• Member Since 12th Nov, 2012
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CloudTwister


What can I say Im a brony, and a truly good one at that. I want The earth to be like Equestria one day and that is my life goal.

Comments ( 55 )

Interesting. FOR THE FIRST TIME! FIRST TO COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i haven't read it yet, but i was trying to look for a big daddy in Equestria. Hope this turns out good. :raritywink:

Fuck yes. Long ago since we had a good bioshock crossover. Looking forward to the next chapter

This is great so far! Keep up the good work :rainbowkiss:

Holy sweet waffle powered laser potato this is beautiful.

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Rejoice my friend. You have beaten Regidar to first post.
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Allow him to have his moment. Then crush him later.
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I would but I just dont have the Artistic talent to draw this. I have people on it as we speak though... Hopefully.

the great and allmighty fugly duckling has deemed this worthy of his most valuable time

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I would say something similar but nobody knows me...
Oh well, like.

not too bad, a few spelling errors, but it's still worth the read

A bio shock crossover is long overdue. Tracking this like no ones business. Just don't fall through like the first bioshock crossover I read did! Keep up the incredible work!

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Editor is nonexistant.
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I will try to keep things to this level if not better. Its mostly just how this guy gets used to being there and all the little quirky things that happen in Equestria.

I knew Jack never wanted to really hurt Big Daddies. :pinkiesmile:

May I put this in my group?

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I have been looking at that one. I like it

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I really hated killing them so I really made it so it was swift and hopefully somewhat less painful. I went around and bought a whole load of proximity mines and made big daddy bombs. But that for an opening would have been something I would have had to turned into that Cowboy Bebop episode where Spike leapt from the window. or something like this

And I just dont wanna do something like that.... Yet anyways.

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I currently working on it. I swear im not slacking and hitting on girls over the internet.

2519716 ...Right:ajbemused:

While I have your attention, how do you intend to address the issue brought up in Bioshock 2? The one about how a Big Daddy will die if separated from it's Little Sister for too long?

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Well What I am showing is the regression of most of his augments. He is still somewhat bigger than Big Macintosh but he isnt grafted to the suit and he does still have a connection but since it was severed when Jack cured the sister his genetic abnormality was killing him. Plus the fact of being pulled through Dimensions tends to do things to you. I will leave at this, he is no longer protecting a single little one.

Are you still alive? If you are, could you please get the next chapter done soon?

cool keep it up and jake is good? yes?:eeyup::twilightsmile:

Sorry everyone, Working on the story everytime I have some ever dwindling free time. I am working on it tonight. Sorry expect it in a couple of days. Probably friday so I can do the mass upload. Sorry for all the trouble, life caught up with me.

yay, a new chapter!

glad you're not dead!

Dammit, I hate cliffhangers. ZE DOCTAR REQUESTS A NEW CHAPTER ZIS INSTANT!

-The Good Doctor

I don't understand. Did he take the helmet off before they arrived, or did RD somehow manage to bust his lip inside the helmet?

Good thing he doesn't have a temper. RD is good and all at fighting but there is a line between bravery and stupidity and going up against a big daddy in his prime is the latter.
Love the new chapter, moar plz!

Rule one: Don't fuck with a big daddy, unless you have a good reson... and RD just does it any how.

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He took it off before Fluttershy woke up and saw him in it.
She just bolted because when stressed he winds up with a half-tone of the whalesong you hear the Big Daddies use in the game.
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He does have a temper its just he is more driven by things such as what does harming a citizen get you, how do I make a good impression, and since he wasnt that bad of a guy before the Fall of Rapture he inherits those traits. Rainbow does eventually find out how big of a bullet she dodges later on. but that is a story for a later date.

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Elaboration: He took it off so Fluttershy wouldnt see him in it and freak out.

now.....RAPE DA PONY'S:moustache:

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This is actually really good. Please continue this story, because this story has good potential.
Now please, continue...
Please?
Please??
Pweaze!!
Gooby, pweaze!!
But in all seriousness, PLEASE?!?

Wait did jack want to harvest the little sister or save her?

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Its gonna be only a week longer before these stories see a major update. Sorry for the delay. New computer problems.

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Let's just fucking hope he fucking saves her cause fuck me, every playthrough I had of the game I always save them.

I don't believe they had a good reason for attacking him. Sure, he scared fluttershy, but that doesn't warrant a punch to the face, just an apology. Anyway, I hope to see this story make good pigeons! And progress!

Are you sure this isn't an Alfa Series?
:rainbowhuh:

Nope he is a Rosie. Im tweaking the next chapters a bit because I couldn't get them to flow right but it should be up sometime soon.

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