[Human in Equestria]
[So if you don't like HIE's, you better not read this @_@]
This story is about a young adult by the name Lance. Just Lance. He lives quite normally, some might say boring. Lance disagrees, he thinks that life is an adventure! And indeed it is, it's just that Lance is too lazy to do something about it.
One summer though, he has his whole life turned upside-down (shocker), as he discovers a secret place that nobody else knows about. A place full of wondrous wonders, magical magic, and friendly friends!... It's Equestria, d'uh.
He gets turned into a Changeling too...joy.
[First Story BTW :3]
[Aaaaaand it's dead]
Chapters (8)
So should we sit right there, as he tells all about how he became the human of Equestria?
Expected indeed, this story was not out of the norm of EVERY SINGLE HiE EVER*.
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Riiight, and it's just the first Chapter? Are you even giving it a chance?
So he back flipped out of bed and smacked his head on the ceiling fan? Seems legit.
followin'
2407709 If there's something truly unexpected about the story, it would have been better to wait until you got to that point in the story to publish it. Let us read and see that
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this intruges me I be keeping a eye on this TO THE FOLLOW/FAV BUTTON
10 likes and a favorite for you.
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Heh, good point, but my pals forced me to publish it to see the Brony reactions. So far it's minimal, but mostly good, so I suppose I'll have to step up my game.
I'm half-expecting Lance to say "I'm a ninja" to the first guard he sees.
Instant favorite.
EHEHEH HOMO SAPIENS
seriously,the rape joke was quite grand
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MOAR!!!
This is so well written and witty. I love it.
The water coming out the holes? Priceless!
Lol,
MAKE MORE.
lol burn
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!
MAKE SEVEN ASAP
Best response ever
2490670 that pickle is dapper as fuck
I think they think he's an idiot.
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They're right
2494447 Presumably
Gahahaha!
That ending.
that ending
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This was freaking awesome loved every bit of it!!!
Update?
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Sorry man (and any other peeps who might have been interested in this story), it's just that our internet connection has been cut off for a week or so; and that made it impossible to update.
But now; I am currently in an Internet Cafe, and I will try to update most of my stories with at least one chapter each.
Update, or are you still unable?
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I'm working on it...It's just that school is being a bitch
Update?
End hiatus soon?
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...your profile picture intimidates me so...
Er, when I have time on my
hooveshands...sorry for the LONG delay.3107415
K, thanks!