Wow I never thought I would say this but poor Silverspoon. Hope that the CMC can pull her out of her emo funk. ~Celestia's Paladin

Interesting! I'd like to read more of this!

You might have something going here! Nopony should be without a friend, after all!

You have an interesting idea, and the writing is there, but you need to have someone look over your work before you post.

There's a number of jarring errors in the  work, which is a shame, because conceptually it's an interesting story.

You have an interesting idea, and the writing is there, but you need to have someone look over your work before you post.

There's a number of jarring errors in the  work, which is a shame, because conceptually it's an interesting story.

Good chapter, so thing seem to be looking up for Silverspoon then. One pony wanting to befriend her and another that might just as well. ~Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera

>>58205820

Hey! That's my job! I've been doing this for under 24 hours and you're already looking for a replacement?

>>60436043

Noooo that was before you enlisted silly filly! Look at the date.

>>60446044

Juuust found out I can delete comments!

Great chapter, so Silverspoon is still trying to find herself. Good for her, hope it works out and Diamond doesn't come back and derail everything. Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera

w00t another great chapter! Silver Spoon is becoming more and more likable.

Nice work with the new editor. The story is way cleaner, and outside of a few present/past tense errors it's coming along nicely.

Bumping up my star rating for one. Two, I'm kinda hoping Diamond does come back and mess everything up, seeing how change is interesting, and it'd be nice to see Spoon have to decide what would make her happy on her own.

>>60676067

Thank you verrrrry much! It's what I'm aiming to do.

would like moar ratings please! So I can get a general feel of how I'm doing! Please and thank you!

Aww, poor little silver spoon.All she needs is some friends.

HNNNNNNNG!

AWWW I feel sorry for poor maid. Isn't she that 'unfortunate family member that becomes servant'? I hope Silverspoon will apologize to August Hoof....

Another great chapter. Silver Spoon's family reminds me a little of the Hyuuga family in Naruto.

I demand more of this :3! It is funny and also nice to see one prissy pony not so prissy anymore ^^ Lets see what you do with how this is going 83

>>76717671 uhh...

Methinks that's the "HNNNNNNNNG!" of "Celestia's BEARD! That was ADORABLE!"

>>78647864 YAR!!!

Nice! I can't believe I forgot to add this one to the email tracking option! That has been corrected.

Here's to reading more soon!

No matter what, Silver Spoon will always deserve it in my opinion. Diamond Tiara is a lot worse though, she deserves to be executed.

>>1042510425 execution, execution, EXECUTION! They are just fillies! why?

Oh boy I have a bad feeling this won't end well.... I guess it is the ultimate test for Silver Spoon then, side with her new friends or her old.

Diamond Tiara is going to have a hard time dealing with Silver Spoon's new friends...

>>1042510425

Why would you do this!?

This is what happens when you move and don't stay in touch.  Let's hope Silver Spoon stays strong in the face of adversity.

Oh boy...

Wow... 1700+ views... 4.8 stars. Thank you sooo much everypony! I NEVER would have DREAMED this would go over so well. I only hope I canstill live up to expectations.

I must admit that the story is very good and funny :3 I usually read mostly lengthy stories but this one, even being short, is of my liking :3 You should keep it up ^^

>>1269012690I most certainly will.

So she is now an official CMC, good for Silver Spoon and Twist. Cutie Mark Crusaders forever, and hopefully not even Diamond Tiara won;t break them up.

Silver Spoon is becoming more and more awesome!

>>1559215592 I do so love that filly! her and Sweetie Belle. And I'm glad to share the way I see her with you all! And I do very much appreciate your support all of you give me.

I have to give you props for writing Silver Spoon in a manner that allows her to be fleshed out as something more than a mere bully and tag-along to Diamond Tiara. Though I have my worries for how Tiara's visit will go... I also have a sense of lament for Tiara, it would appear that her feelings for Silver Spoon border on obsession and I can't imagine that it will go well for her to see Silver Spoon doing so well with the other CMC's, though I'm probably reading to deeply into that snippet from the last chapter.

>>1676716767well, you will have to wait and see! if you do want to learn more, send me a PM.

>>1786717867thank you so much for the picture Kibby!

Here we are

Face to face

A couple of silver spoons!

We're hopin to find

We're two of a kind

Make it a goal

Make it a goal!

>>1863818638hahahahah!

UN.BE.LIEVEABLE...3000 views! thanks SOOOOO much. Y'all!

Hmm... i'll admit i didn't think this would hold my interest past chapter two, but i was pleasantly surprised. Keep up the good work.

hmm... the mods need to add an emote where it's a fluttershy  smile, not over-the top...

I'm loving this story!

Is this Bon Bon supposed to be same background Bon Bon? Because not to be rude, she's not green.

>>2074620746was debating that. Might be thinking wrong gen.

>>2074620746ah! I remember, was thinking Lyra.

>>2075020750

By the way Cool story bro (i'm not being sarcastic)

>>2076120761thanks!

Great Chapter Holly, great chapter indeed. She really is one of the Cutie Mark Crusaders now. You really are showing why this is a Slice-of-Life type of story, pace maybe slow but you are allowing us to see Silver's growth as a character and why Diamond Tiara will never be able to split her up from her friends. 'Cause friends are forever... FOREVERRRRRR

Celestia's Paladin

>>2091420914D'awwwee. Thanks so much CP!

