Hi I'm Hollyfern! Aspiring doctor that tries his hoof at fanfics. I Would very much like feedback! I typically can and will write about my darling filly Silver Spoon!
COMPLETE! NOW WITH SEQUEL!Diamond Tiara has moved away to Manehattan leaving behind a lonely and friendless Silver Spoon. Depression slowly sets in, but one Cutie Mark Crusader extends the hoof of friendship. The sequel The Spoon That Refused Polish
Wow I never thought I would say this but poor Silverspoon. Hope that the CMC can pull her out of her emo funk. ~Celestia's Paladin
Interesting! I'd like to read more of this!
You might have something going here! Nopony should be without a friend, after all!
You have an interesting idea, and the writing is there, but you need to have someone look over your work before you post.
There's a number of jarring errors in the work, which is a shame, because conceptually it's an interesting story.
Good chapter, so thing seem to be looking up for Silverspoon then. One pony wanting to befriend her and another that might just as well. ~Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera
Hey! That's my job! I've been doing this for under 24 hours and you're already looking for a replacement?
Noooo that was before you enlisted silly filly! Look at the date.
Juuust found out I can delete comments!
Great chapter, so Silverspoon is still trying to find herself. Good for her, hope it works out and Diamond doesn't come back and derail everything. Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera
w00t another great chapter! Silver Spoon is becoming more and more likable.
Nice work with the new editor. The story is way cleaner, and outside of a few present/past tense errors it's coming along nicely.
Bumping up my star rating for one. Two, I'm kinda hoping Diamond does come back and mess everything up, seeing how change is interesting, and it'd be nice to see Spoon have to decide what would make her happy on her own.
Thank you verrrrry much! It's what I'm aiming to do.
would like moar ratings please! So I can get a general feel of how I'm doing! Please and thank you!
Aww, poor little silver spoon.All she needs is some friends.
AWWW I feel sorry for poor maid. Isn't she that 'unfortunate family member that becomes servant'? I hope Silverspoon will apologize to August Hoof....
Another great chapter. Silver Spoon's family reminds me a little of the Hyuuga family in Naruto.
I demand more of this :3! It is funny and also nice to see one prissy pony not so prissy anymore ^^ Lets see what you do with how this is going 83
Methinks that's the "HNNNNNNNNG!" of "Celestia's BEARD! That was ADORABLE!"
Nice! I can't believe I forgot to add this one to the email tracking option! That has been corrected.
Here's to reading more soon!
No matter what, Silver Spoon will always deserve it in my opinion. Diamond Tiara is a lot worse though, she deserves to be executed.
>>1042510425 execution, execution, EXECUTION! They are just fillies! why?
Oh boy I have a bad feeling this won't end well.... I guess it is the ultimate test for Silver Spoon then, side with her new friends or her old.
Diamond Tiara is going to have a hard time dealing with Silver Spoon's new friends...
Why would you do this!?
This is what happens when you move and don't stay in touch. Let's hope Silver Spoon stays strong in the face of adversity.
Wow... 1700+ views... 4.8 stars. Thank you sooo much everypony! I NEVER would have DREAMED this would go over so well. I only hope I canstill live up to expectations.
I must admit that the story is very good and funny :3 I usually read mostly lengthy stories but this one, even being short, is of my liking :3 You should keep it up ^^
>>1269012690I most certainly will.
So she is now an official CMC, good for Silver Spoon and Twist. Cutie Mark Crusaders forever, and hopefully not even Diamond Tiara won;t break them up.
Silver Spoon is becoming more and more awesome!
>>1559215592 I do so love that filly! her and Sweetie Belle. And I'm glad to share the way I see her with you all! And I do very much appreciate your support all of you give me.
I have to give you props for writing Silver Spoon in a manner that allows her to be fleshed out as something more than a mere bully and tag-along to Diamond Tiara. Though I have my worries for how Tiara's visit will go... I also have a sense of lament for Tiara, it would appear that her feelings for Silver Spoon border on obsession and I can't imagine that it will go well for her to see Silver Spoon doing so well with the other CMC's, though I'm probably reading to deeply into that snippet from the last chapter.
>>1676716767well, you will have to wait and see! if you do want to learn more, send me a PM.
>>1786717867thank you so much for the picture Kibby!
Here we are
Face to face
A couple of silver spoons!
We're hopin to find
We're two of a kind
Make it a goal
Make it a goal!
UN.BE.LIEVEABLE...3000 views! thanks SOOOOO much. Y'all!
Hmm... i'll admit i didn't think this would hold my interest past chapter two, but i was pleasantly surprised. Keep up the good work.
hmm... the mods need to add an emote where it's a fluttershy smile, not over-the top...
I'm loving this story!
Is this Bon Bon supposed to be same background Bon Bon? Because not to be rude, she's not green.
>>2074620746was debating that. Might be thinking wrong gen.
>>2074620746ah! I remember, was thinking Lyra.
By the way Cool story bro (i'm not being sarcastic)