• Published 23rd Apr 2013
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Rapture - CloudTwister



A Rosie Big Daddy meets his end at the hands of Jack and wakes up in Equestria. Diving suit and all.

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Comments ( 22 )

yay, a new chapter!

glad you're not dead!

Dammit, I hate cliffhangers. ZE DOCTAR REQUESTS A NEW CHAPTER ZIS INSTANT!

-The Good Doctor

I don't understand. Did he take the helmet off before they arrived, or did RD somehow manage to bust his lip inside the helmet?

Good thing he doesn't have a temper. RD is good and all at fighting but there is a line between bravery and stupidity and going up against a big daddy in his prime is the latter.
Love the new chapter, moar plz!

Rule one: Don't fuck with a big daddy, unless you have a good reson... and RD just does it any how.

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He took it off before Fluttershy woke up and saw him in it.
She just bolted because when stressed he winds up with a half-tone of the whalesong you hear the Big Daddies use in the game.
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He does have a temper its just he is more driven by things such as what does harming a citizen get you, how do I make a good impression, and since he wasnt that bad of a guy before the Fall of Rapture he inherits those traits. Rainbow does eventually find out how big of a bullet she dodges later on. but that is a story for a later date.

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Elaboration: He took it off so Fluttershy wouldnt see him in it and freak out.

now.....RAPE DA PONY'S:moustache:

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This is actually really good. Please continue this story, because this story has good potential.
Now please, continue...
Please?
Please??
Pweaze!!
Gooby, pweaze!!
But in all seriousness, PLEASE?!?

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Its gonna be only a week longer before these stories see a major update. Sorry for the delay. New computer problems.

I don't believe they had a good reason for attacking him. Sure, he scared fluttershy, but that doesn't warrant a punch to the face, just an apology. Anyway, I hope to see this story make good pigeons! And progress!

Nope he is a Rosie. Im tweaking the next chapters a bit because I couldn't get them to flow right but it should be up sometime soon.

please update don't leave me hanging

Ok. Why did Rainbow attack him?

4480858 Why did you stop?:fluttershysad:

"Who, I wonder, would be so cruel? To force a mirror upon a man who has no face."

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