more obvious later on. dont want to spoil anything in the comments. but if you really want to know i can pm you.
as for the dragon with hair and stuff, i thought it was a little obvius but he is not a pure dragon, more of a half dragon.
“Ooh, I'd suck a fart out of her ass.”
That sentence caught me completely off guard. He took a couple of more steps before he noticed that I weren’t following him anymore. I was simply standing there giving him the best `WTF` look I could manage.
“…”
“…”
“…”
The awkward silence lasted for a minute before I could actually muster up a reply.
“I don’t think I would”
my mind hit auto and i said "well im with Zoro on this one, personally i think shes very fanantically pleasing"
(if anyone didnt catch it, its from None piece (aka. One Piece Abridged))
well done good sir.
2415356
you found my little reference
here, have a stashe
let me guess when he Wakes up next morning all of his wounds will be gone and his wings grown back, just so that everypony (including celestia) freaks out. that would be a lovely turn of events
“Ooh, I'd suck a fart out of her ass.”
suck a fart out of her ass
fart out of her ass
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WHHHHHHAAAAAATTTTT!?
2415351You cheeky bastard.You've been spying haven't you? Because so far the half-dragon in this story sounds exactly like the half-dragon in my story, only this one has silver scales and mine has red.
Also, I noticed you made a few mistakes in your chapters. Would you be okay with an editor? *hint hint* <--
Best way to give a name.
This Razor Dash character, I'm starting to like him.
So if he's been out of it for +200 years (plus who knows how long when he was caged up in the lab), doesn't that mean that "Charlie" is LOOOONG since dead?
Humans generally don't last centuries, after all...