Awesome bit of fun. One thing though, wasn't Silver's birthday supposed to be coming up in a few days?

>>2131121311oh, its COMING! Eheheh...

>>2142621426

it better

Hmm... I see, well I was expecting something like that. One does not forget your first real friend easily, I'm in my 20s and certainly haven't forgotten my first friend. I hope Silvy (cute name by the way) finds her way, though who shall she chose when the party comes around... I guess only you and Epona know eh Holly? Good job once again, ~Celestia's Paladin

>>3055430554Thank you very much! Though, I can't say I know an Epona.

>>3056130561

Epona, Celtic goddess of horses popular enough to be worshiped in Rome. And at least in my Equestria, creator goddess of the ponies

>>3056230562Oh! THAT Epona. I thought you meant the user, Epona.

>>3056630566

She happens for some mysterious reason looks like Lauren Faust's Alicorn self

>>3057030570Huh, never noticed that.

>>3057330573

.... ok you shouldn't, so far I'm the only one to use Epona as a goddess. Since Mrs. Faust is the creator of MLP:FiM, then Epona should look like her

>>3057630576Cool. Nice observation!

only one thing that rubed me the wrong way in this... Mer-ponies? why not sea-ponies?

Quitcher derpin Hollyfern.

>>3060830608 oh whatever Psy! :p

Also, congrats on making Featured.

>>3061230612...wow...featured...

Congrats on the feature, Jamal! My tutelage has taught you well!

>>3062730627Thanks Professor Forrester! I never...NEVER...expected...wow...

You have turned Silver Spoon into a VERY sympathetic character... and I didn't believe that was possible.

Very well written and well done!

-Checks Featured-

-Sees this-

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CONGLATURATIONS!!!

Oh wait

>>3094530945I know right!

>>3097030970 ...forever an amateur.... But then again, I've only been on a month

Both well-written and deeply sympathetic for Silver Spoon.

You've done well!

I have enjoyed this quite a bit so far. I love how you've taken a thoroughly dislikeable character and made her into someone we can sympathize with and enjoy reading about.

>>3104431044I LOVE Silver Spoon and Diamond tiara. Well the fillies in general. Twist, Sweetie Belle, all of them. Silvy just happens to be my little princess.

>>3100831008 gee, thanks!

did you make a reference to ¨the back room¨?

*LAUGHTER*

You have definitely made Silver Spoon into a sympathetic character.

And.... mmmm.... cupcakes!  (How DOES Emerald create them so quickly?)

>>3108831088

Yes he did, and I am honored for that!

I believe you are at the point where every update will put you back on the featured! Don't squander it, Jamal!

>>3107631076

Yes he did, and for that I am honored!

Interesting... Very interesting...

I knew Sweetie Belle would be willing to be friends with Silver Spoon. She's too nice, adorable, and would never hold a grudge. Yay for Sweetie Belle.  

MOAR!!!!!!!

I am honestly surprised.  I'd written off Silver Spoon as irredeemable, but you've crafted something quite lovely.  I'm definitely keeping track of this one.  

>>3137031370Thank you very much! I feel in love with her character and Diamond Tiaras f:rom the first I saw them. Really, the entire class and Miss Cheerilee.

>>3136631366Oh there will be more!

>>3133831338I always pegged her as the more understanding of the three. She's sucha sweet heart!

Okay, I just finished chapter one and I just have ine thing to say. D'AWWW. That feel. I know that so well. I spent two years of school in a similar position and I feel for silver spoon.

Now, as an editor I couldnt help but notice a grammatical error,

"Uhhh..."The pale yellow fillies eyes darted about nervously

Filly's needs to be possessive there.

Alright, now to read chapter two, and hopefully all the others.

Still loving it at chapter three, but another missed apostrophe I want to point out.

"Sweetie Belles words from Diamond Tiara’s cutecinera". Belle needs to be possessive

God I'm such a nitpicker

With this chapter, you have created a GREAT conflict between Silver Spoon's old and new friends.  This is the kind of conflict that should be on the show.

Very well done!

More awesomeness here in chapter five, and more edits

"Silver Spoon groaned as the setting evening suns gentle orange rays" suns needs an apostrophe

"The dolls gray cloth and realistic silver mane" same edit is needed on dolls.

Also, though diamond tiara is still a prissy little asshole, the fact that she has a replica of her friend made me daww so hard.

Epona is also the name of the horse that Link uses in just about EVERY Legend of Zelda game, provided that there are mounts to use first.

Curious indeed.

You deserve the 3000 views.  This story is very funny, it makes a deeper character out of a background bully, and it's well written.

I appreciate your work!

It's amazing how fanfics can change your perspective of characters. I used to dislike Silver Spoon, but now I'm warming up to her.

Very few fics can do this to me, and I'm impressed.

This story is a fantastic slice-of-life story. I'm grinning from ear to ear.

And I just marathoner through the whole thing. I feel accomplished

Small edits time

“The unicorn shuddered as something crossed her mind.           Get rid of the unnessicary quotation mark.

Not singing or you?”.        I think you meant "not singing 'for' you"

Oh also, you earned another tracker I'm loving this.

*wild applause*

You're keeping Silver Spoon real -- by keeping her friendship with Diamond Tiara.