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The Grimm Reaper
The Grimm Reaper is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.
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Huh, I always viewed Blueblood as being a prince in title alone and not having any real power with him not being an alicorn and all.
Still great start.
And my curiosity has been peeked ! Carry good fellow lets see where this journey takes us!
Nice work as usual, You have gained a fav
The deftones kick ass and change is my favorite song. Right next to my own summer
Ugh, a story that I will probly like. And another story that will take you forever to update.
2556578 T'is the price of a good read, i'm afraid.
2556769Dude, the length of the chapter isn't even 1.5k words long. I don't call that a good read if you never update your stories.
MOAR MOAR MOAR
well, i hope Blueblood gets the most gruesome death that can be describe in the Dead Space universe
2557570 eye stab or torn limb from limb?
both
this has a lot of potential
I liked and favorited before even reading this masterpiece.
2557995
it shall be done!
2564199 And the results will be beautiful, lol
2564300 awww yeah!
Was browsing the front page, found a dead space fic. Looked interesting.
looked over description.
Holy Shit
2564340 Yep! You've inspired someone. You my friend are the proud grandfather of this story, lol.
2564428 And proud I am
Reading one from ds3 and now I am reading one from ds2... Good luck, sir...
2564874 Which ones? I'd like to read them too, perhaps they'll give me some ideas.
You've got me curious... Please, do continue
2564340
Your story is terrible.
This story is good.
lol jks, they both suck.
If you're going to cut me then you should know, I might like it.
But seriously though. Both of your respective stories are fine.
In my personal opinion I think Twilight reverse engineering his suit and weapons is very much believable, and if you do decide to try and rewrite this again I would suggest putting that back in. However the chapter is not without flaw. After Issac escaping the Ishimura he was experiencing both homicidal and suicidal hallucinations. He would also be much more paranoid after the events he had gone through. It would make much more sense for it to take several chapters for Issac to even let Twilight come with in fifty yards of himself without threat of killing her or himself. Plus Twilight is logical even to a point of fault. Even with a month of observation on Issac she would be much more careful to enter the room, and interact directly. Especially considering he showed up in a alien space ship wearing brown suit caked with blood and guts. So I would suggest a rewrite of this chapter bringing back the advanced technology and improving the interaction between Twilight and Issac
I liked the chapter more then the last but i think it would be possible to reverse engineer his stuff to an existent , they could have made prototypes and designs that could work but can't without power meaning Issac would have to invent electricity and complete them(Ie: a Plasma Cutter without the ability to shot and can't rotate stuff like that. And he was also on the verge of suicide and was in a homicidal/ insane rage when they found him in the second game. What i would have done was make a chapter where it shows what happened to the guards(maybe with Shining Armour being the only survivor or something) and 1 to 3 chapters of Twi/ Blue Blood/ Spike and the princesses arguing over whether to keep him or kill him, him going insane and trying to hurt others, him screaming about what happened but unaware there watching him, show what it's like from his view point, them trying to build his stuff, them trying to talk to him and Luna seeing his thoughts though dreaming or something. Just my 2 bits
IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WE ARE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WE ARE. THE GEARS OF WAR!!!!
CAPS LOCK GALORE BITCHES!!!!!!
There here...
Which means they're everywhere...
Grab a weapon...
FOR EVERYONE...
2564340 just to clarify, when you say front page, do you mean it was featured or just new story?
I have one word for this:
shit
3045034 shit as in 'oh shit!' or 'this is shit!'?
3045707 as in oh shit
i love this story cant wait for more
i guess twilights guards are like black watch?? "when we hunt we kill no one is safe nothing is sacred we are willing to burn our own to hold the red line we are the last line of defence the last line to ever hold WE ARE BLACK WATCH"??
Okay you captured my interest kind sir! Let us make haste in reading this story!
I hacked dead space today and now the laser for my Plazma cutter is a rainbow and everything is blue
GET BACK TO WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want the story to continue
3045707 hey y r u no continue?????
hay continue it this is a good story