Pinkie Pie sees and hears things that others can't. Her friends chalk up her weird behavior as just one of the eccentric pony's many quirks. But what happens when Pinkie's wild hallucinations get the better of her?
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Good story. The dialogue felt very natural and in-character. The first bit had some good funny bits. I too couldn't imagine arguing with a pony so purple
. But at the beginning I found myself wondering 'where is this going' a lot. It would probably do you some good to introduce the initial incident or the 'hook' earlier on in the story. Overall, it was an enjoyable read, but from a personal standpoint, I was hoping for something a little less 
and a little more 
. Pinkie is like my favorite and the two most ambitious fics I've read of her now have depicted her as psychotic and schizophrenic. She must be a pretty weird character to write for because of how she always seems so disconnected from reality, but at the bottom of that I don't see psychological disorder, I just see a fun-loving and carefree pony. But yea, that's just personal issues I have, nothing against your story.
Keep up the good work.
... You sir deserve a medal.
Jolly good show.
Good day.
very interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading this a lot, even if it is a bit slow to get going.
Though the lack of reference to "lesson zero" when it comes to pinkie sending the letter confuses me a bit.
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Could be set before lesson zero.
Good day.
Yeah, I'm sorry. I wrote this a while ago, actually. So I guess it takes place after season one but before season 2.
Man...I don't know what to say. Good read, definitely worth the slow start.
Howc ome the fluttershy voice in her head is kind but the others are asses
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Same reason Discord had to directly Discordify Fluttershy, rather than tricking her like he did the rest: Fluttershy is just so kind that she can't be corrupted by normal means. In fact, the only time I remember her acting unkind to a lot of Ponies of her own accord was after Iron Will's classes. Even then, it's debatable if that counts or not since there was outside influence.