damn i want more of this, keep up the good job :D

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thanks man glad you enjoyed it.
chapter 3 is already finished and will be up tomorrow^^

2406027 Seconded!

i'm willing to give this chance

An axe, heh? I might keep this idea for later.

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thanks for the honest opinion, makes it easier to know what i need to work on^^

Didn't even get to experience the joy of flight...bummer....anyways this is pretty good way to do HiE.

Well, that definitely sounds uncomfortable...

pretty good story i hope it wont take a long time to pump out chapters.

Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore and.... MORE GADANGIT MORE NOWWWWW

I give it ten outta ten.... Plus, ill look forward to reading it before winning a spelling bee

I love dragons and I'm really glad u put thru the prospective of one. U have inspired me! GOD HOW DO I GIVE THIS 100 THUMBS UPS WTF (destroys computer) AAHHGGGG

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hehe glad you liked it. there is a lot more to come. releasing another big chapter tomorrow and number 4 is already well in the works

Also how do I write chapters in my books? I wanna put that question...... I'm writing on my iPad, so..... help?

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Oh no trouble at all

I can't tell you how FRUSTRATED I was while writing my own fic, because for the longest time I had no one critiquing me. It made me feel like I wasn't worth their time... that the story was BEYOND redeemable

Needless to say, someone critiqued me eventually and it inspired me to improve myself. The rest is history

Everyone deserves an honest opinion of their work. Just doing my part to spread the (sometimes tough) love

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first you need to add a new story, then you can start adding new chapters and writing in/for them. think thats it. if not the FAQ answers all your questions.
now i can hear my bed threatening to eat my cat if i dont go to sleep. peace out

Lol I cats I has two cutest things ever. Goodnight!

To be honest I was a little bit leery of this story, but I'm glad to report that my worries were unfounded! Awesome story, looking forward to when we get some more background on our enigmatic protagonist. Who's Charlie? Based on the little info we have, (she's female, the protagonist made a promise to her) I'm going to assume that she's possibly either a young girl, maybe a little sister or something similar, a fellow inmate at this charming-sounding laboratory or perhaps a lover, past or present. Also high on the anticipation scale is when he goes through the obligatory training montage do he can be sufficiently badass! Eagerly awaiting more!

I'll be back later and give my thoughts of this, in the meantime sleep.

Can make it so he can fly again pweeease?

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he wont get his wings back
that dosent mean i dont have a thing or two up my nonexistent sleeve tho

2410116 sad news
But I wonder what you're thinking of

Is this the best? No. But is this good? yes!
ill be waiting for future updates

There was a dirt wall before me and the way benign was blocked by thick iron bars, I was in a cell.

benign?

Couldn’t quite place my finger on witch one

which one

from a torch outside me cell

my cell

I took a deep breath and tried to pull out my inner fire bender from my stomach and.

Needs an ellipsis

“Wheeze”

He wheezed, he didn’t actually say “wheeze”

I tried a few more times but noting.

but nothing

again decent chapter, not usually I read dark stories but I read ones that have deeper plots and this has one I read really fast for some odd reason so I'll probably be finished soon, shame it's on haitus but that doesn't really bother me

Needs more pain.