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This is so win I can't contain it. Good job, sir.
I feel so evil for loving the premise of this, will definitely read later.
Why... why am I favoriting this? I... I don't even... No. Don't click the star... Brain! STAHP!
2704381 lucas2012infos.files.wordpress.com/2011/09/cheney_and_bush_borgs_resistanceisfutile1_490x495.jpg
Okay, where is that favorite and thumb up button?
Bob! Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!
Take that evil tyrannical Celestia.
Rejoice, Celestia. Your wish will finally come true. You wanted to save humanity from itself and here at last is your opportunity to do just that. I sincerely wish you the best of luck.
The first two chapters are quite short, but you're writing's detailed enough to pass. fluidly descriptive.
Give our characters (mainly Celestia and Luna) some backstory or at let least some characterization. Why do they detest humans? Why does Luna help her sister (because frankly, I've only seen Celestia as the tyrant in most of these kinds of TCB fics)? Give the characters personalities and the chapters some length and this may very well please me.
2704747*Spoiler: Celestia is secretly insane.
i really dont like the idea of celestia forceing every human to become ponys mainly because i hate it when people do whatever they want and get away with it just because of who they are however i will wach for now its good so far :) (i wouldnt mind too much if she got a penalty or if something bad happend to her like looseing a freind or something just because she decided to convert humanity)
please make the zombies L4D zombies
this'll give the ponies a reason to run
ahh now bob will join the undead. how ironic for the foolish ponies.
2704768 is she insane because she has lived too long?
2704928...I haven't got that far. All I know is she's insane.
It would be awesome to have them be like World war Z zombies. Piling over each other to get to their prey. A literal wall of Zed. The Humans barely held them off for months with guns. Spears will be nothing...
2705212nine-tenths of the human race has been infected + noise made by Equestria appearing = screwed ponies.
ill keep an eye on this for now...
2705279 I was thinking 100%, like if they didn't fight back the undead and died after 90 days. I was wanting to see the mane six act as generals or something and die horrible painfull deaths. Not every fic can be sunshine and rainbows. It is also guts, blood, and lot and lots of corpses. Both the shambling and fully dead...
this seems pretty good, however, I'd try to make the chapters a little longer.
You truly know the deffenusion of insanity
Hit the zombie with a ponification potion.
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Another note/critic
Hi this is andmos and I will today write a critic of my first impression of this story.
First and formost, the chapters are to small for my taste. A "normal" length of a chapter is about 3000 words. A way to deal with that many words is to express yourself more. Namely describe more. Answer questions of what, how and when.It will help you more and your story will be longer.
Some character development are needed in your story, even if the plot is about TCB universe. Explore the plot more and try to figure out what you want your characters to develop into. I don't see any of that. (Maybe be course I am singled minded)
That's all for now, I will take my time off to do a proper critic once this story is done. Cheers.
2705893Blame my ADHD
damn i watched this fic just yesterday and over night it got double the amount of likes good job
2706991 No offense, but nothing is forcing you to hit Publich. You could have waited to make longer chapters, since you don't have to write an entire chapter at one sitting.
zombies 1
ponies 0
go zombies go!
well I do hate zombies.
but for this one time I will change my mind on that matter >:)
Hmm...
Humans & Ponies: +2
Zombies: +1
The Conversion Bureau: -2
Total intrigue: 1
Well, there's no reason to not read this...
You know if the TCB Celestia teleported in the halo universe instead. They would not last a day.
2798459I was going to do that after this.
Lemme guess: got button-happy and ended up hitting "publish" instead of "edit"?
2823115 oh badassgrunt did add another chapter, check the feed....its just password protected for some odd reason....
2827232 If it's not up for public view, it's not posted.
Quick nitpick
It's sergeant.
2823115Yep...
With a infected Pony could grow the zombie horde, the barrier being completely useless to protect them from the Pony zombies. Sending Equestria also into a zombie apocalypse.
please continue this story, please continue this story, please continue this story......
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2914155Don't worry, just going through a slow phase.
With a undead apocalypse, who wants to be ponified?
3300476 In Celestia's festering mind, most everyone alive, and even the zombies.
3300850
That means...Ohohohoho, Equestria gets a taste of the zombie apocalypse.
I rather fight to remain human than be a pony. We could co-exist as long as they don't try to change us
You know what would be sick? If Equestria had already arrived on the planet prior to the apocalypse, but fell with the rest of the world. That would make my inner zombie-fan squeal in delight.
This reminds me of this game
There are 3 different M1's. The M1 Garand, M1 Carbine and M1A. The M1 Carbine and M1A are magazine fed while the M1 Garand is fed by an enbloc clip which automatically ejects after 8 rounds. M1 Garand is .30-06, Carbine .30 Carbine, M1A .308/7.62x51 NATO.
3300966 i agree
Bob? There's always a 'Bob' amongst the fancy or meaningful names. What's his special talent: a master at bobbing for apples?