Equestria. Land of ponies, of peace and prosperity. A land completely ignorant to the impending doom that looms over it, a doom that will soon envelop the world in it's destructive force. An ancient force that has waited far too long will finally get it's chance for revenge on the land that wronged it, and everypony in it. It is at times like this that Equestria must reach out to a place that is not of their world for help.
Our hero is a young man named Chris.
By some unnamed mystical force he is pulled into the world of Equestria. But he will soon learn that he was brought there for a reason, he will learn that he has a critical part to play in shaping the future of fantasy world, and his actions will either lead Equestria to prosperity...or utter destruction.
Although there are a lot oh HiE fics, this one is very ,uch better than others I've read, give or take a few mistakes. Tracked.
190801 Thanks Mobius
Glad you liked it
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Only prob;em I have, is that spacing needs a little work. Right now I'm looking at a huge wall of text.
Don't mean to be a downer after complementing you.
190827 Think nothing of it
I'll work on that in the future
I've said it before, but I love this fic. I'm not a big fan of HiE stories, but this one is really good.
Keep up the awesome writing and I'll be looking forward to future installments!
Very nice, quite the entertaining story you have going there!
Can't wait to hear more.
190991 Thank you
190978 And thank you
I'll keep the content coming, don't you worry
That last bit with the prince was golden. Don't we all fell that way?
is there going to be romance
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At one point, yes, just not right now.
I'll add the tags when appropriate
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Thank you, you can now guarantee a watch and fave from me
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You are most welcome
Enjoy!
AIM FOR THE BALLS! ..... oh wait,BLUEBLOOD AINT GOT NO BALLS!
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I applaud you, Doctor Freeman
1118283 Of course you do. IM GORDON FREEMAN! IM LIKE THE CHUCK NORRIS OF THE SCIENCE WORLD! CAVE JOHNSON AINT GOT NOTHIN ON ME! EXPLODING LEMONS?! HA! I HAVE A NUCLEAR POWERED GUN!
1118270 Amen to that brother!
1118480 and with the snap of my fingers he has twice the cannons.
After reading the first chapter, I can give you an A for writing style and grammer, but I can't exactly say for originality...
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That seems fair
I swear i hate it when bronies lies about who they are if i was there i would just tell them no lies just the truth srry for the rant but im done with some of these types of fics.....
Update!
BOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!
Wha-BAM! Take that, Blueblood. I'm digging the story so far, CC. That stuck-up prince got what was coming to him, finally. Lol.