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damn i want more of this, keep up the good job :D
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thanks man glad you enjoyed it.
chapter 3 is already finished and will be up tomorrow^^
2406027 Seconded!
i'm willing to give this chance
An axe, heh? I might keep this idea for later.
Hmmmm... the first two chapters feel really rushed and there are a few errors here and there... but I can't really find any other problems beyond that. Still not completely invested in our 'hero' yet either, but I think that will change as we get to learn more about him. Good work so far! Keep it up
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thanks for the honest opinion, makes it easier to know what i need to work on^^
Didn't even get to experience the joy of flight...bummer....anyways this is pretty good way to do HiE.
Well, that definitely sounds uncomfortable...
pretty good story i hope it wont take a long time to pump out chapters.
Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore and.... MORE GADANGIT MORE NOWWWWW
I give it ten outta ten.... Plus, ill look forward to reading it before winning a spelling bee
I love dragons and I'm really glad u put thru the prospective of one. U have inspired me!
GOD HOW DO I GIVE THIS 100 THUMBS UPS WTF (destroys computer) 
AAHHGGGG
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hehe glad you liked it. there is a lot more to come. releasing another big chapter tomorrow and number 4 is already well in the works
Also how do I write chapters in my books? I wanna put that question...... I'm writing on my iPad, so.....
help?
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Oh no trouble at all
I can't tell you how FRUSTRATED I was while writing my own fic, because for the longest time I had no one critiquing me. It made me feel like I wasn't worth their time... that the story was BEYOND redeemable
Needless to say, someone critiqued me eventually and it inspired me to improve myself. The rest is history
Everyone deserves an honest opinion of their work. Just doing my part to spread the (sometimes tough) love
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first you need to add a new story, then you can start adding new chapters and writing in/for them. think thats it. if not the FAQ answers all your questions.
now i can hear my bed threatening to eat my cat if i dont go to sleep. peace out
Lol I
cats I has two cutest things ever. Goodnight! 
To be honest I was a little bit leery of this story, but I'm glad to report that my worries were unfounded! Awesome story, looking forward to when we get some more background on our enigmatic protagonist. Who's Charlie? Based on the little info we have, (she's female, the protagonist made a promise to her) I'm going to assume that she's possibly either a young girl, maybe a little sister or something similar, a fellow inmate at this charming-sounding laboratory or perhaps a lover, past or present. Also high on the anticipation scale is when he goes through the obligatory training montage do he can be sufficiently badass! Eagerly awaiting more!
I'll be back later and give my thoughts of this, in the meantime sleep.
Can make it so he can fly again pweeease?
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he wont get his wings back
that dosent mean i dont have a thing or two up my nonexistent sleeve tho
2410116 sad news
But I wonder what you're thinking of
Is this the best? No. But is this good? yes!
ill be waiting for future updates
LoL
hhmmm wonder what will happen next with the human turned dragon that cant fly but can eat any form of metal and possibly minerals.
that ending
great work
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thanks^^ great to hear it
He looks so grumpy, you know what I think? He needs a hug.
Question. We're you spying on me that one time I got drunk? Because this is exactly like it. Minus the ninja spiders, of course.
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no, no of course not
abandon mission, we have been discovered
Hmmmm interesting story fav looks good so far but will read on
NEED MOAR SO GOOD KEEP WRITING........or I will kill you
How fucking ironic!
Damn this was fucking giggles, shits, and laughs!
Too.
Generally people use 'is' even if it is wrong grammatically. I hate dialouge, have to skip grammar for personality...
Death is more expected here? Sounds like this lab is full of trouble.
Why the extra space? Also, Barley is a type of wheat I believe.
Sigh, Thanks only works while speaking. Again, rules of speech is annoying.
If you you added 'I think' before it would work.. But 'He clearly deserved that' would work better.
Kind of interested, but I have to ask what the point of making him human was. He could've been a pony, or he could have simply not remembered. Also, you made him a dragon. With hair.
brain.exe has crashed, do you wish to end this program? Y/N
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thank you for pointing out the grammar and spelling mistakes^^
ill get on it.
as for why a human instead of a pony or something different, that becomes more obvious later on. dont want to spoil anything in the comments. but if you really want to know i can pm you.
as for the dragon with hair and stuff, i thought it was a little obvius but he is not a pure dragon, more of a half dragon.
“Ooh, I'd suck a fart out of her ass.”
That sentence caught me completely off guard. He took a couple of more steps before he noticed that I weren’t following him anymore. I was simply standing there giving him the best `WTF` look I could manage.
“…”
“…”
“…”
The awkward silence lasted for a minute before I could actually muster up a reply.
“I don’t think I would”
my mind hit auto and i said "well im with Zoro on this one, personally i think shes very fanantically pleasing"
(if anyone didnt catch it, its from None piece (aka. One Piece Abridged))
well done good sir.
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you found my little reference
here, have a stashe
let me guess when he Wakes up next morning all of his wounds will be gone and his wings grown back, just so that everypony (including celestia) freaks out. that would be a lovely turn of events
“Ooh, I'd suck a fart out of her ass.”
suck a fart out of her ass
fart out of her ass
...
.....
.................
WHHHHHHAAAAAATTTTT!?
2415351You cheeky bastard.
You've been spying haven't you? Because so far the half-dragon in this story sounds exactly like the half-dragon in my story, only this one has silver scales and mine has red.
Also, I noticed you made a few mistakes in your chapters. Would you be okay with an editor? *hint hint* <--
Cool that is SO AWESOME!
boss chapter 13/10
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thanks a lot^^ glad you enjoyed it
oh and if you faved it i would appreciate it if you liked it
this seems to be shaping up into a good story.
I use my ' movie sense ' when I write books, so my movie sense says that jake should walk on four legs..... Also, thank you for inspiring me to make my own dragon story
Step 1 drug the griffons step 2 RULE THE WORLD