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Bendy
I like big ponies and I cannot lie.
Bendy
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Thanks for fixing the worst story series on fimfiction.
2717913
You're welcome.
I personally like a few of them, but that's my opinion.
mkay
Pinkie Pie is 500 feet tall and Celestia grows 5 feet tall? That's a bit disappointing...
2717913
oh you and your sense of fixing stuff
Okay.
...?
2718017
That was error on my part. She's now 500 feet tall.
2718017 effectively resetting that awful story type counts as fixing in my book.
2718028
"unexpected silly help" = "effectively resetting"
Can't say I agree... after all this is a two-, maybe three-line joke with some contextual exposition on top.
2718059 Well it did end up with the timeline being fixed so non of it ever happened. That sounds like fixing it to me.
o.o...
*stands up and just walks away*
That just made every Anti-conversion Bureau person's day.
The quality of writing is around the same as that of a normal TCB fic, but the plot is a thousand times better and makes far more sense.
2718437
You're welcome!
Just in case anyone was wondering is Pinkie Pie Prime is a based off Liberty Prime from Fallout.
2718798
I was inspired by the few stories which have some good Ponies fighting for Humans against The Conversion Bureau.
A parody or deconstruction is no excuse for murdering the English language.
2720768. Well, I am poorly educated. Bad englush makes it butter. Also I'm a slow learner.
2720361. Yes, maybe that's how it happened. XD
I like Anti-Conversion Bureau stories, and I enjoy comedies, but the writing of this is...
...not so good.
2725635
Well, I having Asperger's Syndrome and dyslexia plus going to a special school when I was a kid may lead to me being a bad writer, and the fact I was completely illiterate till about the age of 15.
In other cruder and meaner words, you could call me retarded.
2725724 If those are a problem, an editor can help with that. I have aspergers as well.
Pacific Rim in a nutshell.
2725798
It seems the grammar is what people hate in this story. Or is it something else?
Even if I got an editor, I doubt it would improve the rating of this story. Just by how stupid it is.
2727708
Hah, I just Goggled that!
Yeah, no giant Robot Ponies to save the Human race though.
2731362 It's kinda like it, except.
The aliens have a giant robot.
So what does 'Murica do?
THEY BUILD A BIGGER ROBOT.
2731362 Grammar is a huge issue in this story.
..... wat did i just read....
The last two lines.
Uhhhh AMERICA yay
Just going to pretend I never read this and go cry in a cornor
Celestia's expression on the cover art says "Oh Shit...".
Also, does the ending mean that Pinkie Pie Prime got Liberty Prime's big metal- I'm stopping here.
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what?
Dafaq did I just read?
That is how every story on fimfiction should end.
And mankind collectively just scratched the back of their head's and muttered 'what the hell?'
...well that happened
Twist ending
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Also, Pinkie Pie Liberty Prime?
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Why are your sex scenes so short man. Give me something to fap to man.